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Unit 4 写作专项学案
写作目标
结合本单元“个人成长与变化”主题,写一篇班级分享稿,介绍自己在外貌、性格或习惯上的变化及原因,分享成长感悟,号召同学接纳成长、拥抱变化,达成以下目标:
1. 能正确使用本单元“成长与变化”相关核心词汇(如humorous、silent、active、shy、private、influence等)及短语;
1. 能熟练运用“used to + 动词原形” “I have changed a lot since...”等句型描述过去与现在的差异,用连词(because、however、now)衔接逻辑;
1. 能按“过去的自己→现在的变化→成长感悟”的逻辑完成写作,贴合“接纳成长、突破自我”的单元主题。
题目解析
1. 体裁:分享类记叙文,讲述个人成长变化与感悟;
1. 人称:第一人称(描述个人经历与变化);
1. 核心要求
○ 内容:覆盖“1-2个具体变化(外貌/性格/习惯)、变化的原因、成长感悟”3个要点;
○ 字数:80–100词,时态以一般过去时(描述过去)和一般现在时(描述现在)为主,灵活运用“used to”结构。
思路点拨
1. 开头:描述过去的自己(如性格内向、害怕发言、不爱运动等,参考课本Candy、Li Wen的成长案例),用“used to”句型突出过去的特征;
1. 中间:说明变化的原因(如他人鼓励、兴趣培养、环境影响等),对比现在的自己,体现变化后的积极状态;
1. 结尾:分享成长感悟(如突破自我的快乐、变化的意义),号召同学勇敢改变、拥抱成长。
写作模板(逐段拆解)
第一段:过去的自己
基础句式:I used to be... I was always... I didn’t dare to... I spent most of my time...
示例:I used to be a silent and shy boy/girl. I was always quiet in class and never dared to ask questions. I didn’t like talking to strangers and spent most of my time reading alone.
第二段:现在的变化及原因
基础句式:However, I have changed a lot since... Now I am... I can... The change happened because...
示例:However, I have changed a lot since I joined the school English club. Now I am active and humorous. I can speak confidently in front of the class and make many friends. The change happened because my club teacher always encouraged me to express myself.
第三段:成长感悟与倡议
基础句式:Growing up means changing. I realize that... Let’s... Remember that...
示例:Growing up means changing. I realize that we should not be afraid of stepping out of our comfort zone. Let’s accept our changes and try new things bravely. Remember that every small change can make us better!
范文
My Journey of Change
I used to be a shy girl who was afraid of speaking in public. I used to hide behind my textbook in class and never joined group activities. Even talking to new classmates made my face turn red.
Everything changed when my teacher asked me to host the class party. At first, I wanted to refuse, but she encouraged me to try. I practiced hard every day, and with my classmates’ support, I did a great job. Now I am outgoing and confident. I often take part in school activities and enjoy making new friends.
Change is not easy, but it is wonderful. It teaches us to break through ourselves. I used to think I could never be brave, but now I know growth comes from facing fears. Let’s embrace changes and become the best version of ourselves!
范文中文翻译
我的蜕变之旅
我曾经是个害羞的女孩,害怕在公共场合发言。我过去总是在课堂上躲在课本后面,从不参加集体活动。甚至和新同学说话都会让我脸红。
当老师让我主持班级派对时,一切都改变了。起初我想拒绝,但她鼓励我尝试。我每天努力练习,在同学们的支持下,我做得非常出色。现在我外向又自信,经常参加学校活动,也喜欢结交新朋友。
改变并不容易,但却十分美好。它教会我们突破自我。我曾经以为自己永远不会勇敢,但现在我知道,成长源于直面恐惧。让我们拥抱变化,成为最好的自己!
素材积累
核心短语
used to be 过去是
hide behind 躲在……后面
dare to do 敢于做
step out of comfort zone 走出舒适区
break through 突破
take part in 参加
encourage sb. to do 鼓励某人做
turn red 变红
make friends 交朋友
grow up 成长
embrace changes 拥抱变化
from time to time 时常
in public 公开地
基础句型(含本单元重点)
基础句型
仿写句子
I used to + 动词原形
I used to wear glasses and have short hair.
I didn’t use to + 动词原形
I didn’t use to like sports.
I have changed a lot since...
I have changed a lot since I entered junior high school.
Now I am + 形容词
Now I am more confident and helpful.
好句集锦
1. Growth is about changing for the better, not losing our true selves.
1. The biggest change in life is overcoming the fears that once held us back.
1. Every small step of change leads to a better version of ourselves.
谚语
1. Change is the only constant in life.(变化是生活中唯一不变的东西)
1. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.(千里之行,始于足下)
学生写作填空练习版
My Journey of Change
I used to be... I was always... I didn’t dare to... I used to spend my free time...
However, I have changed a lot because... Now I am... I can... I often... The change makes me feel...
Growing up is full of changes. I realize that... Let’s... Remember that every change helps us grow. Let’s embrace growth and...!
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