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沪教英语(五四学制)七下Unit3 写作专项
A Thank-You Letter to Someone Who Helped You
一、写作目标
结合本单元“互助与感恩”的核心目标,能写一封感谢信给帮助过自己的人,内容包括:感谢对象、对方的帮助行为、自己的感受及感恩之情。
1. 能正确使用 and but so 并列连词(本单元核心语法);
2. 能运用本单元与帮助、感恩相关的词汇(如help, thank, grateful, care for)撰写短文;
3. 能遵循感谢信的基本格式,语言真诚、逻辑清晰,贴合校园生活中的感恩场景。
二、题目解析
1. 体裁:应用文(感谢信),要求向帮助过自己的人表达感谢,需清晰说明帮助细节,契合本单元“互助的意义”的写作要求;
2. 人称:以第一人称(I)为主,向对方(第二人称you)直接表达感谢,符合感谢信的人称使用规范;
3. 时态:核心用一般过去时描述对方的帮助行为,用一般现在时表达当前的感受;重点运用 and but so 并列连词(本单元重点语法),难度适配七下学生水平;
4. 核心要求
· 内容:写清感谢对象、对方帮助自己的具体行为、自己的感受及对对方的感谢,体现本单元“感恩帮助”的目标;
· 格式:包含称呼、正文(感谢+帮助细节+感受)、结尾祝福语及署名,符合感谢信的格式规范;
· 字数:80-120词,句子以简单句和并列句为主,穿插核心语法运用。
三、典型例题
生活中我们总会得到他人的帮助,这些帮助会让我们感到温暖。请你以“A Thank-You Letter to Someone Who Helped You”为题,写一封感谢信给帮助过你的人,内容需说明:
1. 你要感谢的人是谁?
2. 对方在什么情况下帮助了你?具体做了什么?
3. 这次帮助让你有什么感受?你想对对方说什么?
四、思路点拨
1. 称呼开篇:首先点明感谢对象(如同学、老师),用礼貌称呼开启信件;
2. 感谢+帮助细节:接着直接表达感谢,用具体事例说明对方的帮助行为,用 and so 连接行为与结果;
3. 表达感受:然后说明这次帮助带给自己的感受(如温暖、感动),用 but 体现帮助前后的变化;
4. 结尾祝福:最后再次表达感谢,附上祝福语及署名,让信件更完整。
五、写作模板(逐段拆解,贴合单元目标)
部分
内容
称呼
Dear _______(感谢对象,如Li Ming),
正文1
(感谢+帮助细节)
I’m writing to say “thank you” for helping me last week. I forgot my math notebook before the exam, so I felt very worried. You lent me your notebook and explained the key points to me.
正文2
(表达感受)
I was nervous at first, but your help made me calm down. I passed the exam successfully, and I feel really grateful to you.
结尾+署名
You are such a kind friend. Thank you again! Best wishes, _______(你的名字,如Zhang Hua)
六、范文
英文(标注版)
A Thank-You Letter to Someone Who Helped You
Dear Xiao Yu,
I’m writing to say “thank you” for helping me last Friday. I fell down on the way to school and hurt my knee, so I couldn’t walk easily. You carried my schoolbag for me and walked slowly with me to the infirmary.
I felt pain and scared at first, but your care made me feel warm. The nurse said my knee was fine, and I could go back to class soon. I’m really grateful for your help—you are such a thoughtful friend.
Thank you again!
Best wishes,
Li Mei
中文翻译
给帮助过我的人的感谢信
亲爱的小雨:
我写这封信是为了感谢你上周五帮助我。我在上学路上摔倒了,伤到了膝盖,所以没法轻松走路。你帮我拎书包,还陪着我慢慢走到医务室。
一开始我又疼又害怕,但你的关心让我感到很温暖。护士说我的膝盖没事,很快就能回教室了。我真的很感谢你的帮助——你是个特别贴心的朋友。
再次谢谢你!
祝好,
李梅
七、素材积累
短语
1. fall down — 摔倒
2. hurt one’s knee — 伤到膝盖
3. carry one’s schoolbag — 拎书包
4. walk to the infirmary — 走到医务室
5. feel warm — 感到温暖
6. pass the exam — 通过考试
7. be grateful for — 感激
8. such a thoughtful friend — 如此贴心的朋友
基础句型
基础句型
仿写句子
I fell down, so I couldn’t walk easily.
I forgot my umbrella, so I got wet in the rain.
You carried my bag and walked with me.
She lent me her pen and taught me the new words.
I felt scared at first, but your help made me calm.
I didn’t know the way at first, but he showed me the direction.
好句集锦
1. Your small act of kindness made a big difference to me.(你小小的善举对我来说意义重大。)
2. When I was in trouble, your help was like a ray of sunshine in my life.(当我遇到困难时,你的帮助就像我生命中的一束阳光。)
3. I will remember your help forever and try to help others like you.(我会永远记得你的帮助,也会像你一样去帮助别人。)
谚语
1. A helping hand is worth more than a kind word.(一次援手胜过一句好话。)
2. Gratitude is the sign of noble souls.(感恩是高尚灵魂的标志。)
3. No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted.(再小的善举,也不会被浪费。)
八、学生写作填空练习版
A Thank-You Letter to Someone Who Helped You
Dear _______(感谢对象,如Xiao Hong),
I’m writing to say “thank you” for helping me last week. I missed the school bus in the morning, so I was going to be late. You rode your bike to take me to school and we arrived just in time.
I felt worried at first, but your help made me feel relaxed. I didn’t get punished by the teacher, and I feel really _______(形容词,如grateful) to you.
You are such a _______(形容词,如kind) friend. Thank you again!
Best wishes,
_______(你的名字,如Wang Tao)
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