内容正文:
Unit 9 It’s important to have good habits. 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“良好习惯与健康成长”主题,写一篇习惯分享稿或成长感悟短文,介绍自己的好习惯/坏习惯、对生活的影响及改进计划,达成以下目标:
1.能正确使用本单元“习惯与成长”相关核心词汇(如habit、healthy、regular、balance、concentrate、effort、energy、lifestyle、responsibility、independence等)及短语(talk over、get through、take care of、depend on、make a difference、in order to、be responsible for等);
2.能熟练运用“It’s important (not) to do sth.”句型表达习惯的重要性,用一般现在时描述常态习惯,用情态动词(should、need to、had better)提出改进建议,正确使用“the more...the more...”结构强调习惯的影响;
3.能按“习惯介绍→影响分析→改进/坚持计划”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“好习惯成就好人生,自律助力成长”的单元主题。
题目解析
1.体裁:分享类记叙文或感悟类短文,兼具纪实性与指导性;
2.人称:第一人称(分享个人习惯与感悟);
3.核心要求
○ 内容:覆盖“1-2个核心习惯(良好/不良)、2-3个习惯对生活的具体影响(学习/健康/人际关系等)、1个明确的坚持/改进计划”3个要点;
○ 字数:80–100词,习惯描述真实具体,影响分析贴合实际,建议可行,符合九年级学生语言水平,体现对习惯与成长关系的思考。
思路点拨
1.开头:明确介绍自己的核心习惯(参考课本杜飞的作息习惯、王乐的饮食与交友习惯等案例),用简洁形容词概括习惯特点(如healthy/useful/unhealthy),引出习惯对生活的影响;
2.中间:分析习惯带来的具体影响(如良好习惯提升学习效率、改善健康;不良习惯导致精力不足、影响成绩),结合具体细节(如每天阅读30分钟提升写作能力、常吃垃圾食品导致疲劳)增强说服力,运用单元核心句型强化表达;
3.结尾:提出坚持良好习惯或改进不良习惯的具体计划(如制定作息表、寻求家人监督),呼应单元“自律塑造习惯,习惯改变人生”的核心主题,传递积极的成长态度。
写作模板(逐段拆解)
第一段:习惯介绍
基础句式:I have a ________ (形容词,如good/bad) habit of ________ (习惯内容,如reading books every night/eating junk food). I’ve kept this habit for ________ (时长) and it has a great influence on my life.
示例:I have a good habit of reading English books for 30 minutes every night. I’ve kept this habit for two years and it has a great influence on my English learning and daily life.
第二段:影响分析
基础句式:On one hand, this habit ________ (积极/消极影响1,如helps me remember more words and improve my reading skills). On the other hand, ________ (积极/消极影响2,如it makes me more patient and careful in doing things). The more I stick to it, the ________ (比较级,如better I become) in related areas.
示例:On one hand, this habit helps me remember more new words and improve my reading speed. I can now understand English articles more easily. On the other hand, it makes me more patient when facing difficult tasks. The more I read, the more interested I am in English, which makes my lessons more enjoyable.
第三段:坚持/改进计划
基础句式:To keep/improve this habit, I plan to ________ (具体计划1,如choose more interesting books and share what I read with friends). Besides, I will ________ (具体计划2,如set a fixed time every day and ask my parents to remind me). I believe good habits will lead me to a better future!
示例:To keep this good habit, I plan to choose more types of English books, such as stories and news. Besides, I will join a reading club to share my ideas with classmates. I also want to write short reviews after reading to deepen my understanding. I believe sticking to this habit will help me make greater progress in English!
范文
My Good Habit of Exercising Regularly
I have a good habit of exercising for 40 minutes every morning—running, jumping rope or playing basketball. I started this habit when I was in Grade 8, and it has changed my life a lot.
Before, I was often tired in class and easy to catch colds. But now, regular exercise gives me plenty of energy, so I can concentrate better on my lessons. It also helps me relax after long hours of study. The more I exercise, the healthier and more confident I become. I even made some friends in the sports park who share the same habit.
To keep this habit, I make a weekly exercise plan and ask my brother to exercise with me. On rainy days, I do indoor sports like yoga. I know exercise is not just about keeping fit—it’s about building a strong will. I will stick to this habit forever to stay healthy and positive!
范文中文翻译
我定期锻炼的好习惯
我有一个好习惯,每天早上锻炼40分钟——跑步、跳绳或者打篮球。我从八年级开始养成这个习惯,它极大地改变了我的生活。
以前,我在课堂上经常感到疲惫,还容易感冒。但现在,定期锻炼给了我充足的精力,让我能更好地专注于功课。它还能帮助我在长时间学习后放松身心。我锻炼得越多,就变得越健康、越自信。我甚至在体育公园认识了一些有同样习惯的朋友。
为了坚持这个习惯,我制定了每周锻炼计划,并让哥哥和我一起锻炼。下雨天时,我就做瑜伽等室内运动。我知道,锻炼不仅仅是为了保持健康,更是为了培养坚强的意志。我会永远坚持这个习惯,保持健康和积极的心态!
素材积累
核心短语
talk over 商量;讨论
get through 度过;通过
take care of 照顾;处理
depend on 依赖;依靠
make a difference 产生影响
in order to 为了
be responsible for 对……负责
regular exercise 定期锻炼
concentrate on 专注于
plenty of energy 充足的精力
stick to 坚持
weekly plan 周计划
indoor sports 室内运动
build a strong will 培养坚强的意志
stay healthy 保持健康
基础句型(含本单元重点)
基础句型
仿写句子
It’s important for teenagers to ________.
It’s important for teenagers to get enough sleep.
The more ________, the more ________.
The more we read, the more knowledge we gain.
I have a habit of ________.
I have a habit of drinking a glass of water after getting up.
This habit helps me ________.
This habit helps me stay energetic all day.
To improve this habit, I will ________.
To improve this habit, I will set a reminder on my phone.
好句集锦
1.Good habits are like little seeds—they grow slowly but bring great changes to our lives.
2.It’s never too late to develop good habits or give up bad ones.
3.Habits shape our character, and character determines our future.
谚语
1.Practice makes perfect.(熟能生巧)
2.Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.(早睡早起,使人健康、富有且明智)
学生写作填空练习版
My Important Habit
I have a ________ habit of ________. I’ve had this habit for ________, and it affects my life a lot.
This habit helps me ________. For example, ________ (具体事例). However, sometimes it ________ (潜在问题或改进点). The more I ________, the ________ I become.
To keep/improve this habit, I plan to ________ first. Then I will ________. I believe that good habits are the key to success. I will stick to it and ________!
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