Unit6写作专项：介绍一位伟大的旅行家2025-2026学年外研版英语七年级下册

外研英语七下Unit6写作专项 介绍一位伟大的旅行家 一、写作题目 写一篇80-100词的短文，介绍一位伟大的旅行家，说明他/她的身份、成就以及人们对他/她的评价 二、写作目标 1. 熟练运用本单元核心语法as…as结构，准确进行人物比较与描述 2. 灵活使用单元高频词汇traveller, explore, journey, achievement, famous, discover, great, influence 3. 清晰介绍旅行家的身份、成就与评价，逻辑连贯，符合词数要求 4. 时态以一般过去时（叙述经历）和一般现在时（描述评价）为主 5. 传递对旅行家的敬佩之情，贴合单元主题 三、写作分析 1. 核心语法：本单元重点as…as结构，必用as great as, as brave as等，体现语法核心考点 2. 时态运用：双时态结合，一般过去时叙述旅行家的经历与成就，一般现在时描述人们对他/她的评价 3. 人称使用：以第三人称（he/she, the traveller）为主，客观介绍人物 4. 满分结构：三段式不跑题 开头：点明旅行家的身份与地位 正文：讲述他/她的旅行经历与主要成就 结尾：说明人们的评价与个人感受，升华主题 四、写作模板 写作部分 英文模板 中文对照 开头（身份+地位） _______ is one of the greatest travellers in history. He/She is as famous as _______. 是历史上最伟大的旅行家之一。他/她和一样有名。 正文（经历+成就） He/She _______ to explore _______. During his/her journey, he/she _______ and made great achievements, such as _______. 他/她_______去探索_______。在旅途中，他/她_______，并取得了伟大成就，例如_______。 结尾（评价+感受） People say he/she is as brave as a hero. I think his/her spirit of exploration _______. 人们说他/她和英雄一样勇敢。我认为他/她的探索精神_______。 五、优秀范文（中英对照 ） 英文范文 Marco Polo: A Great Traveller Marco Polo is one of the greatest travellers in history. He is as famous as Xu Xiake in the world of exploration. He travelled from Italy to China in the 13th century, crossing deserts and mountains. During his journey, he recorded the customs and landscapes of Asia, and his book The Travels of Marco Polo became a bridge between East and West. People say he is as brave as a pioneer. I think his spirit of curiosity and adventure still inspires us to explore the unknown today. 中文译文 马可·波罗：一位伟大的旅行家 马可·波罗是历史上最伟大的旅行家之一。在探索领域，他和徐霞客一样有名。 13世纪时，他从意大利出发前往中国，穿越了沙漠与山脉。在旅途中，他记录了亚洲的风俗与地貌，著作《马可·波罗游记》成为东西方之间的桥梁。 人们说他和开拓者一样勇敢。我认为他的好奇心与冒险精神至今仍激励我们去探索未知。 六、核心素材积累 好词 1. as…as结构（核心语法）：as great as, as famous as, as brave as, as curious as 2. 高频名词/短语：traveller, explore, journey, achievement, discovery, influence, bridge, unknown, adventure 3. 高频形容词/副词：great, famous, brave, curious, adventurous, historical, inspiring, still 佳句 1. He is as great as the most famous explorers in history. 2. During his journey, he discovered many new lands and recorded his experiences. 3. People regard him as a bridge between different cultures. 4. His spirit of exploration inspires us to keep moving forward. 谚语 1. Travel is the only thing you buy that makes you richer. 旅行是唯一一种能让你变得更富有的消费 2. The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only one page. 世界是一本书，不旅行的人只读过其中一页 ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $