内容正文:
Unit 8 主题写作专项
1. 话题概述
本单元的主题是“志愿服务”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇和现在完成时,撰写志愿者申请信。
主要写作维度
1. 明确申请的志愿岗位 (Position)
2. 阐述服务动机 (Motivation)
3. 展示相关技能与经验 (Skills & Experience)
4. 表达对于未来服务的决心与期待 (Determination & Expectation)
2. 审题与写作指导
体裁
时态
人称
应用文 (申请信)
一般现在时 / 现在完成时 (经验)
第一人称 (I)
在中考书面表达中,通常需要涵盖的主要内容包括:
· 清晰说明申请的志愿服务领域或具体岗位;
· 用现在完成时描述曾参与的志愿活动;
· 列举个人技能与岗位的匹配点;
· 强调服务的意义,并以恳切语气表达加入意愿。
必备高分词句 (Key Phrases & Sentences)
· I would like to apply to be a volunteer. 我想申请成为一名志愿者。
· I have been a volunteer for... years. 我做志愿者已经……年了。
· I have gained rich experience in... 我在……方面获得了丰富的经验。
· have a strong sense of responsibility: 有很强的责任感
· get along well with others: 与他人相处融洽
· "I promise I will serve to the best of my ability." (我保证我会尽我所能服务。)
3. 谋篇布局 (Structure Planning)
以 "Application Letter for a City Park Volunteer" 为例:
段落
写作思路与句型支撑
第一段
Introduction
表明写作目的:
• I am writing to apply for the position of ______________.
• I think I am suitable for this job because I love ______________.
第二段
Body
展示经验与技能 (重点使用现在完成时):
• Experience: I have worked as a volunteer for ______________. I have helped ______________.
• Skills: I am good at ______________. I can ______________.
• Character: I am friendly/hard-working/responsible.
第三段
Conclusion
表达决心与期待:
• If I am chosen, I will work hard to ______________.
• I am looking forward to your reply.
4. 佳作剖析 (Model Essay Analysis)
优秀范文: Application Letter for a Museum Volunteer
亮点评析
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply to be a volunteer at the Science Museum. I have a strong interest in science and helping others.
I think I am qualified for this position. First, I have been a volunteer① at my school library for two years. I have helped organize books and guide students. Through these experiences, I have learned how to communicate with people effectively. Second, I have read many books about space and robots, so I can introduce the exhibits to visitors clearly. Besides, I am outgoing and responsible②.
If I am given the chance, I will try my best to provide good service. I believe volunteering here will be a meaningful experience. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
① 语法亮点:
"have been a volunteer"
使用现在完成时准确表达了过往持续至今的志愿经历,符合单元语法要求。
② 自我评价:
"outgoing and responsible"
准确使用形容词展示个人特质,与岗位需求匹配。
5. 以读促写 (Reading for Writing)
词汇积累
(Expressions)
① organize activities ② take care of ③ work experience ④ be patient with ⑤ offer help ⑥ make a contribution to
佳句赏析
(Sentences)
· I have taken part in many social activities to help those in need.
· I believe that small acts of kindness can change the world.
6. 写作实战 (Writing Practice)
题目:学校正在招募全运会志愿者 (volunteers for the National Games)。请你写一封申请信,申请成为一名赛会志愿者。
内容要点:
· 申请目的:想为全运会做贡献;
· 个人优势: 1. 擅长英语 (good at English); 2. 有相关志愿者经历 (have worked as...); 3. 即使累也快乐 (happy though tired);
· 表达决心:会努力工作,服务好每一位客人。
*注意:词数80左右;请正确使用现在完成时描述经历。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer for the National Games.
Yours,
Li Hua
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