内容正文:
读后续写技首
一、成长前的苦恼
(一)孤独、伤心
1.I never made friends easily,and for a time I did
little more than get on speaking terms with some
boys.
我从不轻易交到朋友,有一段时间,我只是和
一些男孩做到了能正常交流。
2.I found nothing in my pocket,a fact that seemed
like a spear piercing into my heart which started
to bleed immediately
我在口袋里什么也没发现,这个事实就像一
把长矛刺进我的心脏,心脏立刻开始流血。
(二)惭愧、嘲笑
1.A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit
the fact that I had gone to the movies and that
was the real reason why I was late.
一阵内疚感席卷了我,我不得不承认我去看
电影了,那才是我迟到的真正原因。
2.They laughed loudly with screaming words like
“What a beautiful broken watch!”
他们大声地笑着,尖叫着说类似“多漂亮的破
表啊!”这样的话。
(三)害怕、担心
1.I intentionally avoided interacting with anyone
because I was afraid they'd laugh in my face.
我有意避免与任何人互动,因为我害怕他们
会当面嘲笑我。
2.As the evening wore on,they grew increasingly/
more and more worried.
随着夜色渐深,他们越来越担忧。
二、成长中的塑造
(一)惊讶、吃惊
1.Raising her eyebrows in surprise,Mrs Rossi
froze,as if rooted on the ground.
罗西太太惊讶地扬起眉毛,僵住了,仿佛被
固定在地上了。
2.His eyes widened with surprise/astonishment
when he heard the news.
听到这个消息,他惊讶地睁大了眼晴。
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能之成长感悟
(二)希望、决心
1.Jayce looked up to him,his eyes sparkling with
hope and determination.
Jayce抬头看着他,眼睛闪烁着希望和决心。
2.The young man loved football and was
determined to hang in there,and perhaps he'd
get to play when he became a senior.
这个年轻人热爱足球,决心坚持下去,也许
他大四的时候就可以参加比赛了。
3.Determination and optimism are what it takes to
conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.
战胜恐惧和实现目标需要决心和乐观。
三、成长后的升华
(一)喜悦、兴奋
1.Hearing that,Karie grinned from ear to ear,a
wave of happiness flooding over her.
听到那句话,Karie笑得合不拢嘴,一股幸福
感涌上心头。
2.After Steve learned this satisfactory result,a
sense of joy and happiness swept over/flooded
over/crowded in him.
史蒂夫听到这个令人满意的结果后,一种喜
悦和幸福的感觉涌上心头。
(二)升华
1.It was the first time that I had truly realized the
meaning of the gift-patience.
这是我第一次真正意识到这份礼物的意
义一耐心。
2.I nodded firmly,knowing a flower of kindness
and friendship bloomed in both of our hearts.
我坚定地点了点头,深知一朵善良与友谊之花
在我们俩心中绽放。
(三)梦想
1.It's never too late to go for your dream.As long as
you grasp every opportunity and take full
advantage of it,you will stand a chance to
realize your dreams.
追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住每次机会,充分
利用机会,你就有机会实现梦想。
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2.Having experienced both success and disappointment,
I have come to appreciate the importance of
perseverance and determination in achieving my
dreams.
经历了成功和失望,我开始感悟到坚持不懈
和决心在追求梦想中的重要性。
3.As long as you have a dream,just go for it,and
never give it up easily.Your dream might not
come true in one or two days,but it will
someday.
只要你有梦想,就去追求,不要轻易放弃。你
的梦想可能不会在一两天内实现,但总有一
天会实现。
(四)自信
1.I smiled as I eventually realized the real source
of confidence.Now,I am proud of what I look
like and much happier,because I have realized
it is your personality that decides who you
truly are.
我笑了,因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来
源。现在,我为我的样子感到骄傲,而且更快
乐,因为我已经意识到,决定真正自我的是你
的个性。
2.Being surrounded by positive influences,such as
supportive friends and family,has helped me
develop a strong sense of self-confidence
身边有支持我的朋友和家人,这样的积极影
响帮助我建立了强大的自信心。
●情境应用
I.完成句子(成长前的苦恼)
1.他们在山里迷了路,只好焦急地等待救援。
Lost in the mountain,they had nothing to do but
2.他们周围的一切都被黑暗吞噬,这无疑使他
们更加绝望。
Everything around them was swallowed by the
darkness,
3.悲伤如潮水般涌来。他倒在椅子上,悲痛
欲绝。
He sank onto the chair,crying his eyes out.
4.看着他往悬崖上爬,大家都焦虑地屏住了
呼吸。
Watching him climb up the precipice,everybody
was breathless
5.由于一场事故,托尼突然陷入黑暗世界之中,
陷入了绝望。
As the result of an accident,Tony was suddenly
thrown into a world of darkness and
Ⅱ.单句写作(成长中的塑造)
1.她睁大眼睛盯着他。
2.我们太惊讶,以至于说不出话来
3.通过坚持不懈的努力和奉献,我得以发展技
能和才能,它们帮助我实现了自己的目标和
抱负。
4.随着我们成长,烦恼像夜空中的星星一样增
多,让我们感到不知所措和无助。
5.随着我年龄的增长,我意识到设定目标和通
过辛勤工作实现它们的重要性。
Ⅲ.语段表达(成长后的升华)
When I was 13,my only purpose was to
become the star on our football team,meaning
beating out Mike,the most gifted/talented player at
our school.Just before September,Mike was struck
by a car,losing his right arm.That season,I broke
all of Mike's records while he watched the home
games,for which I stood out and was named the
most valuable player.However,I often had crazy
dreams where I was to blame for Mike's accident.
One day,he said to me,“Good job!Thank you for
filling in for me."which freed me from my bad
dreams.
(虽然受伤但没有被打败,他仍然乐观并领先于
我,更像是一个领导者。毫无疑问,从那天起,
我长大了,更真实了一点。)
V.片段续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开
头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024·新高考I卷改编)
I met Gunter on a cold,wet and unforgettable
evening in September.I had planned to fly to
Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.
Due to a big storm,my flight had been delayed by
an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just
30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to
Prague.The moment I got off the plane,I ran like
crazy through the airport building and jumped into
the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter.I told him where
I was going,but he said he hadn't heard of the bus
station.I thought my pronunciation was the
problem,so I explained again more slowly,but he
still looked confused.When I was about to give up,
Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a
friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for what
seemed like a century,Gunter put his phone down
and started the car.
Finally,with just two minutes to spare we
rolled into the bus station.Thankfully,there was a
long queue(队列)still waiting to board the bus.
Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus,turned
around,and looked at me with a big smile on his
face.“We made it,”he said..
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my
wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled
out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several
单元
I.词汇评价
l.favour n.喜爱,恩惠;好意;帮助;支持vt.
favourable adj.
帮某人的忙
请求某人帮忙
in favour of
in one's favour
2.appointment n.预约;约会;委任(appoint
V.
make/have an appointment with sb.
keep an/the/one's appointment
an/the appointment失约
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times,but the card machine just did not play
along.A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I
saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment,Gunter pointed towards the
waiting hall of the bus station.There,at the
entrance,was a cash machine.I jumped out of the
car,made a mad run for the machine,and popped
my card in,only to read the message:"Out of
order.Sorry."I ran back to Gunter and told him the
bad news.I explained to him the urgency of
catching the bus,emphasizing that otherwise I
would be forced to stay overnight and buy a new
ticket the next morning.Ultimately,I suggested,"I
will return to Vienna in 4 days.If it's OK with you,
I can pay you then,with an additional 10 euros as
a gesture of my gratitude."Following an
uncomfortable pause,he simply nodded,saying,
“I agree to this arrangement and trust you.”I
thanked him with the biggest smile you can
imagine,and we exchanged contact information
before I got on the bus.
注意:续写词数应为100个左右。
Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I
called Gunter as promised.
评价
appoint sb.(as/to be)...
appoint sb.
指派某人去做某事
appointed adj.
3.dismiss v.让(某人)离开;解散;解雇;消除
dismiss sb
..因…而解雇/开
除某人
dismiss...
