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编写说明:本套《同步单元AB卷》紧扣《英语 拓展模块》(高教版2023修订版)教材,以教材单元为基准精准覆盖核心考点,并紧密贴合真题题型。A卷为考点梳理卷,侧重考点分层突破;B卷为单元测试卷,强化综合能力检测,助力师生高效把握教学重点,提升应试能力与知识应用水平。
本卷是Unit 8 Making a Career Plan 的单元测试卷,主要考查词汇、词组、句式句型、情景交际功能话题、阅读能力和书面表达能力。
Unit 8 Making a Career Plan
B卷·单元测试卷
考试时间:60分钟 满分:100分
班级 姓名 学号 成绩
一、单项选择题(共15小题,每小题3分,共45分)
从 A、B、C、D 中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
1.When you make a career plan, you should first be ______ your interests and strengths.
A. clear about B. worried about C. afraid of D. proud of
2.Many young people ______ their career dreams bravely instead of choosing easy jobs.
A. give up B. go after C. look for D. wait for
3.You need to get a professional ______ if you want to work as a nurse in the hospital.
A. quiz B. goal C. diploma D. personality
4.The job as a copywriter is ______, but it can help you improve your writing skills quickly.
A. challenging B. routine C. sour D. romantic
5.______ you finish your internship, you will gain a lot of practical experience.
A. Unless B. Once C. Though D. Before
6.She didn’t go to bed ______ she finished writing her career plan.
A. because B. when C. until D. since
7.A good career advisor can help you ______ your mind about which job to choose.
A. make up B. look up C. pick up D. wake up
8.My brother works in a small ______ and he is responsible for the company’s cloud computing business.
A. appointment B. firm C. nursing D. temper
9.______ the salary of the job is low, many people like it because it is relaxing.
A. If B. Because C. When D. Although
10.We should exercise regularly ______ we can keep healthy and work more efficiently.
A. so that B. as if C. even if D. as soon as
11.You can find a satisfying job ______ there are more chances to develop your skills.
A. whenever B. wherever C. however D. whatever
12.He felt ______ after he successfully completed his first important project at work.
A. trustworthy B. social C. fulfilled D. artistic
13.______ you don’t make a career plan, you may not know what you really want to do in the future.
A. If B. Until C. Since D. As
14.Working with a ______ team is enjoyable because everyone helps each other.
A. tight B. superior C. clear D. trustworthy
15.—Thank you for your advice on my career plan.
—______
A. It’s a pity. B. My pleasure. C. Good luck. D. That’s right.
二、完形填空(共 10 小题;每小题 2 分,满分 20 分)
阅读下面短文,从短文后所给各题的四个选项(A、B、C 和 D)中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
Everyone needs a career plan. A good plan helps you know where you are going and how to get there. Here are some 16 steps to make a great career plan.
First, understand yourself. You need to know your own personality and interests. For example, if you are an 17 person, you may like jobs related to art or music. If you are good at talking with people, a 18 job like a teacher or a salesperson may be perfect for you.
Second, set a clear career 19 . It can be a short-term goal, like getting a diploma in nursing, or a long-term goal, like becoming a famous doctor. Your goal should be realistic, not too easy or too hard to achieve.
Third, make a detailed plan. You should write down what you need to do every year, every month, even every week. For example, if you want to be a copywriter, you can plan to take writing classes and practice writing every day.
Fourth, take action. A plan is just a piece of paper 20 you put it into practice. You may face some difficulties, but don’t lose your 21 . Keep working hard, and you will get closer to your goal.
Finally, review and change your plan regularly. As time goes by, your interests or the job market may change. You need to 22 your plan according to the new situation.
Remember, a good career plan is not something you make once and forget. It is a
23 process that needs your attention all the time. With a good plan and hard work, you will surely have a
24 career and a happy life. So don’t wait. Start making your career plan 25 !
16.A. simple B. difficult C. boring D. strange
17.A. social B. artistic C. trustworthy D. sour
18.A. nursing B. routine C. social D. challenging
19.A. quiz B. goal C. appointment D. temper
20.A. unless B. if C. because D. although
21.A. diploma B. firm C. temper D. mind
22.A. copy B. change C. keep D. find
23.A. one-time B. daily C. weekly D. lifelong
24.A. successful B. romantic C. sour D. tight
25.A. tomorrow B. yesterday C. today D. tonight
三、阅读理解(共5小题,每小题2分,共10分)
阅读下面短文,从短文后所给各题的四个选项(A、B、C 和 D)中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
A Story of Career Choice
Lily was a college student majoring in English. She was confused about her career choice because she liked many things—writing, teaching, and even nursing. One day, she had an appointment with a career advisor, Mr. Wang.
Mr. Wang asked Lily to talk about her interests and strengths. Lily said she loved writing stories and was good at communicating with children. She also told him that she felt fulfilled when she helped others learn new things.
After listening carefully, Mr. Wang smiled and said, “Why not become an English teacher for kids? It combines your love for writing and teaching.” He also suggested that Lily should take some teaching classes and do volunteer work at a primary school to gain experience.
Lily followed Mr. Wang’s advice. She started volunteering at a local primary school every weekend. She helped the children with their English homework and told them English stories. She found that she really enjoyed spending time with the kids. She also realized that teaching was not as challenging as she thought—it was fun and rewarding.
At the end of the year, Lily made up her mind to become a primary school English teacher. She started to prepare for her teaching diploma. Now, she is a happy teacher and loves her job every day.
26.Why was Lily confused about her career choice?
A. She didn’t like her major. B. She liked many different things.
C. She had no advisor to help her. D. She was afraid of hard work.
27.What did Mr. Wang suggest Lily do?
A. Become a nurse. B. Work as a copywriter.
C. Be an English teacher for kids. D. Study cloud computing.
28.How did Lily gain teaching experience?
A. By taking writing classes. B. By working in a firm.
C. By helping her classmates. D. By volunteering at a primary school.
29.How did Lily feel about teaching after volunteering?
A. It was fun and rewarding. B. It was boring 和 routine.
C. It was too challenging. D. It was sour and tiring.
30.Which of the following is TRUE about Lily?
A. She never followed the advisor’s advice.
B. She is now a happy primary school English teacher.
C. She didn’t need a diploma to become a teacher.
D. She gave up career planning.
四、情景交际(共5小题,每小题2分,共10分)
根据对话内容,从文后选择恰当的选项补全对话,其中有一项是多余的。
A. What should I do next?
B. What is your advice for me?
C. I hope you can PRACTICE more.
D. Not really. You should choose what you love.
E. That’s a good point.
F. Should I choose a job with a high salary first?
Xia Yu: Hi, Mr. Chen. I’m worried about my career choice. 31
Mr. Chen: First, you need to know your own interests. What do you like doing in your free time?
Xia Yu: I like drawing and designing.
Mr. Chen: Then you may consider jobs related to art.
Xia Yu: 32 My parents want me to take a job with a high salary.
Mr. Chen: 33 A high salary is nice, but doing what you love makes you happy.
Xia Yu: I agree with you. 34
Mr. Chen: You can take some art classes and build a portfolio (作品集) of your designs.
Xia Yu: Thank you for your advice, Mr. Chen.
Mr. Chen: You’re welcome. 35
5、 书面表达(15分)
请以 “My Career Plan” 为题,写一篇短文。要求语句通顺,语法正确,不少于 80 词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇
career goal, interests, study hard, get a diploma, take action
My Career Plan
Everyone needs a clear career plan. A good plan can help us achieve our dreams easily.
I believe my dream will be achieved with my hard work.
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编写说明:本套《同步单元AB卷》紧扣《英语 拓展模块》(高教版2023修订版)教材,以教材单元为基准精准覆盖核心考点,并紧密贴合真题题型。A卷为考点梳理卷,侧重考点分层突破;B卷为单元测试卷,强化综合能力检测,助力师生高效把握教学重点,提升应试能力与知识应用水平。
本卷是Unit 8 Making a Career Plan 的单元测试卷,主要考查词汇、词组、句式句型、情景交际功能话题、阅读能力和书面表达能力。
Unit 8 Making a Career Plan
B卷·单元测试卷
考试时间:60分钟 满分:100分
班级 姓名 学号 成绩
一、单项选择题(共15小题,每小题3分,共45分)
从 A、B、C、D 中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
1.When you make a career plan, you should first be ______ your interests and strengths.
A. clear about B. worried about C. afraid of D. proud of
【答案】A
【解析】考查固定短语辨析。be clear about 意为 “清楚……”;be worried about 意为 “担心……”;be afraid of 意为 “害怕……”;be proud of 意为 “为…… 感到骄傲”。句意:当你制定职业规划时,你应该首先清楚自己的兴趣和优势。
2.Many young people ______ their career dreams bravely instead of choosing easy jobs.
A. give up B. go after C. look for D. wait for
【答案】B
【解析】考查动词短语辨析。give up 意为 “放弃”;go after 意为 “追求,谋求”;look for 意为 “寻找”;wait for 意为 “等待”。句意:许多年轻人勇敢地追求自己的职业梦想,而不是选择轻松的工作。
3.You need to get a professional ______ if you want to work as a nurse in the hospital.
A. quiz B. goal C. diploma D. personality
【答案】C
【解析】考查名词词义辨析。quiz 意为 “小测验”;goal 意为 “目标”;diploma 意为 “文凭”;personality 意为 “性格”。句意:如果你想在医院当护士,你需要获得一份专业文凭。
4.The job as a copywriter is ______, but it can help you improve your writing skills quickly.
A. challenging B. routine C. sour D. romantic
【答案】A
【解析】考查形容词词义辨析。challenging 意为 “有挑战性的”;routine 意为 “日常的,乏味的”;sour 意为 “闷闷不乐的,酸的”;romantic 意为 “浪漫的”。句意:文案撰稿人的工作很有挑战性,但能帮你快速提升写作能力。
5.______ you finish your internship, you will gain a lot of practical experience.
A. Unless B. Once C. Though D. Before
【答案】B
【解析】考查状语从句引导词。unless 意为 “除非”;once 意为 “一旦”;though 意为 “虽然”;before 意为 “在…… 之前”。句意:一旦你完成实习,就会获得很多实践经验。
6.She didn’t go to bed ______ she finished writing her career plan.
A. because B. when C. until D. since
【答案】C
【解析】考查固定句型。not...until... 是固定句型,意为 “直到…… 才……”。句意:她直到写完职业规划才去睡觉。
7.A good career advisor can help you ______ your mind about which job to choose.
A. make up B. look up C. pick up D. wake up
【答案】A
【解析】考查固定短语辨析。make up one’s mind 意为 “下定决心”;look up 意为 “查阅,向上看”;pick up 意为 “捡起,学会”;wake up 意为 “醒来”。句意:一位好的职业顾问能帮你下定决心选择什么样的工作。
8.My brother works in a small ______ and he is responsible for the company’s cloud computing business.
A. appointment B. firm C. nursing D. temper
【答案】B
【解析】考查名词词义辨析。appointment 意为 “预约”;firm 意为 “公司”;nursing 意为 “护理”;temper 意为 “脾气”。句意:我哥哥在一家小公司工作,负责公司的云计算业务。
9.______ the salary of the job is low, many people like it because it is relaxing.
A. If B. Because C. When D. Although
【答案】D
【解析】考查状语从句引导词。if 意为 “如果”;because 意为 “因为”;when 意为 “当…… 时”;although 意为 “虽然”。句意:这份工作的薪水虽然低,但很多人喜欢它,因为它很轻松。
10.We should exercise regularly ______ we can keep healthy and work more efficiently.
A. so that B. as if C. even if D. as soon as
【答案】A
【解析】考查状语从句引导词。so that 意为 “为了,以便”;as if 意为 “好像”;even if 意为 “即使”;as soon as 意为 “一…… 就……”。句意:我们应该经常锻炼,这样才能保持健康,更高效地工作。
11.You can find a satisfying job ______ there are more chances to develop your skills.
A. whenever B. wherever C. however D. whatever
【答案】B
【解析】考查状语从句引导词。whenever 意为 “无论何时”;wherever 意为 “无论哪里”;however 意为 “无论怎样”;whatever 意为 “无论什么”。句意:在任何有更多技能发展机会的地方,你都能找到一份满意的工作。
12.He felt ______ after he successfully completed his first important project at work.
A. trustworthy B. social C. fulfilled D. artistic
【答案】C
【解析】考查形容词词义辨析。trustworthy 意为 “值得信任的”;social 意为 “社交的”;fulfilled 意为 “感到满足的”;artistic 意为 “艺术的”。句意:当他在工作中成功完成第一个重要项目后,他感到很满足。
13.______ you don’t make a career plan, you may not know what you really want to do in the future.
A. If B. Until C. Since D. As
【答案】A
【解析】考查状语从句引导词。if 意为 “如果”;until 意为 “直到”;since 意为 “自从,因为”;as 意为 “当…… 时,因为”。句意:如果你不制定职业规划,你可能不知道自己未来真正想做什么。
14.Working with a ______ team is enjoyable because everyone helps each other.
A. tight B. superior C. clear D. trustworthy
【答案】D
【解析】考查形容词词义辨析。tight 意为 “密集的,紧的”;superior 意为 “上级的,优秀的”;clear 意为 “清楚的”;trustworthy 意为 “值得信任的”。句意:和一个值得信任的团队共事很愉快,因为每个人都会互相帮助。
15.—Thank you for your advice on my career plan.
—______
A. It’s a pity. B. My pleasure. C. Good luck. D. That’s right.
【答案】B
【解析】考查情景交际用语。It’s a pity. 意为 “真遗憾”;My pleasure. 意为 “不客气”,用于回应感谢;Good luck. 意为 “祝你好运”;That’s right. 意为 “没错”。句意:—— 谢谢你给我的职业规划提建议。—— 不客气。
二、完形填空(共 10 小题;每小题 2 分,满分 20 分)
阅读下面短文,从短文后所给各题的四个选项(A、B、C 和 D)中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
Everyone needs a career plan. A good plan helps you know where you are going and how to get there. Here are some 16 steps to make a great career plan.
First, understand yourself. You need to know your own personality and interests. For example, if you are an 17 person, you may like jobs related to art or music. If you are good at talking with people, a 18 job like a teacher or a salesperson may be perfect for you.
Second, set a clear career 19 . It can be a short-term goal, like getting a diploma in nursing, or a long-term goal, like becoming a famous doctor. Your goal should be realistic, not too easy or too hard to achieve.
Third, make a detailed plan. You should write down what you need to do every year, every month, even every week. For example, if you want to be a copywriter, you can plan to take writing classes and practice writing every day.
Fourth, take action. A plan is just a piece of paper 20 you put it into practice. You may face some difficulties, but don’t lose your 21 . Keep working hard, and you will get closer to your goal.
Finally, review and change your plan regularly. As time goes by, your interests or the job market may change. You need to 22 your plan according to the new situation.
Remember, a good career plan is not something you make once and forget. It is a
23 process that needs your attention all the time. With a good plan and hard work, you will surely have a
24 career and a happy life. So don’t wait. Start making your career plan 25 !
16.A. simple B. difficult C. boring D. strange
17.A. social B. artistic C. trustworthy D. sour
18.A. nursing B. routine C. social D. challenging
19.A. quiz B. goal C. appointment D. temper
20.A. unless B. if C. because D. although
21.A. diploma B. firm C. temper D. mind
22.A. copy B. change C. keep D. find
23.A. one-time B. daily C. weekly D. lifelong
24.A. successful B. romantic C. sour D. tight
25.A. tomorrow B. yesterday C. today D. tonight
【答案】16.A 17. B 18. C 19. B 20. A21.C 22. B 23. D 24. A 25. C
【导语】本文介绍了制定职业规划的五个简单步骤:认清自我、确立目标、制定细则、付诸行动、定期调整,强调职业规划是终身过程,呼吁即刻行动。
【解析】
16.A。考查形容词词义辨析。simple(简单的);difficult(困难的);boring(乏味的);strange(奇怪的)。下文介绍的规划步骤清晰易懂,句意:以下是制定一份出色职业规划的几个简单步骤。
17.B。考查形容词词义辨析。social(社交的);artistic(艺术的);trustworthy(值得信任的);sour(闷闷不乐的)。后文提及艺术、音乐相关工作,句意:例如,如果你是一个有艺术天赋的人,你可能会喜欢与艺术或音乐相关的工作。
18.C。考查形容词词义辨析。nursing(护理的);routine(日常的);social(社交的);challenging(有挑战性的)。教师、销售的工作特点是需要频繁与人沟通,属于社交类工作,句意:如果你擅长与人交谈,像教师或销售这样的社交类工作可能非常适合你。
19.B。考查名词词义辨析。quiz(小测验);goal(目标);appointment(预约);temper(脾气)。后文提到短期目标和长期目标,句意:第二,设定清晰的职业目标。
20.A。考查连词词义辨析。unless(除非);if(如果);because(因为);although(虽然)。本句表达 “计划不付诸实践就毫无意义”,句意:除非你将计划付诸实践,否则它只是一张纸。
21.C。考查名词词义辨析与固定搭配。diploma(文凭);firm(公司);temper(脾气);mind(想法)。lose one’s temper 为固定搭配,意为 “发脾气”,句意:你可能会遇到一些困难,但不要发脾气。
22.B。考查动词词义辨析。copy(复制);change(调整);keep(保持);find(找到)。前文提到兴趣和就业市场会变化,因此计划需要调整,句意:你需要根据新情况调整你的计划。
23.D。考查形容词词义辨析。one-time(一次性的);daily(日常的);weekly(每周的);lifelong(终身的)。前文指出职业规划不是制定后就遗忘,需要持续关注,句意:它是一个需要你一直关注的终身过程。
24.A。考查形容词词义辨析。successful(成功的);romantic(浪漫的);sour(闷闷不乐的);tight(密集的)。结合语境,好的规划和努力会带来成功的事业,句意:有了好的规划和努力,你一定会拥有成功的事业和幸福的生活。
25.C。考查副词词义辨析。tomorrow(明天);yesterday(昨天);today(今天);tonight(今晚)。前文 “don’t wait” 强调不要拖延,呼吁立即行动,句意:所以别等了,今天就开始制定你的职业规划吧!
三、阅读理解(共5小题,每小题2分,共10分)
阅读下面短文,从短文后所给各题的四个选项(A、B、C 和 D)中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
A Story of Career Choice
Lily was a college student majoring in English. She was confused about her career choice because she liked many things—writing, teaching, and even nursing. One day, she had an appointment with a career advisor, Mr. Wang.
Mr. Wang asked Lily to talk about her interests and strengths. Lily said she loved writing stories and was good at communicating with children. She also told him that she felt fulfilled when she helped others learn new things.
After listening carefully, Mr. Wang smiled and said, “Why not become an English teacher for kids? It combines your love for writing and teaching.” He also suggested that Lily should take some teaching classes and do volunteer work at a primary school to gain experience.
Lily followed Mr. Wang’s advice. She started volunteering at a local primary school every weekend. She helped the children with their English homework and told them English stories. She found that she really enjoyed spending time with the kids. She also realized that teaching was not as challenging as she thought—it was fun and rewarding.
At the end of the year, Lily made up her mind to become a primary school English teacher. She started to prepare for her teaching diploma. Now, she is a happy teacher and loves her job every day.
26.Why was Lily confused about her career choice?
A. She didn’t like her major. B. She liked many different things.
C. She had no advisor to help her. D. She was afraid of hard work.
27.What did Mr. Wang suggest Lily do?
A. Become a nurse. B. Work as a copywriter.
C. Be an English teacher for kids. D. Study cloud computing.
28.How did Lily gain teaching experience?
A. By taking writing classes. B. By working in a firm.
C. By helping her classmates. D. By volunteering at a primary school.
29.How did Lily feel about teaching after volunteering?
A. It was fun and rewarding. B. It was boring 和 routine.
C. It was too challenging. D. It was sour and tiring.
30.Which of the following is TRUE about Lily?
A. She never followed the advisor’s advice.
B. She is now a happy primary school English teacher.
C. She didn’t need a diploma to become a teacher.
D. She gave up career planning.
【答案】26.B 27. C 28. D 29. A 30. B
【导语】英语专业的莉莉因兴趣广泛而困惑职业选择,在职业顾问建议下,她去小学志愿教学,发现教学的乐趣,最终决心成为小学英语教师,如今工作得很开心。
【解析】
26.B。细节理解题。句意:莉莉为什么对职业选择感到困惑?
原文:She was confused about her career choice because she liked many things—writing, teaching, and even nursing. 其他选项均与原文不符。
27.C。细节理解题。句意:王老师建议莉莉做什么?
原文:Why not become an English teacher for kids? It combines your love for writing and teaching. 其他选项均未被提及。
28.D。细节理解题。句意:莉莉是如何获得教学经验的?
原文:He also suggested that Lily should take some teaching classes and do volunteer work at a primary school to gain experience. Lily followed Mr. Wang’s advice.
其他选项与获取教学经验的方式无关。
29.A。细节理解题。句意:志愿工作后,莉莉觉得教学怎么样?
原文:She also realized that teaching was not as challenging as she thought—it was fun and rewarding. 其他选项均与原文表述相反。
30.B。推理判断题。句意:关于莉莉,以下哪项是正确的?
原文:Now, she is a happy teacher and loves her job every day.
A 项与Lily followed Mr. Wang’s advice矛盾;C 项与She started to prepare for her teaching diploma矛盾;D 项文中未提及。
四、情景交际(共5小题,每小题2分,共10分)
根据对话内容,从文后选择恰当的选项补全对话,其中有一项是多余的。
A. What should I do next?
B. What is your advice for me?
C. I hope you can PRACTICE more.
D. Not really. You should choose what you love.
E. That’s a good point.
F. Should I choose a job with a high salary first?
Xia Yu: Hi, Mr. Chen. I’m worried about my career choice. 31
Mr. Chen: First, you need to know your own interests. What do you like doing in your free time?
Xia Yu: I like drawing and designing.
Mr. Chen: Then you may consider jobs related to art.
Xia Yu: 32 My parents want me to take a job with a high salary.
Mr. Chen: 33 A high salary is nice, but doing what you love makes you happy.
Xia Yu: I agree with you. 34
Mr. Chen: You can take some art classes and build a portfolio (作品集) of your designs.
Xia Yu: Thank you for your advice, Mr. Chen.
Mr. Chen: You’re welcome. 35
【答案】31.B 32. F 33. D 34. A 35. C
【导语】夏雨因职业选择困扰向陈老师求助,陈老师建议其结合兴趣,夏雨提及父母希望她选高薪工作,最终获具体建议并致谢。
【解析】
31.B。句意:嗨,陈老师,我很担心我的职业选择。你能给我什么建议吗?
