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中考英语书面表达 —— 短文类作文(题目 + 例文 + 高分句型)
一、记叙文:战胜恐惧
题目(2024・本溪三模)
在成长过程中,每个人都有恐惧的事物,逃避不是办法,战胜它才是最佳选择。请结合你的经历,谈谈你曾经恐惧什么、为什么恐惧、如何战胜恐惧以及感想,词数 100 左右。
例文
Everyone has their own fears, and mine was running the 800-meter race. I was short and rarely exercised, so I always felt nervous just thinking about it—my legs would go weak, and I could barely breathe after a short run.
To overcome it, my PE teacher made a training plan for me. I started with jogging 30 minutes a day and gradually increased the distance. Every time I wanted to give up, my classmates cheered me on. After two months of hard training, I successfully finished the race in the PE exam.
This experience taught me that fear itself is scarier than the thing we fear. With courage and persistence, we can overcome any difficulty.
高分句型
1. So...that...(如此…… 以至于……,强调恐惧的程度)
2. To overcome it, sb. did sth.(不定式作目的状语,表达行动目的)
3. With courage and persistence, sb. can...(介词短语作状语,点明成功的关键)
二、说明文:如何成为新时代好学生
题目(2024・通辽)
作为新时代的学生,应注重全面发展,努力成为品德高尚、乐学善思、身心健康、兴趣广泛的人。请以 “How to Be Good Students” 为题,写一篇不少于 80 词的短文,开头已给出。
例文
How to Be Good StudentsAs students in the new era, we are supposed to develop fully. To be good students, we should first have good moral character—be honest to others, helpful to classmates, and grateful to those who care for us.
Second, we must love learning. We should think creatively when facing problems, help each other in study, and never be afraid of difficulties. Third, physical and mental health is essential. We need to take more exercise, such as running and playing ball games, and learn to deal with pressure bravely.
Additionally, developing diverse interests like painting or reading can enrich our lives. As long as we stick to these principles, we will grow into excellent students who can contribute to society.
高分句型
1. To be good students, we should first...Second...Third...(分点论述,逻辑清晰)
2. As long as we stick to these principles, we will...(条件状语从句,表达实现目标的途径)
3. Grow into excellent students who...(定语从句,明确好学生的特质)
三、说明文:环境保护
题目(2024・博山区三模)
近年来雾霾天气频发,环境问题日益突出。请以 “The Green Planet” 为题,写一篇不少于 100 词的短文,分析环境问题,阐述保护环境的主张和具体做法。
例文
The Green PlanetNow our planet is facing serious environmental problems. Smog often covers cities, making it hard to breathe, and plastic waste pollutes rivers and harms wildlife. These problems are mainly caused by human activities like overusing resources and littering.
Protecting the environment is everyone's duty. As students, we can do our part. First, we should use reusable bags instead of plastic ones when shopping. Second, turn off lights and taps immediately after use to save energy. Third, we can plant trees with our classmates to improve air quality.
Moreover, we should call on our family and friends to join in environmental protection. A green planet is vital for our future—let's take action now to make the earth cleaner and more beautiful.
高分句型
1. Making it hard to breathe(现在分词作结果状语,说明雾霾的危害)
2. Be mainly caused by...(明确因果关系,表达准确)
3. Call on sb. to do sth.(号召他人参与,增强号召力)
四、说明文:劳动教育
题目(2024・衡阳模拟)
针对部分学生不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象,国家印发了劳动教育相关意见。请结合自身体会,就如何培养劳动精神给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,给出至少两条建议,词数 80 左右,开头已给出。
例文
A guideline on hard-working spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get a hard-working spirit. I totally agree with it, as labor teaches us responsibility and independence.
First, schools should offer more labor classes, where we can learn practical skills like growing vegetables and repairing small things. Second, we should do more housework at home, such as cleaning rooms, washing clothes, and cooking simple meals. These tasks let us understand the value of labor.
Additionally, participating in after-school activities like planting trees or cleaning parks is also a good choice. Through labor, we can grow into hard-working and responsible people.
高分句型
1. Where we can learn practical skills(定语从句,补充说明劳动课的作用)
2. Such as doing...(举例说明具体劳动内容,使建议更具体)
3. Through labor, we can...(介词短语作状语,强调劳动的意义)
五、说明文:课外阅读现状分析与建议
题目(2024・武都区模拟)
目前许多中学生课外阅读量很少,新课标对课外阅读提出了更高要求。请结合表格提示,写一篇 80 词左右的短文,分析现状、说明阅读好处并给出建议,开头已给出。
例文
At present many students do little reading after class. Here are several reasons. Most students have too much homework, leaving no time for reading. Some haven't developed a reading habit and prefer to spend free time on phones or TV.
However, reading has great advantages. It not only enriches our knowledge but also improves our writing skills and makes our life more colorful.
To change the situation, we can form reading groups to share experiences with classmates. Teachers can recommend interesting books, and we can set a daily reading goal of 20 minutes. Let's start reading today and enjoy its benefits!
高分句型
1. Leaving no time for reading(现在分词作结果状语,说明作业多的影响)
2. Not only...but also...(强调阅读的多重好处)
3. Set a daily reading goal of...(提出具体建议,可操作性强)
六、记叙文:面对苦恼
题目(2024・兰陵县四模)
作为中学生,难免会遇到苦恼与问题。请以 “How I face my trouble” 为题,写一篇不少于 80 词的短文,谈谈你对困难的看法、一次具体经历及给青少年的建议。
例文
How I face my troubleIn my opinion, difficulties in study or life are not obstacles but chances to grow. They teach us to be brave and persistent.
Last term, I struggled with English grammar. No matter how hard I tried, I always made mistakes in exams. I felt frustrated but didn't give up. I asked my English teacher for help, and she told me to take notes and do more exercises. I followed her advice, reviewing grammar rules every evening and practicing with exercises. Gradually, my grammar improved a lot.
I think teenagers should face trouble bravely. Don't be afraid to ask for help, and never give up easily. Remember, every problem has a solution, and overcoming it makes us stronger.
高分句型
1. Are not obstacles but chances(not...but... 结构,表达对困难的积极看法)
2. No matter how hard I tried(让步状语从句,强调努力的过程)
3. Gradually, my grammar improved a lot(副词修饰句子,使表达更连贯)
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