Unit 3 Animal Friends 写作专项学案 2025-2026学年鲁教版五四制六年级英语下册

Unit 3 Animal Friends 写作专项学案 写作目标 结合本单元“动物朋友”主题，写一篇班级分享稿或线上论坛帖子，介绍自己最喜爱的动物、外形特征、生活习性及喜爱原因，达成以下目标： 1.能正确使用本单元“动物与保护”相关核心词汇（如animal、lion、tiger、monkey、elephant、fox、penguin、dangerous、cute、strong、clever、forest、sea、food、protect等）及短语（take care of、look after、in danger、cut down、pick up、one another等）； 2.能熟练运用Wh-疑问句（what/where/why引导）描述动物相关信息，用形容词修饰动物特征，用一般现在时描述动物常态； 3.能按“动物基本信息→外形与习性→喜爱原因与保护意识”的逻辑完成写作，贴合“动物是人类朋友，保护动物人人有责”的单元主题。 题目解析 1.体裁：介绍类记叙文或帖子，兼具纪实性与呼吁性； 2.人称：第一人称（分享个人喜好与观点）； 3.核心要求 ￮ 内容：覆盖“1种喜爱的动物、2-3个外形/习性特征、2个喜爱原因、1个保护相关观点”4个要点； ￮ 字数：60–80词，语言简单易懂，描述准确生动，情感真挚，体现对动物的热爱与保护意识，符合六年级学生语言水平。 思路点拨 1.开头：明确介绍自己最喜爱的动物，参考课本Malee对大象的介绍、Peter对企鹅的描述案例，用简洁形容词概括动物核心特质，引出下文； 2.中间：描述动物的外形特征（如长鼻子、大眼睛、黑白皮毛）和生活习性（如食物、栖息地、特殊能力），用具体细节增强画面感，再用because说明喜爱原因（如聪明、友善、有灵性）； 3.结尾：表达对动物的保护意识（如拒绝伤害、保护栖息地），呼应单元“关爱动物，守护自然”的核心主题，传递积极的环保观念。 写作模板（逐段拆解） 第一段：动物基本信息与核心特质 基础句式：My favourite animal is the ________. It is a ________ (形容词，如cute/strong/clever) animal. It mainly lives in ________ (栖息地，如forests/grasslands/the sea). I love it because it is so special. 示例：My favourite animal is the elephant. It is a strong and clever animal. It mainly lives in forests in Asia and Africa. I love it because it is so friendly and interesting. 第二段：外形与习性描述 基础句式：The ________ (动物名称) has ________ (外形特征，如a long trunk/big ears/black and white fur). It likes eating ________ (食物，如grass/leaves/fish). It can ________ (特殊能力，如pick up heavy things/swim fast/climb trees). They often live in groups and look after one another. 示例：The elephant has a long trunk and big ears. It likes eating grass and leaves. It can pick up heavy things with its trunk and drink water easily. They often live in groups and look after their babies carefully. 第三段：喜爱原因与保护意识 基础句式：I admire it not only because ________ (原因1，如it is clever and kind) but also because ________ (原因2，如it plays an important role in nature). Now some ________ (动物名称) are in danger because people ________ (威胁因素，如cut down forests/kill them). We should ________ (保护行动，如protect their homes/not hurt them). Animals are our friends! 示例：I admire it not only because it is clever and kind but also because it helps keep the forest balanced. Now some elephants are in danger because people cut down their homes and kill them for ivory. We should protect their habitats and never buy things made of ivory. Animals are our friends! 范文 My Favourite Animal—The Giant Panda My favourite animal is the giant panda. It is a cute and lovely animal. It lives in the forests of Sichuan, China. It is one of the most precious animals in the world. The panda has black and white fur. Its eyes are black, like two round black stones. It likes eating bamboo very much—it eats about 12 kilograms of bamboo a day! It is very gentle and seldom attacks people. It often sleeps in the daytime and looks for food in the afternoon. I love pandas because they are so cute and unique. But their living spaces are getting smaller. We should protect their forests and not destroy their homes. Let’s work together to make pandas live happily! 范文中文翻译 我最喜爱的动物——大熊猫 我最喜爱的动物是大熊猫。它是一种可爱又惹人喜欢的动物，生活在中国四川的森林里，是世界上最珍贵的动物之一。 大熊猫长着黑白相间的皮毛，眼睛是黑色的，像两颗圆圆的黑石头。它非常喜欢吃竹子——一天大约要吃12公斤竹子！它性格温顺，很少攻击人类，常常白天睡觉，下午寻找食物。 我爱大熊猫，因为它们既可爱又独特。但它们的生存空间正在变小。我们应该保护它们的森林，不破坏它们的家园。让我们一起努力，让大熊猫快乐地生活！ 素材积累 核心短语 giant panda 大熊猫 black and white fur 黑白相间的皮毛 live in forests 生活在森林里 look for food 寻找食物 precious animal 珍贵的动物 in danger 处于危险之中 cut down forests 砍伐森林 protect habitats 保护栖息地 look after 照顾 one another 互相 pick up 捡起 special ability 特殊能力 gentle animal 温顺的动物 unique animal 独特的动物 基础句型（含本单元重点） 基础句型 仿写句子 My favourite animal is ________ because ________. My favourite animal is the monkey because it’s clever. It lives in ________ and likes eating ________. It lives in grasslands and likes eating meat. It has ________ and can ________. It has a long neck and can eat leaves on tall trees. Why do you like ________? Because ________. Why do you like penguins? Because they’re cute. We should ________ to protect ________. We should not litter to protect birds. 好句集锦 1.Animals are our best friends—they share the earth with us and make nature more wonderful. 2.Every animal has its own charm; we should respect and protect them. 3.Protecting animals’ homes is protecting our own home. 谚语 1.Love animals, love our planet.（爱动物，爱我们的星球） 2.Animals are friends, not food.（动物是朋友，不是食物） 学生写作填空练习版 My Favourite Animal My favourite animal is the ________. It is ________ and ________. It mainly lives in ________. I think it is one of the most wonderful animals. The ________ has ________ (外形特征). It likes eating ________ and often ________ (习性动作). It can ________ (特殊能力) very well. They usually live together and ________ one another. I like it because ________ and ________. But some of them are in danger now. People ________ (威胁行为) which hurts them. We should ________ (保护行动) to help them. Let’s love and protect animals! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $