Unit 2 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes. 写作专项学案 2025-2026学年鲁教版五四制（2012）九年级英语全册

Unit 2 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“青少年权利与规则”主题，写一封求助信或观点表达短文，围绕青少年是否应被允许自主做决定（如选择衣物、兼职、染发等）展开，介绍相关争议、个人立场及理由，达成以下目标： 1.能正确使用本单元“权利与规则”相关核心词汇（如license、safety、pierce、part-time、regret、educate、support、decision、society、choice等）及短语（talk back、keep...away from、make one’s own decision、get in the way of、end up、take care of等）； 2.能熟练运用“should be allowed to do” “should not be allowed to do”表达观点，用连词although、but、so that梳理逻辑关系，用一般现在时陈述常态观点，用一般过去时叙述具体事例； 3.能按“观点呈现→理由阐述→总结呼吁”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“规则守护成长，自主助力独立”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁：观点类短文或书信，兼具议论性与抒情性； 2.人称：第一人称（表达个人观点与经历）； 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容：覆盖“1个青少年自主决策相关话题、2-3条支持或反对的理由、1个合理建议或呼吁”3个要点； ￮ 字数：80–100词，观点明确，理由充分，语言符合九年级学生水平，体现对规则与自主平衡的思考。 思路点拨 1.开头：明确提出核心观点（如“青少年应被允许选择自己的衣物” “十六岁不应被允许兼职”），参考课本Liu Yu的跑步梦想争议、Anna的穿耳洞诉求等案例，用简洁句式引出话题争议点； 2.中间：分点阐述理由（如支持自主选择衣物的理由：展现个性、增强自信；反对青少年兼职的理由：影响学业、缺乏安全保障），结合具体事例或单元核心句型增强说服力，用连词使逻辑更连贯； 3.结尾：总结观点，提出合理建议（如“在父母指导下自主决策” “平衡兴趣与规则”），呼应单元“规则与自主并重”的核心主题，传递积极的成长态度。 写作模板（逐段拆解） 第一段：观点呈现与话题引入 基础句式：I think teenagers ________ (should/should not) be allowed to ________ (核心话题，如choose their own clothes/take part-time jobs). Different people have different ideas about this, but I believe my opinion is reasonable. 示例：I think teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes. Some parents think they are too young to make good choices, but I believe this can help us develop independence. 第二段：理由阐述与事例支撑 基础句式：First, ________ (理由1，如choosing our own clothes shows our personality). We can express our likes and dislikes through our clothes. Second, ________ (理由2，如it helps us learn to make decisions by ourselves). Although our parents may have better taste, we need to practice making choices for our future life. 示例：First, choosing our own clothes shows our personality. We can wear clothes that match our hobbies and moods, which makes us more confident. Second, it helps us learn to take responsibility for our choices. If we pick inappropriate clothes, we will learn from the experience. Although parents care about us, they shouldn’t control every detail of our lives. 第三段：总结呼吁与合理建议 基础句式：In my opinion, ________ (重申观点). Teenagers need chances to grow independently. Parents and teachers should ________ (建议，如support our reasonable choices and guide us when we are wrong). Only in this way can we balance rules and freedom. 示例：In my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes. It’s a small step towards independence but means a lot to us. Parents should trust us more and give us proper guidance instead of saying “no” directly. Balancing rules and freedom will help us grow into responsible people! 范文 Should Teenagers Be Allowed to Take Part-Time Jobs? I don’t think teenagers under sixteen should be allowed to take part-time jobs. Many teenagers want to earn money by themselves, but it’s not a good idea for young kids. First, part-time jobs will get in the way of our studies. We need enough time to study and rest during our teenage years. Second, we are not mature enough to protect ourselves. Some workplaces may be unsafe for teenagers. Although earning money teaches responsibility, there are better ways like doing housework for pocket money. In my opinion, teenagers should focus on their growth and studies first. When we are old enough and can balance work and study, we can take part-time jobs. Parents and society should protect us and give us a safe environment to grow up. That’s the best way to help us become responsible adults. 范文中文翻译 青少年应该被允许做兼职吗？ 我认为十六岁以下的青少年不应该被允许做兼职。很多青少年想自己赚钱，但这对小孩子来说并不是一个好主意。 首先，兼职会影响我们的学业。青少年时期我们需要足够的时间学习和休息。其次，我们还不够成熟，无法保护自己。有些工作场所对青少年来说可能不安全。虽然赚钱能培养责任感，但有更好的方式，比如做家务赚取零花钱。 在我看来，青少年应该首先专注于成长和学习。当我们足够大，能够平衡工作和学习时，再做兼职也不迟。父母和社会应该保护我们，给我们一个安全的成长环境。这才是帮助我们成为有责任感的成年人的最佳方式！ 素材积累 核心短语 talk back 回嘴；顶嘴 keep...away from 避免接近；远离 make one’s own decision 自己做决定 get in the way of 挡……的路；妨碍 end up 最终成为；最后处于 take care of 照顾；处理 part-time job 兼职工作 pierce ears 穿耳洞 focus on 专注于 balance work and study 平衡工作和学习 proper guidance 适当的指导 safe environment 安全的环境 develop independence 培养独立性 take responsibility 承担责任 基础句型（含本单元重点） 基础句型 仿写句子 I think teenagers should be allowed to ________. I think teenagers should be allowed to choose their own hobbies. I don’t agree that ________ should be allowed to ________. I don’t agree that sixteen-year-olds should be allowed to drive. Although ________, ________. Although part-time jobs are interesting, they may affect our studies. ________ is important because it helps us ________. Making our own decisions is important because it helps us grow independently. Parents should ________ instead of ________. Parents should guide us instead of controlling every choice we make. 好句集锦 1.Rules are made to protect teenagers, not to stop us from growing independently. 2.Proper freedom helps teenagers learn responsibility, and reasonable rules keep us safe. 3.The balance between rules and freedom is the key to teenagers’ healthy growth. 谚语 1.Freedom lies in the proper limits of rules.（自由在于规则的合理边界） 2.Experience is the best teacher—teenagers need chances to make their own choices.（经验是最好的老师——青少年需要自己做选择的机会） 学生写作填空练习版 My Opinion on Teenagers’ Independence I think teenagers ________ (should/should not) be allowed to ________. Some people disagree with this because ________, but I have my own reasons. First, ________. It helps us ________. Second, ________. Although ________, we can learn ________ from it. We are not kids anymore and need to practice ________. In my opinion, ________. Parents should ________ instead of ________. Only when we balance ________ and ________ can we grow into responsible people. Let’s have more chances to ________! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $