Unit 2 We are family 写作专项学案 2025-2026学年教科版五四制英语六年级上册

Unit 2 We are family 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“亲情相伴，家风传承”主题，围绕汤姆的大家庭生活、双胞胎兄弟的故事及中外家庭传统等核心内容，写一篇介绍自己的家庭、分享家庭故事或阐释家庭传统意义的短文，达成以下目标： 1.能正确使用本单元“家庭与亲情”相关核心词汇（如family、member、parent、brother、sister、grandpa、grandma、cousin、aunt、uncle、pet、tradition等）及短语（live with、share with、look after、take photos、prepare for、take turns、carry on、have got等）； 2.能熟练运用 have got 的肯定、否定及疑问形式，掌握 “Sb. has got ...” “Sb. hasn’t got ...” “Have you got ...?” 等句型，正确使用 “and、but、so、because” 等衔接表达； 3.能按“主题引入→核心细节（家庭构成/家庭故事/家庭传统）→感悟与践行”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“家是港湾，情暖人心”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁：家庭介绍类记叙文、家庭故事类短文或主题感悟类说明文，兼具温情性与思想性； 2.人称：第一人称（分享家庭情况、表达感受）或第三人称（描述他人家庭、阐释道理）为主； 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容：覆盖“1个核心角度（家庭构成与生活/难忘的家庭故事/家庭传统的意义）、2-3个关键细节（成员特点/故事经过/传统内涵）、1个核心感悟（家庭的价值/亲情的意义）”3个要点； ￮ 字数：80–100词，描述真实具体、故事真挚感人或感悟深刻贴切，语言符合六年级学生水平，体现对“家庭与亲情”的深度思考。 思路点拨 1.开头：明确引入核心主题（如“家庭是温暖的港湾，汤姆的大家庭充满欢乐，双胞胎兄弟的故事温情满满，这些都让我们感受到亲情的珍贵与家庭的意义” “我的家庭虽然不大，但充满爱与温暖，家人的陪伴是我成长路上最珍贵的财富” “家庭传统是代代相传的宝藏，华华家的拍照传统、安娜家的周五之夜，都藏着家人之间最深的牵挂”），用简洁句式点明核心观点（如“亲情是世间最真挚的情感，家庭是心灵最温暖的归宿；珍惜家人，就是珍惜幸福” “家庭传统承载着爱与回忆，传承传统，就是传承亲情与责任”），用引导性语言引出下文； 2.中间：若介绍家庭构成，按“家庭基本情况→成员特点→家庭生活”展开，结合家人的职业、爱好、相处模式（如一起吃早餐、庆祝生日）等细节，阐释“家庭的温暖与欢乐”；若分享家庭故事，聚焦“故事起因→经过→结果”，用具体事例（如家人的相互帮助、难忘的家庭活动）传递真实情感；若阐释家庭传统，围绕“传统内容→传承过程→核心意义”，用具体场景（如节日团聚、共同活动）支撑观点，确保有感染力； 3.结尾：分享感悟（如“家庭的意义不在于人数多少，而在于彼此的陪伴与关爱；有家人在，就有无限的温暖与力量” “家庭传统是连接家人的纽带，它让我们感受到归属感，也教会我们责任与爱”）或表达行动意愿（如“我会珍惜与家人相处的时光，主动关心家人，传承家庭的美好传统” “我会用心记录家庭的点滴，用爱守护这个温暖的港湾，让亲情永远保鲜”），呼应单元“We are family”的核心主题，传递“珍爱亲情，守护家庭”的积极态度。 写作模板（逐段拆解） 模板一：家庭介绍——我的温暖小家（My Warm Little Family） 第一段：主题引入与家庭定位 基础句式：I have got a happy family. There are [数字] people in my family—my dad, my mum, my [兄弟姐妹] and me. We live together and love each other very much. 示例：Home is the warmest place in the world. I’m lucky to have a loving family. Although it’s not big, it’s full of joy and warmth. 第二段：核心细节与成员描述 基础句式：My dad is a [职业]. He is kind and hard-working. My mum is a [职业]. She likes cooking and always makes delicious food for us. I have got a [兄弟姐妹]. He/She is [年龄] years old. We often play together and share our secrets. We haven’t got any pets, but we have got a big garden where we plant flowers. 示例：My dad is a teacher. He often helps me with my homework and takes me to play basketball on weekends. My mum is a doctor. She is very busy but always cares about our health. I have got a twin sister named Lily. We look the same and have the same hobbies—drawing. We share a bedroom and often draw pictures together. We have got a pet dog called Lucky. It’s part of our family. 第三段：感悟总结与家庭意义 基础句式：I love my family very much. We always support each other. Family is the most important thing in my life. I will cherish the time with my family and be a good child. 示例：Living with my family makes me feel happy and safe. Whenever I have problems, my family is always there for me. Family teaches me love and responsibility. I will work hard to make my family proud and love them forever. 模板二：家庭故事——难忘的家庭时光（Unforgettable Family Time） 第一段：经历引入与背景铺垫 基础句式：I have many unforgettable memories with my family. One of the most special ones is [事件], which made me feel the warmth of family. 示例：Last year, my family had a special trip to my hometown. It was a wonderful experience that I will never forget. 第二段：经历细节与过程描述 基础句式：During the trip, my grandpa showed us around his farm. We picked fresh vegetables and fed the chickens. My grandma cooked delicious traditional food for us. In the evening, we sat together and listened to my grandpa’s stories about his childhood. My sister and I played games in the yard. We laughed a lot and took many photos to record the happy moments. 示例：It was my grandma’s 60th birthday. My parents and I prepared a big surprise for her. We decorated the house with balloons and flowers. My dad cooked grandma’s favorite dishes, and I made a birthday cake with my mum. When grandma saw the surprise, she was very moved. We sang the birthday song together and shared the cake. My aunt and uncle also came, and we had a big family dinner. 第三段：经历感悟与收获 基础句式：This experience made me realize how important family is. The love and companionship of family are the most precious gifts. I will always remember this happy time and cherish every moment with my family. 示例：That day, I saw the smile on grandma’s face and felt the love between family members. It told me that family gatherings are the best way to pass love. I hope we can have more such happy moments together. Family is the harbor that always supports us. 模板三：主题阐释——家庭传统，爱的传承（Family Tradition, Inheritance of Love） 第一段：价值引入与核心意义 基础句式：Every family has its own traditions. They are not just habits, but the inheritance of love and responsibility. My family also has a special tradition that I cherish very much. 示例：Family traditions are like precious treasures passed down from generation to generation. They record the love and memories of the family and make us closer to each other. 第二段：价值阐释与细节支撑 基础句式：Our family tradition is [传统内容]. Every [时间], we all get together to [具体活动]. For example, every Spring Festival, we gather at my grandparents’ home. My mum and aunt prepare the dinner, my dad and uncle clean the house, and the children play games. After dinner, we watch the Spring Festival Gala and give red envelopes to each other. This tradition has lasted for many years. 示例：Like Huahua’s family, my family also has a photo tradition. Every year on National Day, we go to the park to take a family photo. We have got more than 10 photos now. Every time we look at these photos, we can remember the happy moments we spent together. Another tradition is that every Sunday evening, we have a family meeting to share our stories of the week. It helps us understand each other better. 第三段：感悟与行动呼吁 基础句式：Family traditions are very important. They make our family more united and let us feel the sense of belonging. I will continue to inherit this tradition and pass it on to the next generation. 示例：Family traditions are the soul of the family. They carry love, memories and responsibility. Let’s cherish our family traditions, participate in family activities actively, and let the love and warmth of the family last forever. 范文 We are Family: Love and Warmth Around Me Family is the most important part of my life. I have got a happy family with five members—my dad, my mum, my little brother, my grandma and me. We live together and share every happy and difficult moment. My dad is a postman. He is hard-working and often tells us interesting stories about his work. My mum is a doctor. She is kind and cares about our health very much. My little brother is 6 years old. He is cute and likes playing with me. My grandma is good at cooking. She always makes delicious food for us. Every evening, we have dinner together and talk about our day. On weekends, we often go to the park to play games. We have got a pet rabbit. Its name is Snowball, and it’s like a little member of our family. I love my family deeply. The love and companionship of my family make me feel warm and safe. Family teaches me to be kind and responsible. I will cherish the time with my family, help them do housework, and study hard to make them proud. I believe our family will be happier and happier. 范文中文翻译 我们是一家人：身边的爱与温暖 家庭是我生命中最重要的部分。我有一个幸福的五口之家——爸爸、妈妈、弟弟、奶奶和我。我们住在一起，分享每一个快乐和困难的时刻。 我的爸爸是一名邮递员。他工作很努力，经常给我们讲他工作中有趣的故事。我的妈妈是一名医生。她很善良，非常关心我们的健康。我的弟弟6岁了，他很可爱，喜欢和我一起玩。我的奶奶擅长做饭，她总是给我们做美味的食物。每天晚上，我们一起吃晚饭，聊聊各自的一天。周末，我们经常去公园玩游戏。我们还有一只宠物兔子，它叫雪球，就像我们家的小成员一样。 我深深地爱着我的家人。家人的爱和陪伴让我感到温暖和安全。家庭教会我要善良、有责任感。我会珍惜和家人在一起的时光，帮他们做家务，努力学习让他们骄傲。我相信我们的家会越来越幸福。 素材积累 核心短语 live with 和……住在一起 share with 与……分享 look after 照顾；照料 take photos 拍照 prepare for 准备 take turns 轮流 carry on 传承；继续 have got 拥有 family tradition 家庭传统 family gathering 家庭聚会 special trip 特别的旅行 birthday party 生日派对 Spring Festival Gala 春节联欢晚会 red envelope 红包 family meeting 家庭会议 play games 玩游戏 do housework 做家务 support each other 互相支持 基础句型（含本单元重点） 基础句型 仿写句子 I have got ________ (家人/物品) in my family. I have got a kind grandma and a funny brother in my family. My ________ (家人) is a ________ (职业). He/She likes ________ (爱好). My mum is a teacher. She likes reading books. We often ________ (活动) together on ________ (时间). We often go hiking together on weekends. Have you got ________ (家人/物品)? Yes, I have. / No, I haven’t. Have you got a pet? Yes, I have a little dog. Our family tradition is ________ (传统内容). Our family tradition is having dinner together every Sunday. 好句集锦 1.家庭是心灵的港湾，家人的陪伴是最温暖的阳光；无论是欢乐的团聚，还是默默的支持，都让我们在成长的路上充满力量。（Family is the harbor of the soul, and the companionship of family is the warmest sunshine; whether it’s a happy reunion or silent support, it fills us with strength on the way of growth.） 2.一张全家福，定格的是瞬间的美好；一次家庭聚会，珍藏的是永恒的亲情；家庭传统就像一条纽带，将家人的心紧紧连在一起。（A family photo freezes the beauty of the moment; a family gathering treasures the eternal family love; family tradition is like a link that closely connects the hearts of family members.） 3.汤姆的大家庭充满欢乐，双胞胎兄弟的默契十足，华华家的拍照传统温情脉脉——不同的家庭，同样的爱与温暖，这就是“我们是一家人”的真谛。（Tom’s big family is full of joy, the twin brothers are very tacit, and Huahua’s family photo tradition is tender—different families, the same love and warmth, this is the true meaning of “We are family”.） 4.亲情不是一句口号，而是藏在日常的点滴中：妈妈的一碗热汤，爸爸的一次鼓励，奶奶的一句叮嘱，这些都是家庭最珍贵的礼物。（Family love is not a slogan, but hidden in the little bits of daily life: a bowl of hot soup from mum, an encouragement from dad, a reminder from grandma—these are the most precious gifts of the family.） 谚语 1.Blood is thicker than water.（血浓于水——强调亲情的珍贵） 2.East or west, home is best.（金窝银窝，不如自己的草窝——凸显家庭的温暖） 3.Family is where the heart is.（心之所在，便是家——契合家庭的意义） 学生写作填空练习版 版本一：家庭介绍 I have got a happy family. There are ________ (数字) people in my family—my dad, my mum, ________ (其他家人) and me. My dad is a ________ (职业). He likes ________ (爱好). My mum is a ________ (职业). She is good at ________ (技能). My ________ (家人) is ________ (年龄) years old. We often ________ (活动) together. We have got ________ (宠物/物品), and it makes our family more lively. I love my family very much. Family teaches me ________ (品质). I will ________ (行动) to make my family happier. 版本二：家庭故事 One of my most unforgettable family memories is ________ (事件，如my grandma’s birthday party). It made me feel the warmth of family. On that day, ________ (家人) and I ________ (准备活动，如decorated the house). We ________ (活动1，如cooked delicious food) and ________ (活动2，如sang songs). My ________ (家人) was very ________ (感受，如happy and moved). We took many photos to record the moment. This experience made me realize that ________ (感悟，如family love is precious). I will ________ (行动，如cherish every moment with my family) in the future. 版本三：主题阐释 Every family has its own traditions. My family also has special traditions that I cherish. Our first tradition is ________ (传统1，如taking family photos on National Day). We have got ________ (数量) photos now. Another tradition is ________ (传统2，如having family meetings on Sundays). We ________ (活动，如share our stories) during the meeting. These traditions help us understand each other better. Family traditions are important because ________ (原因，如they carry love and memories). I will ________ (行动，如inherit these traditions) and pass them on. I believe family traditions will make our family more united. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $