Unit4 写作专项：Complete a Story About Honesty 2025-2026学年沪教版（五四学制）英语七年级下册

沪教英语（五四学制）七下Unit4 写作专项 Complete a Story About Honesty 一、写作目标 结合本单元“诚实是最好的准则”的核心目标，能续写一个关于诚实的故事，内容包括：故事的冲突、诚实的行为、故事结局及感悟。 1. 能正确使用选择疑问句（本单元核心语法）； 2. 能运用直接引语（本单元写作技能）及与诚实相关的词汇（如honest, promise, truth, cheat）撰写短文； 3. 能遵循故事续写的基本结构，语言生动、逻辑连贯，贴合“诚实的价值”的主题场景。 二、题目解析 1. 体裁：记叙文（故事续写），要求补全关于诚实的故事，需体现“误解—诚实行为—正向结果”的逻辑，契合本单元“诚实的意义”的写作要求； 2. 人称：以第三人称（he/she/they）为主，客观叙述故事发展，符合故事类文本的人称使用规范； 3. 时态：核心用一般过去时叙述故事事件，用直接引语还原对话场景；重点运用选择疑问句（本单元语法）及直接引语（本单元写作技能），难度适配七下学生水平； 4. 核心要求 · 内容：写清故事中“男孩迟到的原因”“诚实的行为”“故事结局”，体现本单元“诚实带来信任与认可”的目标； · 格式：延续原文开头，补全中间情节与结尾，包含直接引语（对话），符合故事续写的结构规范； · 字数：80-120词，句子以简单句和对话句为主，穿插核心语法与写作技能。 三、典型例题 阅读以下故事开头，续写一个关于诚实的故事： “The story took place in a village at the foot of a mountain. One day, several visitors came to the village. They wanted to buy some water. A local boy offered to help. Several hours later, the boy didn’t come back. One of them thought, ‘Perhaps the boy cheated us for the money.’” 请你续写故事，内容需说明： 1. 男孩迟迟未归的真实原因是什么？ 2. 男孩（或相关人物）如何表现出诚实的行为？ 3. 这个故事的结局是什么？你从中感受到了什么？ 四、思路点拨 1. 引入转折：先通过另一个人物（如男孩的朋友）引出男孩迟到的真实原因，用直接引语还原对话； 2. 诚实行为：通过人物的语言或动作体现“说出真相”的诚实行为，可用选择疑问句体现他人的误解； 3. 结局与感悟：描述诚实行为带来的正向结果（如获得信任、被认可），总结诚实的价值，呼应本单元主题。 五、写作模板（逐段拆解，贴合单元目标） 部分 内容 承接开头 Just then, a little girl ran over and looked at the visitors worriedly. One visitor asked, “Did the boy run away or forget his promise?”（选择疑问句，本单元语法） 解释原因+诚实行为 The girl said quickly, “‘He didn’t cheat you,’ she said. ‘He fell down on the way to get more water and hurt his knee. But he asked me to bring the water to you first!’”（直接引语，本单元技能） 结局+感悟 The visitors were touched by the boy’s honesty. They gave the girl extra money and said, “We’ll tell others about this honest village.” Later, more people came to visit the village, and everyone remembered the boy’s honest heart. 六、范文 英文 Complete a Story About Honesty The story took place in a village at the foot of a mountain. One day, visitors came to buy water. A local boy offered to help but didn’t return for hours. One visitor thought, “Perhaps he cheated us.” Just then, a girl ran over with water. “Did he take the money or keep his promise?”（选择疑问句，本单元语法）the visitor asked. The girl said, “‘He fell and hurt his foot when fetching more water,’ she said. ‘But he made me bring this first!’”（直接引语，本单元技能） The visitors felt sorry. They helped the boy and told others about his honesty. Soon, the village became known as “the honest village”. 中文翻译 续写一个关于诚实的故事 故事发生在山脚下的村庄里。一天，游客来买水，当地男孩主动帮忙却几小时未归。一位游客想：“也许他骗了我们。” 就在这时，一个女孩拿着水跑来。“他是拿了钱还是遵守了承诺？”游客问道。女孩说：“‘他取更多水时摔倒伤了脚，’她说，‘但他让我先把水送过来！’” 游客们很愧疚，帮了男孩并向他人讲述他的诚实。很快，这个村庄被称为“诚实村”。 七、素材积累 短语 1. fall into a small hole — 掉进小坑 2. fetch more water — 取更多水 3. break one’s promise — 违背承诺 4. feel sorry for — 为……感到愧疚 5. carry sb. to the clinic — 把某人送到诊所 6. be known as — 被称为 7. keep one’s honest heart — 保持诚实的心 基础句型 基础句型 仿写句子 Did he keep the money or break his promise? Did she tell a lie or say the truth? “He hurt his foot, but he made me bring the water,” he said. “I forgot the book, but I’ll return it tomorrow,” she said. The village became known as “the honest village”. The boy became known as “the honest kid” in our class. 好句集锦 1. Honesty may not bring immediate rewards, but it will win others’ trust in the end.（诚实也许不会带来即时的回报，但最终会赢得他人的信任。） 2. The boy’s small act of keeping his promise showed the power of honesty.（男孩遵守承诺的小小举动，展现了诚实的力量。） 3. Doubt faded away when the truth was told, and warmth filled everyone’s heart.（真相说出后，怀疑消散了，温暖填满了每个人的心。） 谚语 1. Honesty is the best policy.（诚实是最好的准则。） 2. A honest man’s word is as good as his bond.（诚实人的话如同他的契约一样可靠。） 3. Truth never fears investigation.（真相不怕调查。） 八、学生写作填空练习版 Complete a Story About Honesty The story took place in a village at the foot of a mountain. One day, several visitors came to the village. They wanted to buy some water. A local boy offered to help. Several hours later, the boy didn’t come back. One of them thought, “Perhaps the boy cheated us for the money.” Just then, a girl came over with a bottle of water. “Did the boy _______(cheat us/help others)?” one visitor asked. The girl said, “‘He didn’t cheat you,’ she said. ‘He _______(fell down/hurt his leg) when he went to get more water. But he asked me to bring this to you first!’” The visitors were _______(touched/sorry) for their doubt. They helped the boy and told others about his _______(honesty/kindness). Later, the village became famous for its honest people. ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $