内容正文:
对应学生用书P41
写一篇说明文
[写作指导]
◆[文体感知]
人物介绍性说明文一般都是对所写的人的基本概况(如年龄、出生地、家庭背景、受教育情况等)作简单的概述,继而再介绍其事迹或在某个领域中做出的贡献,最后对其进行评价。
◆[审题谋篇]
体裁:说明文
时态:以一般现在时为主,兼顾其他时态
人称:主要人称为第三人称
◆[文章构架]
第一段:总体介绍人物(姓名,身份,主要成就等)
第二段:具体介绍人物:介绍人物的成长经历,教育状况,工作经历,主要成就等
第三段:总体介绍人物的带来的影响和给人的启示
◆[词句积累]
1.亮点词汇
①be born in a...family出生在一个……的家庭
②graduate from...毕业于……
③in one's teens/twenties/thirties在某人十几/二十几/三十几岁的时候
④get/obtain a...degree in...获得……(方面的)学位
⑤show (a) great interest in...对……有浓厚的兴趣
⑥make every effort /try one's best to do sth.竭尽全力做某事
⑦be respected by...受……尊重
⑧devote oneself to献身于
⑨be honored as...被誉为……
⑩make great contributions to...为……做出伟大的贡献
2.经典句式
①I, the son of a poor family, was born in Guangzhou, Guangdong Province on March 6, 2002.
我,一个贫苦家庭的儿子,2002年3月6日出生于广东广州。
②I'm a beautiful girl with long hair and big eyes.
我是一个长着大眼睛、留着长发的漂亮女孩。
③I'm Li Hua, easygoing and skilled at communicating.
我叫李华,性格随和,善于交际。
④Not only do I show great interest in science, but also I have a gift for music.
我不但对科学感兴趣,而且也有音乐天赋。
⑤Brought up by his grandparents, who were farmers, he showed a great interest in plants and insects when he was a child.
他由他当农民的祖父母抚养,从小就对植物和昆虫产生了浓厚的兴趣。
⑥I'm 18 years old and have a good command of English, especially in terms of speaking and listening.
我18岁,精通英语,特别是听说方面不错。
⑦Ordinarylooking as he is, he has rich teaching experience and he is deeply respected by other teachers and students.
尽管他的相貌平凡,但是他有丰富的教学经验,深得其他老师和学生的尊敬。
⑧Not only did he devote himself to voluntary work, but also he was willing to serve the people heart and soul.
他不仅献身于志愿者工作,而且还全心全意为人民服务。
⑨Majoring in medical science, he graduated from Sun YatSen University with a bachelor's degree in 1989 and four years later, he went abroad for further studies.
他主修医学,1989年在中山大学毕业并获得学士学位。四年后,他出国留学深造。
⑩With great determination and perseverance, he set several world records within two years and was highly thought of by the athletic circles.
凭着决心和毅力,他在两年内创下了多项世界纪录并在田径界获得了高度的评价。
[典题示例]
假如你是李华,英语老师要求学生们了解“工匠精神”,根据以下要点,用英文写一篇体现工匠精神的人物介绍。
1.29岁的工匠王曦是天津杨柳青木版印刷最年轻的继承人。
2.从小喜欢木刻,自从2014年成为学徒,至今致力于木刻。
3.雕刻木头从来不是一件容易的工作,孩子们的胳膊和腿的线条以及脸上的细节,包括眼睛,都是最具挑战性的部分。
4.老师教导他保持一种平和的心态以及王曦对木刻的认识。
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◆[要点词汇]
1. inheritor n.继承人;后继者
2. engrave vt.雕刻
3. apprentice n.学徒;生手
4. vivid adj.生动的;鲜明的
5. steadiness n.稳定;稳健
6. accuracy n.[数]精确度,准确性
7. purify vt.净化;使纯净
8. remind_sb.to_do_sth. 提醒某人做……
◆[完成句子]
1.他致力于雕刻木头。
He has_devoted_himself_to engraving wood.
2.2014年当上木版印刷学徒。
He became_an_apprentice of woodblock printing in 2014.
3.雕刻木头从来不是一件容易的工作。
Engraving_wood_is_never_an_easy_job .
4.对他来说雕刻木头可能需要一个月甚至两个月的时间才能完成。
Engraving wood may _take_one_or_even_two_months_for_him_to_complete .
5.他的老师经常提醒他要保持一种平和的心态。
His teacher often reminds_him_to_maintain_a_peaceful_mind .
6.没有平和的心态,手艺就不会稳定和准确。
There will be no steadiness_or_accuracy in craftsmanship without a peaceful mind.
◆[句式升级]
7.用连词since升级句式1和2
He_has_devoted_himself_to_engraving_wood_since_he_became_an_apprentice_of_woodblock_printing_in_2014._
8.用which引导非限制性定语从句升级句式3和4
Engraving_wood_is_never_an_easy_job,_which_may_take_one_or_even_two_months_for_him_to_complete._
9.用without which引导的定语从句升级句式5和6
His_teacher_often_reminds_him_to_maintain_a_peaceful_mind,_without_which_there_will_be_no_steadiness_or_accuracy_in_craftsmanship._
◆[连句成篇]
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[参考范文]
Wang Xi, 29, is the youngest inheritor of Yangliuqing woodblock printing in Tianjin. He has devoted himself to engraving wood since he became an apprentice of woodblock printing in 2014.
Engraving wood is never an easy job,which may take one or even two months for him to complete.The lines of engraving wood should be smooth and graceful enough to show the figures'vivid and artistic expressions. His teacher often reminds him to maintain a peaceful mind, without which there will be no steadiness or accuracy in craftsmanship.Wang says.
“For me, it seems that I am carving the woodblock, but in fact, I am carving out my life and purifying my soul in this fastchanging world.”Wang says.
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