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话题写作 人际交往篇
一.最近你校的 “暖心驿站” 开展了解忧活动,倾听同学们的烦恼并给予帮助。假定你是驿站成员 Lucy,你收到了 Ben 的一封倾诉信,请根据来信要点写一封回信并给出建议。
问题方面
具体问题
建议
家庭方面
父母总唠叨学习,沟通少
耐心和父母沟通,说说自己的学习计划
学习方面
作业多压力大,效率低
制定学习计划,合理分配时间,劳逸结合
人际方面
新转学,难以融入新班级
主动和同学交流,参加班级活动
参考词汇:唠叨 nag 压力 pressure 效率 efficiency 融入 integrate into
要求:
1. 词数 80 左右(开头结尾给出,不计总词数);
2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
参考范文
Dear Ben,I feel sorry to hear about your troubles. It’s common to meet such problems, and I’d like to give you some useful suggestions.
Your parents nag you about study because they care about you. You are supposed to talk with them patiently and tell them your study plan. For your study pressure, you need to make a plan and divide your time properly. Remember to combine study with rest to improve efficiency. As for integrating into the new class, you had better talk with classmates actively and take part in class activities.
Communication and action are the keys to solving problems. Hope my suggestions can help you.Yours,Lucy
课标对应话题:
1. 情感与情绪 (Feelings and moods)
2. 人际交往 (Interpersonal communication)
短语积累:
1. 关心 care about
2. 制定计划 make a plan
3. 分配时间 divide time properly
4. 劳逸结合 combine study with rest
5. 融入新班级 integrate into the new class
6. 参加班级活动 take part in class activities
基础写作:
1. 父母因为关心你,所以会唠叨你的学习。Your parents nag you about study because they care about you.
2. 你应该制定学习计划,合理分配自己的时间。You are supposed to make a study plan and divide your time properly.
3. 劳逸结合能帮助我们提高学习效率。Combining study with rest can help us improve study efficiency.
4. 主动和同学交流能让你更快融入新班级。Talking with classmates actively can help you integrate into the new class faster.
5. 沟通和行动是解决问题的关键。Communication and action are the keys to solving problems.
技巧点拨:
1. be supposed to/ ought to / had better 替换 should 引导建议的表达
例句:You are supposed to listen to your parents’ suggestions carefully.You had better take part in more activities to make new friends.
仿写:你应该耐心和父母沟通,让他们了解你的学习情况。You are supposed to talk with your parents patiently and let them know your study situation.
2. as for… 用于引出新的话题 / 问题,衔接上下文
例句:As for the study problem, you need to change your learning methods.As for making friends, being honest is the most important thing.
仿写:至于融入新班级的问题,你可以主动参加班级活动。As for the problem of integrating into the new class, you can take part in class activities actively.
二.最近你校的 “心灵小屋” 开展了倾听活动,帮助同学们解决生活学习中的烦恼。假定你是小屋成员 Tom,你收到了 Lily 的一封倾诉信,请根据来信要点写一封回信并给出建议。
问题方面
具体问题
建议
家庭方面
弟弟 / 妹妹总抢自己的东西,闹矛盾
包容弟弟 / 妹妹,和他 / 她一起做游戏增进感情
学习方面
害怕考试,容易紧张发挥失常
考前认真复习,做深呼吸缓解紧张,调整心态
人际方面
和同桌因小事闹别扭,互不理睬
主动道歉,换位思考,珍惜同学情谊
参考词汇:抢 grab 矛盾 conflict 紧张 nervous 换位思考 think from others’ perspective 情谊 friendship
要求:
1. 词数 80 左右(开头结尾给出,不计总词数);
2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
参考范文
Dear Lily,I’m sorry to know you’re having some troubles these days. Don’t worry. I have some suggestions for you to solve them.
Your little brother/sister always grabs your things, so you ought to be more tolerant. You can play games with him/her to improve your relationship. For exam nervousness, you are supposed to review carefully before exams and take deep breaths to calm down. As for the conflict with your deskmate, you had better say sorry actively, think from her perspective and cherish your friendship.
Small troubles will pass soon. Hope you can solve these problems and be happy again.Yours,Tom
课标对应话题:
1. 情感与情绪 (Feelings and moods)
2. 人际交往 (Interpersonal communication)
短语积累:
1. 闹矛盾 have a conflict
2. 学会包容 learn to be tolerant
3. 增进感情 improve the relationship
4. 缓解紧张 calm down one’s nervousness
5. 换位思考 think from others’ perspective
6. 珍惜同学情谊 cherish the class friendship
基础写作:
1. 你应该学会包容弟弟 / 妹妹,和他 / 她一起做游戏。You ought to learn to be tolerant of your little brother/sister and play games with him/her.
