内容正文:
Section IV
●演练佳作
你校校报英语角举办科幻故事征文比赛
请你写一个关于飞碟的故事参加比赛。内容
包括:
1.时间,地点;
2.主要情节;
3.你的感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.故事题目已经给出,不计入总词数。
●写作步骤
一、审题谋篇
体裁:科幻故事(关于飞碟的故事)
人称:第一人称
时态:一般过去时
文章结构:
开头段:交代故事背景
主体段:故事发生的过程
结尾段:我的想法和感受
二、核心词汇
1.alien n.外星人(生物);外国人a.陌生的;外
星的:外国的
2.blurred ad.模糊不清的;难以区分的
3.superior adj.更好的;占优势的;(在级别或重
要性上)更高的
4.grip vt.&i.紧握;抓紧
5.hazy adj.模糊的;朦胧的;困惑的
6.fetch v.(去)拿来;(去)请来
7.lamp n.灯;台灯
8.pace n.速度;步伐;节奏t.&i.确定速度;调
整节奏
9.division n.分开;分隔;差异;除(法)
10.ugen.强烈的欲望;冲动t.催促;力劝;大力
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l1.random adj.随机的;不可思议的n.随意
l2.maximum ad山.最大极限的n.最大量;最大
限度
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l3.explode vi.&l.爆炸;爆破
14.pros and cons事物的利与弊:支持与反对
l5.superior to比…更好;更胜一筹
l6.take over占上风;取而代之;接管;接手
l7.UFO(unidentified flying object)不明飞行物
l8.science fiction films科幻电影
l9.search the universe探索宇宙
20.artificial intelligence人工智能
2l.have a household robot拥有一个家用机器人
22.intelligent machines智能机器
23.the rapid development of information technology
信息技术的飞速发展
24.highly-civilized creature高度文明的生物
25.require continuous diligence and progress
不断的努力和进步
26.advanced devices and technology先进的设备
和技术
27.motivate us to reach for more激励着我们去追
求更多
三、话题句式
1.No one can make sure whether there is another
life existing in the universe.
没有人能确定在宇宙中是否存在另外的生命。
2.Though the scientists never saw the real aliens,I
still believe that/I am still confident that
besides human beings,other forms of life must
exist in the universe.
虽然科学家们从未见过真正的外星人,但我
仍然相信除了人类之外,宇宙中存在其他形
式的生命。
3.When intelligent machines can do the thinking,
will our brains get lazy and regress?
当智能机器可以思考时,我们的大脑会变得
懒惰、退化吗?
4.As a matter of fact,I believe the wider spread of
Al actually acts as a motivation to force us to
become more intelligent.
事实上,我相信人工智能的更广泛传播实际
上是一种动力,迫使我们变得更聪明。
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5.An intelligent robot powered by solar energy
has been designed to provide everyday
assistance.
一种以太阳能为动力的智能机器人被设计出
来提供日常帮助。
6.So many powerful functions does this robot
have that it can help us in various ways.
这款机器人有如此多强大的功能,它能以各
种方式帮助我们。
7.You can surf the Internet through the robot to
collect amounts of information.
你可以通过这款机器人上网搜集大量的信息。
8.You can rely on it that the robot can accept
voice commands
你可以放心,这款机器人可以接受语音命令。
9.The invention of this robot shows the rapid
development of science and technology of our
country.
这款机器人的发明显示了我国科学技术的快
速发展。
10.I'm firmly convinced that the robot will be a
big helper in a family,making life more
convenient.
我坚信这款机器人会成为家中的一大帮手,
让生活更便捷。
四、要点陈述
1.(一句多译)晚上太热了,我在帐篷里睡不着。
→It was so hot at night
in the tent.(so...that...)
→It was
fall
asleep in the tent.(too...to...)
at night that I couldn't fall
asleep in the tent.(倒装句)
2.我爬出帐篷,四处走动以便冷静下来。
I crawled out of the tent and walked around
3.突然,一道亮光划过天空,一个飞碟出现在我
的帐篷附近。
Suddenly a bright light
and a
flying saucer appeared near my tent
4.它看起来就像我白天读的书里的一样。
It looked just like the one in the book
during the day.
5.我赶紧躲在一块石头后面,看见一个外星人
从一个圆门里走了下来。
I quickly hid behind a stone
an
alien come down through a round door.
6.他走进我的帐篷,手里拿着什么东西出来了。
He walked into my tent and came out
7.然后不明飞行物飞走了。我立刻跑进帐篷,
发现我的平板电脑不见了。
The UFO then flew away.I immediately ran into
my tent and
8.我很困惑,我不能相信我所看到的。
I was so puzzled that I couldn't believe
五、句式升级
1.用现在分词短语作伴随状语升级句5
I quickly hid behind a stone,
2.用不定式作结果状语升级句7
The UFO then flew away.I immediately ran into
my tent,
六、连句成篇
夯基提能作业
请同学们认真完成练案[4]8.震动;摇晃;颠簸(使)震动;摇晃9.手帕;纸巾
词汇拓展
1.blurred 2.action inaction 3.hazy 4.division 5.maximum
6.explosion 7.urgent urgency 8.randomly 9.muddy
词块识记
1.pros and cons 2.superior to 3.take over 4.conflict with
5.turn out6.fall away7.have an urge to do sth.8.上升;升起
9.四处看看
课文预读
-(1)checked (2)experience (3)strange (4)stopping
(5)backwards (6)travelled
二、1.A2.B3.D4.C
要点探究
核心词汇
1.(1)to (2)to (3)superiority
(4)are superior to plastic bags
2.(1)取而代之(2)占上风(3)接管;接手
(4)took the machine apart
3.(1)with (2)into (3)conflict with the old traditions
4.(1)关掉(2)结果是(3)生产(4)tum in
(5)turn up (6)turn down
5.(1)fell away (2)fell over (3)fell off
(4)I fell behind in my studies
6.(1)urgent (2)to sort (3)urgency
(4)urge their children to take advantage of the opportunity
urge that their children(should)take advantage of the opportunity
7.(1)into/with (2)explosion (3)Explosive
(4)others explode into/with anger
重点句型
1.(1)It is your random act of kindness that
(2)It is with your generous help that
(3)It was not until I went through hardships that
2.(1)were broken (2)had done (3)had been
(4)as if they were the only people in the world
(5)as if he would say something/as if to say something
随堂达标
I.1.blurred 2.handkerchiefs 3.random 4.dignity
5.ladder 6.maximum 7.whereas 8.labour 9.integrity
10.superior 11.pace 12.suspended
Ⅱ.1.C2.D3.A4.B5.B6.C7.A
IlI.1.that 2.myself 3.further 4.growing 5.were being thrown
6.division 7.moments 8.to look 9.an
10.Having been stunned/Stunned
Section IV写作指导
y1.that I couldn't fall asleep too hot at night for me to So hot
was it
2.to cool down 3.flashed across the sky 4.I had read
5.and saw 6.with something in his hand
7.found that my Pad was gone 8.what I had seen
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1.seeing an alien come down through a round door
2.only to find that my Pad was gone
六、连句成篇
The Flying Saucer
It was too hot at night for me to fall asleep in the tent,so I
crawled out of the tent and walked around to cool down
Suddenly a bright light flashed across the sky and then near
my tent appeared a flying saucer,which looked just like the one
in the book I had read during the day.I quickly hid behind a
stone,seeing an alien come down through a round door.
He walked into my tent and came out with something in his
hand.The UFO then flew away.I immediately ran into my tent,
only to find that my Pad was gone.
I was so puzzled that I couldn't believe what I had seen.But
I decided that the next time the alien came,I would talk to him.
读后续写技能之成长感悟
情境应用
I.1.wait for rescue anxiously
2.which undoubtedly left them even more desperate
3.Grief/Sadness/Sorrow came in waves
4.with anxiety 5.sank into hopelessness/despair
II.1.She stared at him,with her eyes wide open.
2.We were too surprised/astonished/shocked/amazed to speak.
3.Through consistent effort and dedication,I have been able to
develop skills and talents that have helped me achieve my
goals and ambitions.
4.As we grow,troubles multiply like stars in the night sky,
making us feel at a loss and helpless.
5.As I grew older,I realized the importance of setting goals and
the value of hard work to achieve them.
IlI.Injured but not defeated,he was still optimistic and ahead of me
and more of a leader.There is no doubt that I grew bigger and a
little more real from that day on.
IV.One possible version:
Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called
Gunter as promised.We arranged to meet at the airport,and
upon our arrival,we hugged each other like long lost friends
When I gave him the extra 10 I had promised,he didn't accept.
"Buy me a beer next time you are in Vienna,he said with a
warm smile.Then we parted ways with a firm handshake and a
promise to keep in touch.Gunter's kindness had turned a
potentially disastrous evening into a memorable story I would
cherish for years to come.
思路点拨:
1.通读全文,把握原文要领
(1)体裁:记叙文
(2)故事主线和线索:①作者在一次因风暴延误的旅途
中,匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站赶最后一班去布拉格的公共
汽车。司机冈特不熟悉车站位置,通过电话求助后顺利抵