下文陈老师给出 “了解自己兴趣” 的建议,与 B 选项 “你能给我什么建议吗” 的语境相匹配。
32.F。句意:我应该先选一份高薪的工作吗?我爸妈想让我找一份高薪工作。
后文提到父母希望她选高薪工作,F 选项是对该话题的承接,符合上下文逻辑。
33.D。句意:不一定。你应该选择自己喜欢的。高薪固然好,但做自己喜欢的事才会开心。
陈老师不认同优先选高薪工作的想法,D 选项直接回应该观点并给出建议,契合语境。
34.A。情景交际。句意:我同意你的看法。接下来我该做什么?
下文陈老师给出 “上艺术课、做作品集” 的具体行动建议,与 A 选项的提问相呼应。
35.C。句意:不客气。希望你能多加练习。
夏雨致谢后,陈老师送上鼓励,C 选项是符合交际礼仪的回应。
五、书面表达(15分)
请以 “My Career Plan” 为题,写一篇短文。要求语句通顺,语法正确,不少于 80 词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇
career goal, interests, study hard, get a diploma, take action
My Career Plan
Everyone needs a clear career plan. A good plan can help us achieve our dreams easily.
I believe my dream will be achieved with my hard work.
【参考例文】
My Career Plan
Everyone needs a clear career plan. A good plan can help us achieve our dreams easily.
My career goal is to become a senior nurse in five years. First of all, I am very interested in nursing because I want to help people relieve pain. To achieve this goal, I will study hard to master professional knowledge and skills in school and get my nursing diploma. Besides, I plan to take part in volunteer activities in hospitals during summer vacations to gain practical experience. What’s more, I will keep learning new nursing technologies after graduation to improve myself.
I believe my dream will be achieved with my hard work.
【导语】本文以 My Career Plan 为题,围绕职业规划这一核心主题,清晰阐述了短期职业目标、目标制定依据及具体实施步骤,内容紧扣单元主题,语言简洁流畅,逻辑层次分明,符合 80 词以上的写作要求,是一篇规范的应用文范文。
【解析】
(一)词汇积累
核心词汇
career goal 职业目标
senior nurse 高级护士
professional knowledge and skills 专业知识与技能
nursing diploma 护理专业文凭
practical experience 实践经验
volunteer activities 志愿活动
拓展词汇
relieve pain 减轻痛苦
master 掌握
take part in 参加
keep learning 持续学习
improve oneself 提升自我
(二)句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am very interested in nursing. I want to help people relieve pain.
拓展句:I am very interested in nursing because I want to help people relieve pain.
(解析:用原因状语从句 because 连接两个简单句,明确表达对护理专业感兴趣的原因,增强句子逻辑关联性。)
补充逻辑关系
原句:I will study hard to master professional knowledge. I will take part in volunteer activities in hospitals.
拓展句:First of all, I will study hard to master professional knowledge and skills in school and get my nursing diploma. Besides, I plan to take part in volunteer activities in hospitals during summer vacations to gain practical experience.
(解析:添加 First of all(首先)、Besides(此外)等连接词,使两个并列的行动步骤形成递进关系,文章结构更清晰。)
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】
To achieve this goal, I will study hard to master professional knowledge and skills in school and get my nursing diploma.
解析:使用不定式结构 To achieve this goal 作目的状语,开门见山点明行动的目的,句式简洁且重点突出,符合英语书面表达的简洁性原则。
【高分句型 2】
What’s more, I will keep learning new nursing technologies after graduation to improve myself.
解析:运用 What’s more(此外)进一步补充职业规划的长期举措,使内容从 “在校学习” 延伸到 “毕业后提升”,逻辑链条完整,体现了职业规划的前瞻性。
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