··去除,消除;解雇;
免职;开除
dismiss...from one's mind
4.declare vt..表明;宣称;公布(
n,
宣称;声明)
declare sb./sth.to be)...8.震动;摇晃;颠簸(使)震动;摇晃9.手帕;纸巾
词汇拓展
1.blurred 2.action inaction 3.hazy 4.division 5.maximum
6.explosion 7.urgent urgency 8.randomly 9.muddy
词块识记
1.pros and cons 2.superior to 3.take over 4.conflict with
5.turn out6.fall away7.have an urge to do sth.8.上升;升起
9.四处看看
课文预读
-(1)checked (2)experience (3)strange (4)stopping
(5)backwards (6)travelled
二、1.A2.B3.D4.C
要点探究
核心词汇
1.(1)to (2)to (3)superiority
(4)are superior to plastic bags
2.(1)取而代之(2)占上风(3)接管;接手
(4)took the machine apart
3.(1)with (2)into (3)conflict with the old traditions
4.(1)关掉(2)结果是(3)生产(4)tum in
(5)turn up (6)turn down
5.(1)fell away (2)fell over (3)fell off
(4)I fell behind in my studies
6.(1)urgent (2)to sort (3)urgency
(4)urge their children to take advantage of the opportunity
urge that their children(should)take advantage of the opportunity
7.(1)into/with (2)explosion (3)Explosive
(4)others explode into/with anger
重点句型
1.(1)It is your random act of kindness that
(2)It is with your generous help that
(3)It was not until I went through hardships that
2.(1)were broken (2)had done (3)had been
(4)as if they were the only people in the world
(5)as if he would say something/as if to say something
随堂达标
I.1.blurred 2.handkerchiefs 3.random 4.dignity
5.ladder 6.maximum 7.whereas 8.labour 9.integrity
10.superior 11.pace 12.suspended
Ⅱ.1.C2.D3.A4.B5.B6.C7.A
IlI.1.that 2.myself 3.further 4.growing 5.were being thrown
6.division 7.moments 8.to look 9.an
10.Having been stunned/Stunned
Section IV写作指导
y1.that I couldn't fall asleep too hot at night for me to So hot
was it
2.to cool down 3.flashed across the sky 4.I had read
5.and saw 6.with something in his hand
7.found that my Pad was gone 8.what I had seen
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1.seeing an alien come down through a round door
2.only to find that my Pad was gone
六、连句成篇
The Flying Saucer
It was too hot at night for me to fall asleep in the tent,so I
crawled out of the tent and walked around to cool down
Suddenly a bright light flashed across the sky and then near
my tent appeared a flying saucer,which looked just like the one
in the book I had read during the day.I quickly hid behind a
stone,seeing an alien come down through a round door.
He walked into my tent and came out with something in his
hand.The UFO then flew away.I immediately ran into my tent,
only to find that my Pad was gone.
I was so puzzled that I couldn't believe what I had seen.But
I decided that the next time the alien came,I would talk to him.
读后续写技能之成长感悟
情境应用
I.1.wait for rescue anxiously
2.which undoubtedly left them even more desperate
3.Grief/Sadness/Sorrow came in waves
4.with anxiety 5.sank into hopelessness/despair
II.1.She stared at him,with her eyes wide open.
2.We were too surprised/astonished/shocked/amazed to speak.
3.Through consistent effort and dedication,I have been able to
develop skills and talents that have helped me achieve my
goals and ambitions.
4.As we grow,troubles multiply like stars in the night sky,
making us feel at a loss and helpless.
5.As I grew older,I realized the importance of setting goals and
the value of hard work to achieve them.
IlI.Injured but not defeated,he was still optimistic and ahead of me
and more of a leader.There is no doubt that I grew bigger and a
little more real from that day on.
IV.One possible version:
Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called
Gunter as promised.We arranged to meet at the airport,and
upon our arrival,we hugged each other like long lost friends
When I gave him the extra 10 I had promised,he didn't accept.
"Buy me a beer next time you are in Vienna,he said with a
warm smile.Then we parted ways with a firm handshake and a
promise to keep in touch.Gunter's kindness had turned a
potentially disastrous evening into a memorable story I would
cherish for years to come.
思路点拨:
1.通读全文,把握原文要领
(1)体裁:记叙文
(2)故事主线和线索:①作者在一次因风暴延误的旅途
中,匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站赶最后一班去布拉格的公共
汽车。司机冈特不熟悉车站位置,通过电话求助后顺利抵
达。到达时作者却发现自己没带现金,尝试用葡萄牙银行
卡支付没有成功,而车站的取款机也故障了。作者给出解
决办法并承诺多付钱,冈特同意了。
②续写线索:作者回到维也纳—一履行承诺一—两人成
为朋友
2.细读段首句,推测故事情节
由续写段首句内容“四天后,当我回到维也纳时,我按
照承诺给冈特打了电话。”可知,可描写作者付费给冈特,并
向对方表示感激,两人成为了好朋友,此事令作者难忘。
单元评价
I.l.偏爱有利的;赞同的;给人好印象的dosb.a favour
ask sb.for a favour=ask a favour of sb.支持对某人
有利
2.任命:委派:安排:约定和某人有约赴约:守约beak
任命某人(为)…to do sth.指定的;约定的
3.for from忘记/摒除/不再考虑…
4.declaration宣布某人或某事是…for/against on
作出声明
5.卓越的:受人尊敬的把A和B区分开fom
(作为…)使自己扬名
6.上司to比…差/级别低比某人年龄小/职位低
比某人年长/职位高比某人年长/年少多少岁
7.催促;力劝;大力推荐todo极力主张…做某事
渴望做某事urgent urgency
II.1.test out 2.more like 3.or rather 4.turn around
5.after all6.ona..basis7.惊奇地8.从…摔下来
9.超过;不仅仅;非常10.pros and cons11.take over
12.conflict with13.turn out14.fall away15.上升;升起
Ⅲ.1.be+过去分i词2.to3.to be done to have been done
4.well,easily,smoothly 5.need,require,want
6.用主动形式表被动意义
IV.1.more than 2.it was ridiculous that 3.there stood
4.as if
UNIT 2 ICONIC ATTRACTIONS
Section I Listening and Speaking,
Reading and Thinking
自主预习
词汇记忆
1.joint 2.minister 3.premier 4.sponsor 5.golf 6.sample
词汇认知
1.(乐器)号2.肉贩;屠夫;刽子手3.中空的:空心的
4.坦率的:简单的5.标语:口号
词汇拓展
1.founder foundation 2.political politician 3.located
location 4.bakery 5.vibration 6.entitle 7.diver
8.freedom 9.liberation liberty
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词块识记
1.do some research on 2.refer to...as...3.major in
4.be native to 5.be in close contact with 6.personally speaking
7.feel at home 8.peak season 9.be located in/on/at/to
10.迫不及待地做某事11.由…组成12.参与;在…中起
作用
课文预读
-、1.C2.BCDA
二1.B2.B3.D4.C5.C
要点探究
核心词汇
1.(1)foundation (2)on/upon (3)without
(4)lay good foundations for our future studies
2.(1)location (2)on (3)Located at the west end of the city
3.(1)reference (2)to
(3)you(should)refer to your English dictionary you(should)
look them up in your English dictionary
4.(1)are(2)in(3)in
(4)the major concern of travelers
5.(1)with our joint efforts (2)was organized jointly
(3)joint action
6.(1)up (2)for (3)make the most of
(4)made it in record time
重点句型
1.(1)to defend (2)To keep (3)to let some fresh air in
2.(1)with (2)on (3)to whom I will turn for help
3.(1)(should)make (2)to have already succeeded
(3)to have been the first settlers
(4)to be of great benefit to us all
4.(1)what (2)that (3)that is known to us
随堂达标
I.1.butcher 2.herbs 3.hollow 4.barbecue 5.equator
6.premier 7.bakery 8.joint 9.straightforward 10.dived
Ⅱ.(-)1.C2.B3.A4.B5.A6.C
(二)1.n.基金会2.a山.简单的3.n.适合度假的地方
IlI.1.located 2.as 3.were 4.originally 5.the 6.vibrating
7.which 8.what 9.warmth 10.more
Section II Discovering Useful Structures
语法精讲
(1)hurt (2)caught (3)interested (4)inspired
三、(I)suggested(2)surrounded(3)listed
(4)fallen (5)seated (6)organised
四、(1)taken(2)left(3)understood
(4)performed (5)hidden
五、(1)supported(2)Told(3)Asked
(4)Wounded (5)Disappointed
语法精练
I.1.intended 2.panicked 3.printed 4.injured 5.dressed
6.absorbed 7.turned 8.informed 9.comforted 10.joined
11.sponsored 12.stuck 13.expected