2. 考前做深呼吸能帮助我们缓解紧张情绪。Taking deep breaths before exams can help us calm down our nervousness.
3. 和同桌闹别扭后,主动道歉是化解矛盾的好方法。Saying sorry actively is a good way to resolve the conflict after falling out with your deskmate.
4. 我们应该学会换位思考,理解身边的人。We are supposed to learn to think from others’ perspective and understand people around us.
5. 珍惜同学情谊,让班级生活更温暖。Cherish the class friendship and make the class life warmer.
技巧点拨:
1. be supposed to/ ought to / had better 替换 should 引导建议的表达
例句:You ought to spend more time with your family to get on well with them.You had better adjust your mindset to face exams bravely.
仿写:你应该调整自己的心态,勇敢面对考试。You are supposed to adjust your mindset and face exams bravely.
2. moreover, … 引导新的论点,补充或支持前文中的陈述
例句:You need to review your lessons carefully. Moreover, you should do more exercises to practice.You should say sorry to your deskmate. Moreover, you can share snacks with her to make up.
仿写:你应该主动和同桌道歉,此外,还可以和她一起分享趣事化解矛盾。You had better say sorry to your deskmate actively. Moreover, you can share interesting things with her to resolve the conflict.
三.最近你校的 “阳光互助” 社团开展了解忧活动,为同学们解决成长中的烦恼。假定你是社团成员 Anna,你收到了 Jack 的一封倾诉信,请根据来信要点写一封回信并给出建议。
问题方面
具体问题
建议
家庭方面
父母不让玩手机,觉得自己不被信任
和父母约定玩手机的时间,用行动证明自律
学习方面
偏科严重,弱势学科拉分
花更多时间补弱,向老师和优秀同学请教
人际方面
被同学起外号,心里很不舒服
坦然沟通,告诉同学自己的感受,寻求老师帮助
参考词汇:自律 self-disciplined 偏科 partial to some subjects 拉分 pull down the marks 起外号 give nicknames 坦然沟通 communicate calmly
要求:
1. 词数 80 左右(开头结尾给出,不计总词数);
2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
参考范文
Dear Jack,I feel sorry to hear that you’re upset about these troubles. I really understand your feelings and I’d like to offer you some suggestions.
Your parents don’t let you use the phone because they worry about you. You are supposed to make a time rule for phone use with them and prove your self-discipline by your actions. For your partial subjects, you ought to spend more time on them and ask teachers and top students for help. As for the nicknames, you had better communicate with classmates calmly, tell them your feelings and ask teachers for help if necessary.
I believe you can solve these problems with your efforts. Hope everything goes well for you.Yours,Anna
课标对应话题:
1. 情感与情绪 (Feelings and moods)
2. 人际交往 (Interpersonal communication)
短语积累:
1. 约定时间规则 make a time rule
2. 证明自律 prove one’s self-discipline
3. 偏科严重 be seriously partial to some subjects
4. 补习弱势学科 make up for the weak subjects
5. 向他人请教 ask others for help
6. 寻求老师帮助 ask teachers for help
基础写作:
1. 你可以和父母约定玩手机的时间,用行动证明自己的自律。You can make a time rule for phone use with your parents and prove your self-discipline by your actions.
2. 偏科严重会拉低我们的总成绩,需要及时弥补。Being seriously partial to some subjects will pull down our total marks, so we need to make up for it in time.
3. 被同学起外号时,坦然沟通能让同学了解你的感受。When being given nicknames by classmates, communicating calmly can let them know your feelings.
4. 遇到解决不了的人际问题,寻求老师帮助是个好选择。It’s a good choice to ask teachers for help when meeting unsolvable interpersonal problems.
5. 用努力解决成长中的烦恼,让自己变得更优秀。Solve the troubles in growth with efforts and make yourself better.
技巧点拨:
1. be supposed to/ ought to / had better 替换 should 引导建议的表达
例句:You ought to balance the time between different subjects to avoid partiality.You had better tell your true feelings to your classmates to get along well with them.
仿写:你应该平衡不同学科的学习时间,避免偏科。You are supposed to balance the study time between different subjects to avoid partiality.
2. as for… 用于引出新的话题 / 问题,衔接上下文
例句:As for the phone problem, the most important thing is to gain your parents’ trust.As for study, we need to keep a positive attitude and work hard.
仿写:至于手机问题,最重要的是赢得父母的信任。As for the phone problem, the most important thing is to gain your parents’ trust.
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