Unit 11 单元主题写作指导-【鸿鹄志·名师测控】2025-2026学年九年级下册英语（人教版）陕西专版

英语Ⅱ九年级下册 单元主题写作指导 主题解读 典型例题 本单元话题以“情感”展开，情境属于2022 假如你是李华，你的好朋友isa不久前参 新课标“人与自我”主题范畴中的“做人与做 加达人秀节目被淘汰，她被这次失败所困扰而 事”这一主题群，涉及子主题“自我认识，自我 无心学习。你得知此事后打算开导她。请你给 管理，自我提升”。话题要求同学们能讨论不 她写一封电子邮件，结合以下要点给她提建议。 同事物对情感态度的影响，如天气、颜色、音乐 要点：1.正确看待达人秀节目，享受参与 等对人的影响，收到礼物产生的影响，做某事 的乐趣，不必太在意结果； 2.还有很多实现理想的途径，例 失败产生的影响等。 如… 素材积累 3.好好学习，同时不要放弃个人爱好。 1.精彩开头句 要求：1.不少于70词； ①I'm sorry to hear that you're.… 2.必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥。 2I'd like to share my thoughts on... 【写作步骤】 2.精彩中间句 Step1审题立意 DSince...,there is no need to... 审体裁—应用文 审时态 一一 般现在时 2Why don't you...each time you feel down? 审人称— 第二人称、第三人称 3You should...with courage rather than fear in Step2写作提纲 your heart. 开头：表明写作意图 CI'm sorry to hear that... 3.精彩结尾句 CI'd like to share my thoughts on... -Talent shows may change... DDon't be hard on yourself.It's never too late Besides.... 中间：提出具体建议 to change. What's more,... At last,… 2I hope you will get better soon. 结尾：书写总结语 I hope you will... Step3范文点睛 Dear Lisa. ① ①用“I'm sorry to hear that.. 句型来引出主题。 I'd like to share my thoughts on this matter with you. ②用“There is no need to do Yes,talent shows may change your future.They offer the chance to show your sth.”句型来表达没必要过分 talent,and give you a way to make your dream come true.Since only a few people 看重结果。 are truly talented,② Just enjoy the process.Besides,3 ③用动词不定式作后置定语 来表达有许多办法去实现 For example,you can go to college to study music.And you can also join 梦想。 a music club to show your talent.What's more,as a teenager,4 ④用spare no effort to do sth. At 与develop one's interests结构 last,⑤ 来说明青少年更应该做 Try to talk with your parents,your teachers or your 的事。 classmates.Maybe they will help you. ⑤用if引导的条件状语从句 I hope you will get better soon. 来表达心情不好时应勇敢表 Yours, 达自已的想法。 Li Hua 10 【乐智英语】Every man has his faults..金无足赤，人无完人。 Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. 篇章演练 The that Raised Me Up 善行善言，是人生路上的明灯，照亮他人， 也照亮自己。温暖的语言和行为能传递巨大 的能量，请以“The that Raised Me Up” 为题，参考思维导图中的提示内容并结合自己 的实际情况写一篇不少于70词的英语短文。 Who The that What Why Raised Me Up 要求：1.补全标题； 2.必须包含思维导图中的至少两条 信息； 3.适当表达自己的看法及感受； 4.不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 单元核心考点集训 考点一 agreement的用法 考点三“the more..,the more..”与其他比 微语段训练)用agreement的适当形式填空。 较级的用法 Lisa wanted to go to Sanya alone for the I.用括号内所给单词的适当形式填空。 coming summer vacation.Her father 1.My hair is as (long）as Lily's. with her.But her mother because 2.Students now use (few）throwaway she worried about her safety.Finally,they reached products than before. -they would go there together. 3.The better the food is,the 考点二would rather的用法 (popular)the restaurant will be. 用括号内所给单词的适当形式填空。 4.Have you kept taking exercise recently?You 1.Daniel would rather （wear)green look much (thin)and prettier now. than red.He thinks red is a girl's color. Ⅱ.完成句子：根据所给汉语意思，用单词或短 2.Susan would rather not attend 语完成下列英文句子。 the DIY course on Sunday.She wants to teach 5.世界上越来越多的人喜欢学习汉语。 herself. people like to learn Chinese 3.-Exercising is good for our health. in the world. -You're right.So I'd rather (take)an 6.很多人相信，一个人锻炼得越多，就会越健康。 hour's walk than sit)in front of the Many people believe that the more a person computer. exercises. he will be. 【乐智英语】One man's fault is another man's lesson.前车之鉴。 11参考答案 Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. 第一课时Section A(1a-2d) I.1.eat 2.harder 3.spending 4.really 5.to deal 6.sleepy;asleep II.1.rather 2.lately 3.drove 4.unhappy;want 5.friendship II.1.in common 2.feels left out 3.would rather 4.The more;the more 5.be friends with IV.1.I was moved by a story 2.What's the story/it about 3.What happened 4.What does the girl do 5.Of course/Yes.I do V.1.E2.C3.A4.B5.D 第二课时Section A(3a-3c) 弥 I.1.king's 2.palaces 3.likes 4.eating 5.wealthy II.1.queen 2.examined 3.neither 4.banker 5.paler 帐 IlI.1.wealth 2.call in 3.for no reason 4.took the position of 5.neither;nor V.1.A2.A3.C4.C 第三课时Section A（Grammar Focus-4b) 语法精练 I.1.us 2.to do 3.heard 4.uncomfortable 5.think 她 Ⅱ.1.C2.B3.A4.B5.C II.1.make her my sister 2.make our life colorful 3.makes it possible 课时精练 I.1.grey 2.badly 3.uncomfortable 4.threw 5.better II.1.grey sky 2.lemon tea 3.feel like 4.To start with 邯 Ⅲ.1.B2.A3.C4.A5.D6.C7.A8.D9.B10.C 第四课时Section B(1a-le) I.1.saying 2.man's 3.retumed 4.though 5.suddenly II.1.without 2.searched for 3.giving up Il.1.the strange-looking hen 2.surprised 3.made lots of money by selling the golden eggs 4.agreed 5.we should think twice before doing things(合理即可) i 线 第五课时Section B(2a-3b) I.1.goals 2.coaches'3.agreement 4.weight;weighs 5.disappointing;disappointed II.1.faults 2.courage 3.Nodding 4.shoulder 5.Besides;except IlI.1.is hard on 2.rather than 3.let him down/disappoint him 4.kick off 5.pull together W.1.B2.B3.D4.D 单元主题写作指导 典型例题 Step3范文点睛 DI'm sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in the talent show 2there is no need to take the result too seriously 3there are many ways to achieve your dream you should spare no effort to study and develop your interests at the same time 5if you are really feeling down,I think you should be brave enough to express your ideas 第1页（共32页） 篇章演练 The Words that Raised Me Up Warm words always have magic power to make us confident and full of hope. I still remember the first time I learned to swim.At first the coach taught me some basic swimming skills.Though I practiced hard,I still couldn't make any progress.I felt down and doubted that I was born without the ability to swim.The coach seemed to know something from the sadness on my face.He comforted me and said,"Hard work is half of success.I believe you will make it."Suddenly,I felt full of energy again.These words gave me the courage to keep on swimming.Finally,I learned to swim well and did the best! Thanks to these words,I challenged myself and became a better man. 单元核心考点集训 考点一 agreed;disagreed;agreement 考点二 1.wear 2.not attend 3.take;sit 考点三 1.long 2.fewer 3.more popular 4.thinner 5.More and more 6.the healthier 陕西特色题型专练 I.听力材料 听填信息。 本题你将听到一段独白，读两遍。请根据独白内容，用所听到的信息完成下列各题。（每空 不超过三个单词。) Anything can make you angry,such as a lost wallet,someone's unfriendly words,failing an exam and so on.When you're angry,your body goes through lots of changes.All of them are bad for you.The best thing for you to do is to be patient.Here are some ways for help.Count to ten-it really works!By the time you say“nine”and then“ten”,8O%of your angry feelings will be gone.Talk to someone about what caused you to get angry.Telling someone else will help you to realize the reason why you got angry.Once you know the reason,you can work on improving your ability to deal with your feelings.Get some exercise.It can help you relax.Say something funny.Humorous words will always make you feel better. 听力答案 1.changes 2.angry feelings 3.realize 4.relax 5.Humorous words Ⅱ.1.B2.D3.C4.A5.D6.C7.B8.A9.D10.B IlI.1.worried 2.his 3.later 4.rice 5.stop 6.patient 7.faster 8.really 9.something 10.found IV.1.seventy-two/72 2.Don't mention what is past;don't undo what is cast;don't grasp what is blast 3.not perfect/never perfect 4.Guan Zhong 5.forgiving others may let us be happier/how to treat bad things in our lives(合理即可) Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected. 第一课时Section A(1a-2d) I.1.backpacks 2.overslept 3.to change 4.luckily 5.unexpected II.1.By the time 2.practicing 3.at least 4.were full of 5.put on IlI.1.go off 2.woke up 3.rushed out of 4.gave her a lift/ride 5.had left IV.1.What's the matter with you/What's wrong 2.Why were you late for school 3.How did you get to school 4.How far is it from your home to school 5.I will try to go to bed earlier V.1.A2.D3.D4.C5.D6.B7.C8.A9.B10.A 第2页（共32页）