Unit 7 Fun after school 写作专项学案 2025-2026学年沪教版英语七年级上册

Unit 7 Fun after school 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“课后活动与校园特色”主题,写一篇课后活动描述短文或校园社团推荐稿,介绍自己参与的课后活动、社团经历、校园特色日活动及收获,达成以下目标: 1.能正确使用本单元“课后活动”相关核心词汇(如club、activity、compete、event、charity、sale、decorate、difference、member、shape等)及短语(take part in、join in、make a difference、have a good time、sign up、take a trip、put on a play等); 2.能熟练运用一般过去时描述过往的活动经历,用一般现在时介绍社团常态活动,用“because”说明参与活动的原因,正确使用连词(and、then、so)衔接活动流程; 3.能按“活动引入 过程描述 收获感悟”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“丰富课后生活,助力全面成长”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁:活动描述类记叙文或推荐类短文,兼具纪实性与感染力; 2.人称:第一人称(分享个人活动经历或推荐); 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容:覆盖“1个核心课后活动/社团/特色日、2-3个活动细节(流程、动作、场景)、1个参与收获或推荐理由”3个要点; ￮ 字数:80–100词,活动描述清晰有序,语言符合七年级学生水平,体现对课后活动意义的理解。 思路点拨 1.开头:明确引入核心课后活动(参考课本社团招募展、徒步旅行、慈善义卖等案例),用简洁句式点明活动名称、参与时间及整体感受(如“exciting、meaningful、fun”),引出下文具体描述; 2.中间:按活动流程描述关键细节,如社团活动的内容(做实验、学技能)、特色日的环节(比赛、义卖、表演)、旅行中的经历(集合、徒步、拍照),结合具体动作(join、prepare、compete、decorate)和场景描写增强真实性,用单元核心短语强化表达; 3.结尾:分享活动带来的收获(如结交朋友、提升技能、帮助他人)或推荐理由(如有趣、有意义、能成长),呼应单元“让课后活动兼具乐趣与教育意义”的核心主题,传递积极参与的态度。 写作模板(逐段拆解) 模板一:描述一次课后活动经历 第一段:活动引入与背景 基础句式:Last _ (时间,如Saturday/last month), I took part in _ (活动名称,如a charity sale/the Hiking Club trip) with my classmates. It was one of the most _ (感受,如meaningful/exciting) activities I’ve ever joined. I was looking forward to it for a long time. 示例:Last Saturday, I took part in a charity sale at our school with my classmates. It was one of the most meaningful activities I’ve ever joined. We prepared for it for a whole week and couldn’t wait to start. 第二段:活动过程与细节 基础句式:First, we _ (动作1,如brought our old toys and books) and decorated the tables with colorful posters. Then, we _ (动作2,如called out to ask teachers and students to buy things). Many people came to support us, and we _ (动作3,如sold most of the items). During the activity, I _ (个人动作,如helped collect money/talked with customers). 示例:First, we brought our old toys, books and handmade crafts, and decorated the tables with colorful posters. Then, we called out politely to ask teachers and students to buy things. Many people came to support the charity, and we sold most of the items quickly. During the activity, I helped collect money and introduced the purpose of the sale to everyone. 第三段:活动收获与感悟 基础句式:This activity made me _ (感受,如happy/proud). We raised some money for charity and learned to _ (收获1,如work together/communicate with others). I realized that _ (感悟,如small actions can make a big difference/helping others is joyful). I hope to take part in more such activities in the future! 示例:This activity made me very proud. We raised 500 yuan for charity and learned to work as a team. I also improved my communication skills when talking with customers. I realized that helping others can bring so much joy. I hope to take part in more charity activities to help those in need! 模板二:推荐一个校园社团 第一段:社团引入与定位 基础句式:My favorite school club is _ (社团名称,如the Craft Club/the Science Club). It is a _ (特点,如fun/educational) club that helps us learn new skills and make friends. Many students love it because of its interesting activities. 示例:My favorite school club is the Craft Club. It is a fun and creative club that helps us learn traditional skills and make new friends. I joined it last month and have fallen in love with it. 第二段:社团活动与亮点 基础句式:In the club, we usually _ (活动1,如learn to make paper-cuts and kites) on weekends. The teacher teaches us carefully, and we _ (活动2,如practice with each other). Last week, we _ (具体活动,如made beautiful paper flowers for our parents). It was so exciting to see our own works! 示例:In the club, we usually learn to make paper-cuts, kites and paper flowers on weekends. The teacher teaches us step by step, and we help each other when we meet difficulties. Last week, we made paper flowers for our mothers on Mother’s Day. Everyone was very happy to give their handmade gifts to their families. 第三段:推荐理由与号召 基础句式:Joining this club is a great choice because _ (理由1,如it develops our creativity/we can learn useful skills). You can not only _ (收获1,如have fun) but also _ (收获2,如make like-minded friends). Come and sign up for _ (社团名称)—you won’t regret it! 示例:Joining this club is a great choice because it develops our creativity and patience. You can not only have fun making handcrafts but also learn about traditional culture. It’s also a good chance to make like-minded friends. Come and sign up for the Craft Club—you will have a wonderful time! 范文 My Unforgettable Hiking Trip Last Sunday, I went on a hiking trip with the Hiking Club of our school. We met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. and took a bus to Lucky Island. It was a sunny day, and I was very excited. When we arrived, we started hiking along the mountain path. The scenery was beautiful—there were green trees and colorful flowers everywhere. We helped each other when climbing steep roads. At noon, we had a picnic by the lake and shared our food. In the afternoon, we took many photos on the beach and played games together. Everyone laughed a lot. This trip was unforgettable. I not only enjoyed the natural beauty but also made some new friends. I learned the importance of teamwork and perseverance. After-school activities like this make our life more colorful. I can’t wait for the next trip with the club! 范文中文翻译 我难忘的徒步旅行 上周日,我和学校的徒步旅行社团一起去了一次徒步旅行。我们早上8点在学校门口集合,乘公交车去了幸运岛。那天阳光明媚,我非常兴奋。 到达后,我们沿着山路开始徒步。风景很美——到处都是绿树和五颜六色的花。爬陡坡时,我们互相帮助。中午,我们在湖边野餐,分享食物。下午,我们在海滩上拍了很多照片,还一起玩游戏。每个人都笑得很开心。 这次旅行令人难忘。我不仅欣赏了自然美景,还交了一些新朋友。我明白了团队合作和坚持的重要性。这样的课后活动让我们的生活更加丰富多彩。我已经等不及和社团一起参加下一次旅行了! 素材积累 核心短语 take part in 参加;参与 join in 加入;参与 make a difference 有作用;有影响 have a good time 玩得开心 sign up 报名;注册 take a trip 去旅行 put on a play 上演戏剧 work together 团队合作 help each other 互相帮助 charity sale 慈善义卖 hiking trip 徒步旅行 school club 校园社团 craft club 手工社团 science club 科学社团 natural beauty 自然美景 mountain path 山路 steep road 陡坡 handmade gift 手工礼物 like-minded friends 志同道合的朋友 基础句型(含本单元重点) 基础句型 仿写句子 I took part in _ (活动) last _ (时间). I took part in a school f te last Saturday. In the _ (社团), we usually _ (活动). In the Science Club, we usually do interesting experiments. During the activity, I _ (动作) and _ (动作). During the activity, I decorated the tables and talked with customers. This activity made me _ (感受) because _. This activity made me happy because I helped people in need. Joining _ (社团) helps me _ (收获). Joining the Music Club helps me improve my singing skills. 好句集锦 1.After-school activities are not just for fun, but also for learning and growing. 2.Working with classmates in club activities teaches us teamwork and communication. 3.The most valuable part of after-school life is the joy of trying new things and making friends. 谚语 1.Unity is strength.(团结就是力量) 2.Practice makes perfect.(熟能生巧) 3.Doing is better than saying.(行胜于言) 学生写作填空练习版 版本一:描述一次课后活动经历 Last _ (时间), I took part in _ (活动名称) with my _ (同行者,如classmates/friends). It was _ (感受,如exciting/meaningful) and I really enjoyed it. First, we _ (动作1,如prepared our things/met at the school gate). Then, we _ (动作2,如started the activity/went to the destination). During the activity, I _ (个人动作,如helped others/did something interesting). Everyone was _ (状态,如happy/busy) and we had a great time. This activity taught me _ (收获). I realized that _ (感悟). I hope to _ (未来计划,如join more such activities/do better next time)! 版本二:推荐一个校园社团 My favorite school club is _ (社团名称). It is a _ (特点,如fun/creative) club that many students love. I joined it _ (时间,如last month/at the beginning of the term). In the club, we often _ (活动1,如learn to.../do experiments). Last week, we _ (具体活动,如made.../had a competition). The teacher _ (老师的动作,如teaches us carefully/helps us a lot), and we always _ (状态,如have fun/learn a lot). I recommend this club because _ (理由). You can _ (收获1) and _ (收获2). Come and sign up for it—you will _ (感受)! 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $