Module 4 Rules and suggestions 写作专项学案- 2025-2026学年外研版(2012)英语九年级下册
Module 4 Rules and suggestions 写作专项学案
结合本单元“安全规则与建议”主题,写一篇介绍出行安全规则、分享户外安全经历或提出安全建议的短文,达成以下目标:
1.能正确使用本单元“安全与规则”相关核心词汇(如rule、suggestion、safety、danger、proper、edge、tent、stone、smooth、straight等)及短语(set off、in one go、rock climbing、fall asleep、hang up、keep...clean、look out等);
2.能熟练运用情态动词(must、mustn’t、should、shouldn’t、can、can’t)表达规则与建议,掌握“whenever”引导的时间状语从句,正确使用“because” “so” “however”等衔接表达;
3.能按“规则/安全主题引入→核心细节(规则内容/经历过程/建议要点)→呼吁与践行”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“遵守规则,安全出行”的单元主题。
1.体裁:规则介绍类说明文、安全经历类记叙文或建议提出类应用文,兼具实用性与警示性;
2.人称:第一人称(分享经历、表达感受)或第二人称(提出建议、发出呼吁)为主;
3.核心要求
○ 内容:覆盖“1个核心场景(户外出行/校园生活/公共场合)、2-3个关键规则/细节(安全要点/经历亮点/建议措施)、1个安全感悟或行动呼吁”3个要点;
○ 字数:80–100词,规则清晰具体、经历真实生动或建议切实可行,语言符合九年级学生水平,体现对安全规则的重视与践行意识。
1.开头:明确引入核心主题(如“户外出行充满乐趣,但遵守安全规则是享受旅程的前提” “去年的山区徒步经历,让我深刻体会到安全规则的重要性” “校园安全关乎每个人,我们需要牢记这些基本规则”),用简洁句式点明核心价值(如“正确的规则能规避危险,让出行更安心” “一次意外让我明白,遵守规则就是保护自己” “小小的规则,能为我们筑起安全的屏障”),用引导性语言引出下文;
2.中间:若介绍安全规则,按“场景特点→核心规则→规则原因”展开,用情态动词明确规则(如“You must wear proper clothes when climbing mountains”),结合具体场景说明规则的必要性;若分享安全经历,聚焦“经历背景→关键事件→应对方式”,描述户外出行或日常活动中遇到的安全状况及处理过程(如“我们迷路后,按照之前学到的规则保持冷静、寻找路标”),传递真实体验;若提出安全建议,围绕“出行准备→过程注意→应急处理”,用祈使句和情态动词给出具体建议(如“Before setting off, you should check the weather”),确保建议可操作;
3.结尾:发出呼吁(如“让我们牢记安全规则,文明出行、快乐出行” “安全无小事,从遵守每一条小规则做起” “规则是保护我们的铠甲,让我们共同遵守,守护彼此”)或表达行动意愿(如“我会继续践行安全规则,并向身边人宣传安全知识” “以后的户外出行,我会严格遵守规则,确保自身安全”),呼应单元“Rules and suggestions”的核心主题,传递“重视安全、遵守规则”的积极态度。
模板一:介绍安全规则——山区徒步安全规则(Safety Rules for Mountain Hiking)
基础句式:Mountain hiking is an exciting outdoor activity, but it can be dangerous if we don’t follow safety rules. Knowing and obeying these rules is important for a safe and happy trip.
示例:When it comes to mountain hiking, safety always comes first. There are some important rules we must follow to avoid dangers and enjoy the journey.
基础句式:First, you must wear strong shoes and proper clothes to protect yourself. Second, never go off on your own—you have to keep together with your group. Third, don’t drink all your water in one go; you may need it later. Also, be careful of falling stones and don’t walk too close to the edge of the path.
示例:Before setting off, you should check the weather and bring enough water and food. During the hike, you must wear strong shoes and thick socks to prevent slipping. You mustn’t walk too close to the edge of the hill path, as you might fall. What’s more, you have to keep together with your teammates and not go off alone. If you want to climb rocks, make sure you have a rope and climb with someone.
基础句式:Following these safety rules can help us stay away from danger. Let’s always remember them and have a safe hiking experience.
示例:These rules are not meant to limit us, but to protect us. By following them, we can enjoy the beauty of mountains without worries. Let’s keep these rules in mind and have safe and wonderful hiking trips.
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模板二:分享安全经历——一次难忘的露营安全经历(An Unforgettable Camping Safety Experience)
基础句式:Last summer, I went camping in the countryside with my friends. It was an unforgettable experience that taught me the importance of safety rules.
示例:As a fan of outdoor activities, I joined a camping trip with my classmates last month. Little did I know that this trip would teach me a valuable lesson about safety.
基础句式:On the first night, we forgot to hang our food in a tree. When we woke up the next morning, the food bag was open—bears had been there! We were scared but lucky that no one was hurt. After that, we followed the rules: we hung our food high in a tree, kept the camp clean, and made lots of noise to keep animals away.
示例:We set up our tents by a stream and felt very excited. But we made a mistake—we left our food bags on the ground. In the middle of the night, we heard strange noises outside. When we checked, we found that some animals had eaten our food! We were frightened. Then our teacher told us the rules: we should hang food in a tree high enough, keep the camp clean, and not make sudden moves if we see animals. We followed these rules for the rest of the trip and had no more trouble.
基础句式:This experience made me realize that safety rules are very important. I will never forget to follow them during outdoor activities.
示例:This camping trip taught me a big lesson: safety rules are there to protect us. We shouldn’t ignore them for convenience. From then on, whenever I go for outdoor activities, I always remember to follow safety rules. It’s better to be safe than sorry!
模板三:提出安全建议——校园安全建议(Campus Safety Suggestions)
基础句式:Campus is our second home, and campus safety is very important for all of us. Here are some practical suggestions to keep us safe at school.
示例:As students, we spend most of our time at school. Keeping the campus safe is everyone’s responsibility. Here are some useful suggestions for us to follow.
基础句式:First, we mustn’t run in the hallway, especially when classes are over. Second, we should be careful when using sharp tools in art class. Third, we shouldn’t climb over the school fence. Also, if we see someone in danger, we should ask teachers for help in time.
示例:First, we must follow the traffic rules in the schoolyard—don’t run fast when there are many students around. Second, we should be careful with electrical equipment in classrooms; don’t touch it with wet hands. Third, we mustn’t fight with classmates or climb tall trees on campus. What’s more, we should always keep the stairs and hallways clean and tidy to avoid slipping.
基础句式:Campus safety depends on everyone. Let’s put these suggestions into practice and make our campus a safe and happy place to study and live.
示例:Safety is the foundation of a happy school life. If we all follow these suggestions, our campus will be safer and more harmonious. Let’s take action right now and take responsibility for our own safety and the safety of others.
Safety Rules for Outdoor Camping
Outdoor camping is a fun activity, but it requires us to follow safety rules to stay away from danger.
Before camping, you should check the weather and bring necessary things like a tent, strong shoes and enough food and water. During the trip, you must keep the camp clean, because animals might think your rubbish is food. You should hang your food high in a tree to prevent animals from getting it. Also, you mustn’t go out alone at night, and if you see wild animals, don’t make sudden moves or run—stay still and wait for them to leave.
Following these rules can make your camping trip safe and enjoyable. Remember, safety always comes first. Let’s follow these rules and have a wonderful outdoor experience.
户外露营是一项有趣的活动,但它需要我们遵守安全规则以远离危险。
露营前,你应该查看天气,并带上帐篷、结实的鞋子以及足够的食物和水等必需品。旅行期间,你必须保持营地清洁,因为动物可能会把你的垃圾当成食物。你应该把食物高高挂在树上,防止动物拿到。此外,你晚上绝对不能单独外出,如果你看到野生动物,不要突然移动或奔跑——保持静止,等待它们离开。
遵守这些规则能让你的露营之旅安全又愉快。记住,安全永远是第一位的。让我们遵守这些规则,拥有一次美好的户外体验。
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