内容正文:
求助信结构
第一段:寒暄/自我介绍+表明写信目的(请求帮助)(2句话)
第二段:现有问题(问题+具体阐释)
第三段:请求帮助+表达感谢+期待回复(3句话)
❈第一段:寒暄/自我介绍+表明写信目的(请求帮助)
【给熟人写信—寒暄;给不熟的人写信—自我介绍。】
寒暄:How’s it going these days? 最近过得怎么样?
自我介绍:I am ×××, a Grade 10 student. 我是×××,一个高一学生。(这里要根据题干灵活调整!)
写信目的:
(1) I’m writing to ask you to help me, as/because I meet some problems with sth./ in doing sth.
我写信是想请你帮我一个忙,因为我在做……时遇到了一些问题。
(2) The reason why I am writing to you is that I wonder if you could help me.
我写信给你的原因是我想知道你是否能帮助我。
❈第二段:现有问题(问题+具体阐释)
(1) I'm having a lot of trouble with sth./doing sth.
我在…方面有问题。
(2) My biggest problem is how to do sth.
我最大的问题是如何做某事。
(3) Doing sth. is a big challenge for me.
做某事对我来说是个大挑战。
(4) I am confused about how to do sth.
关于如何做某事我很疑惑。
❈第三段:请求帮助+表达感谢+期待回复
请求帮助:Would you give me some advice? 你能给我一些建议吗?
表达感谢:I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. 如果你能伸出援手,我将感激不尽。
期待回信:Looking forward to your reply. 期待你的回信。
(范文)假如你叫李华,你在高中学习英语的过程中遇到一些问题,想得到英语老师的帮助。请给英语老师写一封求助信。
Dear madam,
I am Li Hua, a student in your English class. I’m writing to ask you to help me, because I meet some problems in learning English.
My biggest problem is how to organize ideas clearly. I often have many thoughts but don't know how to put them in a logical order. Sometimes I also find it hard to use proper words and sentence patterns to express myself.
Would you give me some advice? I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lihua.
练习1:15分钟
假定你是李华,乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。(flight航班;passenger乘客;wallet钱包)
练习2:15分钟
假定你是李华,本学期你校开设了英语口语课,但是你不太适应外教的授课。你决定给英国朋友Andrew写一封邮件,寻求他的帮助。(spoken English口语;get/be used to doing sth.适应)
范文1:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a passenger on your FL753 flight to London. I'm writing to ask for help because I have lost my wallet during the journey.
The wallet is black, made of leather, and contains my passport, bank cards, and some cash. I realized it was missing shortly after getting off the plane. I might have left it in the seat pocket or dropped it while walking to the exit.
Would you please check if it has been found by your staff? I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Andrew,
How's it going these days? I'm writing to ask for help because I have problems in adapting to my new spoken English class.
Our new teacher is a foreigner, and I find it hard to get used to his teaching style. He speaks very fast, and I often cannot catch what he says or understand his questions clearly. This makes me nervous and less willing to speak in class.
Would you give me some advice on how to improve? I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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