内容正文:
—The ex-footballer
读后续写
Step 1. Question lead-in
1. What is the plot of the passage?
2. Can your use some advanced sentence patterns?
Characters:
When/where:
Theme:
Plot line:
Emotion line:
I;a tailor
In a tailor’s shop
chase after your dreams and don’t give up
父母买了一件新足球衫,但我出去玩弄坏了袖子——我不敢告诉家里,找到了一家裁缝店——看到店里的场景,我开始怀疑他能不能补我的足球衫
anxious——doubtful——delighted/merry——grateful
Step 1. Question lead-in
伏笔?
衔接?
Para 1.The tailor seemed to understand what I was thinking at the moment.
Action chains:
1. 聊天消除我的的顾虑
2. 接过衬衫修补
3. 我等待并在店里到处看
Para 2. Suddenly, I noticed a photo of a football team next to the sewing machine.
衔接2
Step 2. Core-breakthrough
衔接1
Para 2. Suddenly, I noticed a photo of a football team next to the sewing machine.
1. 我询问裁缝照片
2. 裁缝讲述过去经历并鼓舞我
3. 修好衬衫我感谢他并有所感想
衔接主题
Step 2. Core-breakthrough
衔接3
轻拍肩膀
相信
尽力
修补
用针线缝
有时/偶尔
愉快地闲聊
闲逛
高级词汇短语检索:
pat sb. on one’s shoulder
trust/have faith in
try one’s best to do sth.
repair/fix/mend
sew with a needle and thread
from time to time/at times/occasionally
chat with sb. merrily
wander around
Step 3. Presentation
困惑地
鼓舞某人做某事
追逐梦想
给某人某物
表达衷心的感谢
不久之后...
挥手告别
高级词汇短语检索:
in puzzlement
motivate/inspire sb. to do
chase after/persue one’s dreams
hand sb. sth.
extend sincere/heartfelt gratitude
It didn’t take long before sb. did sth.
wave goodbye to sb.
Step 3. Presentation
Step 4. Extended learning
1. 一看到我犹豫不决,他拍拍我肩膀告诉我相信他并且他一定会尽力修补衬衫。(on)
2. 接过衬衫,他检查裂口并开始用手中的针线专业地缝。(with)
3. 在他修理时,我不仅和他愉快地谈话而且有时还在店里到处闲逛。
On seeing my hesitation, he patted me on my shoulder, asking me to have faith in him and that he would try his best to fix my shirt.
Receiving my shirt, he examined the tear, sewing it professionally with a needle and thread in his hands.
When he was mending, not only did I chat with him merrily but I also wandered around from time to time in the shop.
Step 4. Extended learning
4. 正是我的腿伤阻止了我那时继续追寻我的梦想。
5. 一种遗憾的感觉包围了我,但他的故事鼓舞我继续坚持梦想
6. 不久之后他就修好了我的衬衫
7. 虽然这个过程很漫长,但是他不仅用他的手艺缝好了我的衬衫,也用体育精神修复了我的梦想
It was my leg injury that prevented me from chasing after my dream.
A sense of pity surrounded me, but his story inspired me to insist on my dream.
It didn’t take long before he fixed my shirt.
Long as the process was, he not only sewed my shirt with his craftsmanship but also repaired my dream with sportsmanship.
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