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写作突破册
中考英语
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写作话题4 学习体验与方法
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一、词汇积累
介绍喜
欢的学
习方式/
作业类
型/课堂
活动等 【学习方式】 study alone/by oneself独立学习 group learning小组学习
online learning线上学习 join the English corner参加英语角
【作业类型】make a poster做海报 keep a diary in English写英语日记
preview lessons预习功课 review the knowledge in time及时复习知识
【课堂活动】do a role-play进行角色扮演 give a presentation/report做展示/
报告 group discussion小组讨论 story telling讲故事
【特点及好处】raise one's interest 激发兴趣 be helpful to有助于 broaden
one's horizons开阔眼界 apply knowledge to real life将知识应用于实际生活
learn more about different cultures学习更多不同的文化 make learning
enjoyable 让学习有趣
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提出学
习建议
与方法 【语言学习】enrich/build one's vocabulary丰富词汇量 to look up words in
the dictionary在词典里查单词 develop a sense of language培养语感
communicate with native speakers与母语者交流 idioms and expressions习语
和表达 practice regularly 定期练习
【其他】set personal goals设定个人目标 manage time flexibly/effectively灵
活/高效管理时间 take an active part in class课堂上积极参与 make notes in
time及时记笔记 turn to sb. for help向某人求助 break down complex
problems into small tasks将复杂的问题分解成小任务 make full use of充分
利用 focus on集中注意力于 build up confidence建立信心 develop/form a
good habit of养成……的好习惯
续表
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分享解
决学习
问题的
经历和
感悟 【问题】have trouble with time management在时间管理上存在困难 have
trouble/difficulty remembering new words 记新单词有困难 face challenges
in English writing在英语写作方面面临挑战 fail to understand long reading
passages无法理解长语篇 fall behind落后
feel anxious/stressed about the final exam对期末考试感到焦虑/有压力 be
under great pressure承受巨大压力 lose confidence in对……失去信心
【感受与收获】learn from failures/mistakes从失败/错误中学习 gain valuable
experience获得宝贵经验 understand/realize the importance of patience 理解
/意识到耐心的重要性learn a valuable lesson学到宝贵的一课 make sb.
stronger/better使某人更强大/更好
续表
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二、佳句迁移
维度1 介绍喜欢的学习方式/作业类型/课堂活动等
佳句示范 迁移运用
1.小组学习·开篇 In my opinion, group
learning is more effective than studying
alone.(in one's opinion表达观点;“比较级
+than”突出个人偏好) 1.在我看来,参加英语角比其他学习方式
更有趣也更有用。
_____________________________________
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_____________________________
In my opinion, joining an English
corner is more interesting and useful
than other learning methods.
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佳句示范 迁移运用
2.小组学习的好处·主体 Group learning
has brought him confidence in expressing
himself and a sense of cooperation.
(bring sb. sth.) 2.这种学习活动给我带来了快乐和成功。
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3.总结感受·结尾 I'm sure it'll be of great
help to learn in groups. 3.我相信成为英语角的一员将会是愉快且
有意义的。
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This kind of learning activity has
brought me pleasure and success.
I'm sure it'll be enjoyable and
meaningful to be a member of an
English corner.
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维度2 提出学习建议与方法
佳句示范 迁移运用
4.引入建议·开篇 Today, we're
going to talk about good ways to learn
English. 4.我要谈谈学习汉语成语的好方法。
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5.具体建议·主体 It's a good idea
to spell and pronounce new words aloud
every day. 5.和母语使用者交流是个好主意。
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I'm going to talk about good ways to
learn Chinese idioms.
It's a good idea to communicate with
native speakers.
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佳句示范 迁移运用
6.总结预期·结尾 You are certain
to get the best possible experience of
English learning and life in the US. 6.通过这些方法,你一定能在成语学习中
取得巨大进步。
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____________________________________
________________________
You are certain to achieve great
progress in learning Chinese idioms
with all these methods.
续表
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维度3 3 分享解决学习问题的经历和感悟
佳句示范 迁移运用
7.问题·开篇 But he could have trouble
hearing you or speaking to you. (have trouble doing
sth.结构突出在做某事的过程中遇到困难,比直接用can't
更生动) 7.我记新单词有困难。
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I have trouble remembering new words.
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佳句示范 迁移运用
8.经历·主体 Finally, he found his own way to learn
Chinese, including watching Chinese cartoons and
chatting with local friends. (并列连词and连接两个含
动词-ing形式的短语作including的介词宾语,对way进一
步解释说明) 8.我已经尝试过很多方法,
包括定期练习和写英语
日记。
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续表
I've tried many ways,
including practicing
regularly and keeping
diaries in English.
佳句示范 迁移运用
9.感受启示·结尾 He learned to be both flexible in
solving problems and hard-working in daily practice.
(learn to do短语的使用展现了人物的成长与蜕变) 9.从这次经历中,我学会了
要有耐心并要不断尝试。
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I learned to be patient and keep trying from this experience.
续表
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“阅读提高英语水平”投稿 阅读是英语学习的重要途
径。请你结合下面图示信息,以“How reading improves my
English”为题,根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,向学校校
刊的英语专栏投稿。
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写作要求:
1.文中须包含左图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:improve提高
How reading improves my English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning.
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1 审题
主题 文体 人称 时态
阅读如何提高英语水平 记叙文 第一、三人称 一般现在时
2 列纲
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3 升级
How reading improves my English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning.
Firstly, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved through reading.①
It gives me confidence. Secondly, reading helps make writing easier for me. When I
do English reading, it reminds me how words are spelled correctly. So I make fewer
mistakes in my English writing. Thirdly, reading develops my thinking ability. ② It
makes me open-minded and enables me to think more. Fourthly, reading helps me
develop a good habit of learning English.
初步成文
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③Reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest in English
learning.
①用when引导的时间状语从句扩写句子
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It gives me confidence when I talk in English.
②用从句what I've read作主语升级句式
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What I've read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more.
③用in a word衔接升级
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In a word, reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest in English learning.
优化升级
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4 成篇
How reading improves my English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning.
Firstly, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved through reading. ①
It gives me confidence when I talk in English. Secondly, reading helps make writing
easier for me. When I do English reading, it reminds me how words are spelled
correctly. So I make fewer mistakes in my English writing. Thirdly, reading develops
my thinking ability. ②What I've read makes me open-minded and enables me to
think more. Fourthly, reading helps me develop a good habit of learning English.
③In a word, reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest in
English learning.
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Writing 1 介绍喜欢的学习方式/作业类型/课堂活动等
日常生活中,我们离不开阅读。随着时代的发展,人们的阅读方式发生了很大的变
化。很多人倾向于阅读电子书。那么你喜欢读纸质书还是电子书呢?请你根据以下提示和
写作要求,结合自身实际,从以下两种观点中任选其一,以“My Favorite Reading Way”
为题写一篇短文,向专栏投稿。
实战演练
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Paper books E-books
give a special feeling easy to carry
be good for eyes cost less and save trees
help people focus have helpful tools (look up words easily...)
写作要求:
1.文中须包含所选观点的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100左右。
My Favorite Reading Way
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实战演练
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Possible Version 1:
My Favorite Reading Way
Reading is one of my favorite hobbies, and I always choose paper books. Here's
why.
First, paper books give me a special feeling—holding them, turning the pages,
and even smelling the paper make reading an adventure. Second, they are good for
my eyes. Unlike screens, paper doesn't make my eyes tired quickly, so I can read
for hours. Finally, paper books help me focus. There are no extra messages or
games to distract me.
In short, paper books make my reading time peaceful and enjoyable. Though e-
books are convenient, paper books will always be my favorite!
实战演练
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Possible Version 2:
My Favorite Reading Way
I prefer reading e-books, and here are my reasons.
First, e-books are super easy to carry. With just a small smart device, I can
take hundreds of books anywhere—perfect for trips. Second, they usually cost less
and save trees. E-books are often cheaper than paper ones, and they don't need
paper, which is often made from trees. Third, they have helpful tools. I can look up
words in a dictionary easily, or search for information quickly.
In a word, e-books fit my busy life perfectly. Though I sometimes read paper
books, the convenience of e-books makes them my top choice!
实战演练
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Writing 2 提出学习建议与方法
为帮助九年级学生提高在家的学习效率(learning efficiency), 你校从学习态度、学
习方法和学习习惯三个维度开展了问卷调查。请根据以下问卷调查结果及写作要点和要
求, 以“Improve Learning Efficiency at Home”为题, 用英语写一篇短文向校报英文栏目
投稿。
What most improves your learning efficiency at home?
实战演练
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实战演练
要点:
1.简要描述问卷调查结果;
2.从三个维度中选择你认为最有效的一个,并给出相关建议。
要求:
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数100左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Improve Learning Efficiency at Home
Our school did a survey about what most improves our learning efficiency at
home. Here are the results.____
实战演练
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Improve Learning Efficiency at Home
Our school did a survey about what most improves our learning efficiency at
home. Here are the results.
According to the survey,43% of the students think correct learning methods are
the most important. 32% of them believe good learning habits help most, and 25%
value active learning attitudes.
In my opinion, good learning habits play a big role. Even with the best
methods, we can't learn well without learning habits like making plans or staying
focused. To develop good learning habits, we should make home study plans. For
example, we can take short breaks between tasks and avoid using phones while
studying. Also, keeping our desk clean can help us stay in a good environment.
With the right learning habits, I believe learning at home can become more effective.
实战演练
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Writing 3 分享解决学习问题的经历和感悟
亲爱的同学,初中三年生活即将结束,在这三年里,你有过逆势前行克服困难的经
历吗? 请以“The harder, the better”为题,写一篇英语短文,讲述你的经历。
内容:
1.What was your difficulty?
2.What did you do to overcome the difficulty?
3.How did you feel about it?
4.What have you learned from it?
要求:
1.100词左右(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
实战演练
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The harder, the better
In our life, we may meet different kinds of challenges. But how can we deal
with them to make ourselves better?_____________________________________________
实战演练
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The harder, the better
In our life, we may meet different kinds of challenges. But how can we deal
with them to make ourselves better? Here is my story.
Last term, I was really weak in math. The complex and difficult problems
made me lose confidence. However, I didn't want to give up. I made a study plan.
I asked my math teacher for help after class and spent more time doing math
exercises every day. Gradually, I began to understand the knowledge better. When I
got good grades in the following exam, I felt a strong sense of achievement.
From this experience, I've learned that as long as we have the courage to face
difficulties and make efforts, we can overcome them. The harder we try, the better
we'll be.
实战演练
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谢谢观看
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