Unit 5 写作专项：A Great Person in My Eyes 2025-2026学年冀教版八年级英语上册

冀教版八年级上册 Unit 5 写作专项 A Great Person in My Eyes 一、写作核心要求 结合本单元“劳动教育、认识劳动价值”的目标，完成一篇以“我眼中的伟大劳动者”为主题的记叙文，具体要求： 1. 体裁/人称：记叙文，第一人称（I）介绍自己眼中的伟大劳动者。 2. 时态：描述人物经历用一般过去时；表达评价与感受用一般现在时。 3. 内容要素：需包含“人物身份（职业）、其劳动内容与困难、劳动带来的价值、你对他的评价”，突出“伟大”，字数100-120词，合理运用本单元重点“定语（如a person who...）”描述人物特质。 4. 语言要求：正确使用劳动相关词汇（如postman, physical work）、本单元核心短语（take pride in, serve as a bridge），用褒义形容词（responsible, great）表达对劳动者的赞美。 二、写作思路与模板 1. 开头引入（约25词） 作用：点明人物身份，引出“伟大”的核心评价。 基础句式： The great person in my eyes is [人物，如Wang Shunyou]. He is a [职业，如postman] who has devoted himself to physical work for years. 示例： The great person in my eyes is Wang Shunyou. He is a postman who has devoted himself to delivering mail in mountain villages for over 30 years. 2. 中间详述（约50词） 作用：描述其劳动内容、面临的困难，体现劳动的价值。 基础句式： Every year, he [劳动内容，如travels long distances on foot] to [目标，如send mail to villagers]. He faces [困难，如cold mountains and hot valleys], but he never gives up. His work [价值，如helps villagers stay in touch with the outside world]. 示例： Every year, he travels 260,000 kilometres on foot to send mail to remote villagers. He climbs 5,000-metre snowy mountains and walks through 40℃ valleys, but he never delays the mail. His work serves as a bridge between villagers and the outside world. 3. 感受升华（约25词） 作用：总结人物的精神，表达你的敬佩与感悟。 基础句式： He takes pride in his work, and I admire him for [品质，如his responsibility and dedication]. He teaches me that ordinary work can be great. 示例： He takes pride in his work, and I admire him for his strong responsibility and dedication. He tells me that even ordinary physical work can be great if we do it with heart. 三、范文与翻译 英文范文 A Great Person in My Eyes The great person in my eyes is Wang Shunyou. He is a postman who has devoted himself to delivering mail in mountain villages for over 30 years. Every year, he travels 260,000 kilometres on foot to send mail to remote villagers. He climbs 5,000-metre snowy mountains and walks through 40℃ valleys, but he never delays the mail. His work serves as a bridge between villagers and the outside world. He takes pride in his work, and I admire him for his strong responsibility and dedication. He tells me that even ordinary physical work can be great if we do it with heart. 中文翻译 我眼中的伟大人物 我眼中的伟大人物是王顺友。他是一名邮递员，30多年来一直致力于为山村投递邮件。 每年，他要徒步走26万公里，给偏远的村民送邮件。他攀登5000米的雪山，走过40℃的山谷，但从不会耽误邮件。他的工作是村民与外界联系的桥梁。 他为自己的工作感到自豪，我敬佩他强烈的责任感和奉献精神。他让我明白：只要用心去做，平凡的体力劳动也能变得伟大。 四、辅助学习资源 1. 素材积累 短语： 劳动相关：devote oneself to work（投身工作）、physical work（体力劳动）、serve as a bridge（充当桥梁） 品质描述：strong responsibility（强烈的责任感）、dedication（奉献精神）、never give up（永不放弃） 基础句型： 基础句型 仿写句子 He is a [职业] who [事迹]. She is a cleaner who keeps our community tidy every day. His work [价值], which makes him great. Her cooking [brings joy to the family], which makes her great. 好句集锦： Ordinary work done with heart can become extraordinary.（用心做的平凡工作，也能变得不平凡。） He turns hard physical work into a meaningful mission.（他把艰苦的体力劳动变成了有意义的使命。） 2. 谚语 Ever grain on the plate comes from hard labour.（谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦。） No pain, no gain.（一分耕耘，一分收获。） 3. 学生写作填空练习版 A Great Person in My Eyes The great person in my eyes is __________（人物）. He/She is a __________（职业） who has devoted himself/herself to __________（劳动内容） for years. Every year, he/she __________（劳动动作） to __________（劳动目标）. He/She faces __________（困难）, but he/she never gives up. His/Her work __________（劳动价值）. He/She takes pride in his/her work, and I admire him/her for __________（品质）. He/She teaches me that __________（感悟）. ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $