Unit 2 Amazing China 单元话题（旅游）写作满分范文15篇-2025-2026学年八年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（新教材译林版）

2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 2 Amazing China 单元话题（旅游）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．  旅行可以让我们暂停忙碌的脚步，你想去哪儿旅行？请以“My ideal place to visit”为题，根据提示写一篇短文，在下周的英语俱乐部活动中与大家分享。 提示： 1. Where would you like to visit? 2. Why do you like this place? 3. What would you like to do there? 要求： 1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实校名和人名； 3. 词数80～100。 My ideal place to visit________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是李华，你校英语社团的公众号正在做北京游玩好时节的系列推送。现就“The Best Time to Visit Beijing”这一话题征集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言，介绍来北京游玩的最佳时节，可以去哪里游玩以及需要准备的物品。 提示词语：beautiful, weather, sunny, a pair of comfortable shoes, have a good time 提示问题：●When is the best time to visit Beijing? ●Where can you go? ●What should you prepare for the visit? The Best Time to Visit Beijing ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．西安是著名的中国古都，有许多名胜古迹，假如你是李华，今年暑假你去了西安旅游，度过了美好的假期，请根据表格中提供的信息写一篇日记，记录自己的西安之旅。 When What I did How did I feel What I learned in the morning visit the Terracotta Army amazing the long history of the city; ancient culture at noon taste some local food in the afternoon walk on the Ancient City Wall relaxed in the evening watch a light show near the Bell Tower fantastic 要求：词数80左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 Friday, July 25th Last summer vacation, I went to Xi’an with my family. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．旅游可以让人放松身心、增长知识、开拓视野……很多学生都会选择在假期旅行。某英文报社正以“My Meaningful Trip”为题征文。请你结合生活实际写一篇不少于80词的短文向报社投稿，写出你的旅行经历和感受。提示： 1. Where did you go? 2. What did you do there? 3. How did you feel? 4. What’s your idea about travelling? 要求： 1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥。 2. 字迹清晰美观，语句连贯，语法准确，文章具有可读性。 3. 文章中不得出现真实姓名、班级、学校等信息。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．旅游让我们的生活多姿多彩。学校英文报正在以“An Enjoyable Trip”为题征文。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文，描述一次愉快的旅行，向该英文报投稿。 内容提示： 1. Where did you go? 2. Who did you go with? 3. What did you do there? 4. What do you think of the trip? 要求：1. 包含所有提示的内容，可适当发挥；       2. 80词左右。 An Enjoyable Trip ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．假如你是李丽，去年暑假你与家人一起去敦煌的鸣沙山、月牙泉(Crescent Lake)旅行，请用英语分享你的此次旅行。 要求： 1.包括提示信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯，书写工整； 3.80词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是李华，你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“美丽的黄河风情线”(The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line)为主题的英语征文活动，你打算参加。请根据以下内容要点用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。 1. 风情线总览：the Yellow River, run through the city of Lanzhou, a famous road called Binhe Road, along the Yellow River； 2. 聚焦景观：Zhongshan Bridge, waterwheel (水车), many parks； 3. 休闲娱乐：fly kites, play chess； 4. 特色游览：go sightseeing, sheepskin raft (羊皮筏子), water bus。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假设你是李华，你的英国好友Cindy上月来舟山参加了文化游学活动，你们打算在这个寒假继续体验该旅程。请根据以下信息写一篇短文，分享你们上个月的活动经历及这个寒假的后续安排，向校英文报“文化之旅”栏目投稿。 Zhoushan Cultural Tour When Where What last month Dongsha Ancient Fishing Town ◆learn to make model ships◆enjoy fishermen’s paintings ◆… this winter vacation … … 注意：（1）短文必须包含表中的所有信息，并适当发挥。 （2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 （3）词数：80词左右。短文开头供选用，不计入总词数。 短文开头：Cindy and I had an unforgettable cultural tour in Zhoushan last month. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．今年寒假, 深圳将迎来一批英国交换生。假定你是李华, 你将以志愿者身份, 接待交换生Mike。请给Mike写一封邮件, 告知他在深圳一日游环节的活动安排, 内容包括： 1. 活动信息(时间、参与对象)； 2. 行程安排(参观地点、特色活动等)。 注意： 1. 标点正确, 书面整洁； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节, 以使条理清楚, 行文连贯； 4. 80词左右, 邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, How is everything going? I am so happy to __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you have any questions, feel free to email me. I’m looking forward to your visit! Yours, Li Hua 10．某英文网站正在开展以“用脚步丈量远方，以旅行丰盈人生”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一次旅行经历，包括旅行的见闻，你的感受和收获。 提示词语：scenery，try，happy，teach 内容提示：·What did you see and do during the trip? ·How did you feel? ·What have you learned from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．且停，且看，且听风吟，不负时光，不负遇见。国家地理杂志英文版 (National Geographic)正在举办“My Holiday Discovery”主题征文活动，邀请全世界中学生分享一次难忘的旅行经历。请你围绕该主题，撰写一篇80词左右的短文，向该杂志投稿。内容包含： 1. 行程回顾（时间、地点、活动等）； 2. 亮点介绍（有趣的动物、植物或文化地标等）； 3. 真诚邀请。 My Holiday Discovery ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．你的外国朋友Tom计划寒假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语给他写一封邮件，介绍并推荐你的家乡福州。词数80左右。 Location (位置): southeast of China Places of interest: Mount Gushan, Three Lanes and Seven Alleys Area (面积): 11,968 square kilometers Local food (当地小吃): fish balls, Buddha Jumps Over the Wall Environment: fresh air, green trees Your opinion: … 要求： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整、规范； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)。 Hi Tom, I’m happy to hear that you plan to travel around China during the winter vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Fuzhou for a visit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I can’t wait to see you! Yours, Li Xiang 13．长城被誉为“世界七大奇迹之一”，以宏伟的建筑规模、悠久的历史和深厚的文化意义闻名全球，被列入《世界文化遗产名录》，假如你校英语报的Amazing Place栏目正在开展征文活动，你对此很感兴趣。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的地方——长城，向校报投稿。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总字数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名。 If you want to visit an amazing place, the Great Wall may be a good choice! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I will feel glad if my writing makes you more eager to visit the Great Wall. 14．人们都喜欢旅行。或是去旅游景点，或是去公园、农场，但不论去哪里，旅行都可以让我们享受美好的时光。在旅行中，我们放松了身心，陶冶了情操，同时，旅行还可以促进我们成长、拓宽视野。回顾你的一次旅行经历，请以“A/An __________ Trip”为题，写一篇英语短文。 要求： （1）请把题目补充完整再作答，如“A Happy Trip”，“An Enjoyable Trip”，“An Unforgettable Trip”等。 （2）注意紧扣主题、语言通顺、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60字。 （3）文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。 （4）抄袭试题中阅读部分的，抄袭部分不得分。 A/An __________ Trip____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．校报的World Facts栏目正在征稿。假如你想投稿介绍我国著名的京杭大运河，你从网上查阅到以下信息。请你根据这些信息，写一篇词数不少于80的英文稿。 ·南起杭州，北至北京，全长近1800公里，是世界上最长的人工运河； ·始建于春秋时期，拥有2500多年历史 (是世界上最古老的运河)，历史上主要用于运输货物，大大促进了沿线城市的发展； ·如今还是旅游胜地。 The Beijing-Hangzhou Grand Canal is the longest man-made canal in the world. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Grand Canal is a valuable heritage passed down to us by our ancestors. We should protect it well. 4 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 9 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 2 Amazing China 单元话题（旅游）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．  旅行可以让我们暂停忙碌的脚步，你想去哪儿旅行？请以“My ideal place to visit”为题，根据提示写一篇短文，在下周的英语俱乐部活动中与大家分享。 提示： 1. Where would you like to visit? 2. Why do you like this place? 3. What would you like to do there? 要求： 1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实校名和人名； 3. 词数80～100。 My ideal place to visit________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My ideal place to visit    My ideal place to visit is Paris. It is a beautiful city.     I like Paris because it has many famous places. The Eiffel Tower is very tall and amazing. I see it in many pictures and I want to see it with my own eyes. Also, Paris is famous for delicious food like bread and cakes.     If I go there, I will climb the Eiffel Tower to see the whole city. I want to walk along the streets and watch the old buildings. I also hope to try some nice food in small restaurants.     It will be a great trip. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要求已给出，涵盖了想去的地方、喜欢的原因以及想做的事等要点，适当添加了细节，写作时保持了主谓一致，符合字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明自己理想的旅行地点是巴黎以及其所在国家； 第二步，阐述喜欢巴黎的原因，包括有著名景点埃菲尔铁塔和美味食物； 第三步，介绍在巴黎想做的事情，如登埃菲尔铁塔、逛老街、品尝美食等。 [亮点词汇] ①famous places著名景点 ②with one’s own eyes亲眼 ③try some nice food品尝美味食物 [高分句型] ①I like Paris because it has many famous places. （because引导的原因状语从句） ②If I go there, I will climb the Eiffel Tower to see the whole city. （if 引导的条件状语从句，遵循 “主将从现” 原则） 2．假如你是李华，你校英语社团的公众号正在做北京游玩好时节的系列推送。现就“The Best Time to Visit Beijing”这一话题征集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言，介绍来北京游玩的最佳时节，可以去哪里游玩以及需要准备的物品。 提示词语：beautiful, weather, sunny, a pair of comfortable shoes, have a good time 提示问题：●When is the best time to visit Beijing? ●Where can you go? ●What should you prepare for the visit? The Best Time to Visit Beijing ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： The Best Time to Visit Beijing The best time to visit Beijing is in autumn. It is very beautiful in Beijing. The weather is usually sunny and cool at that time. You can go to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and other places of interest. You should prepare a of comfortable shoes, a camera and some warm clothes. I hope you can have a good time in Beijing. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示中的三个问题，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。秋季最适合去北京游玩； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。可以去哪里游玩以及要做哪些准备； ③第三步，书写结语。希望在北京玩得愉快。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest 名胜古迹 ②have a good time 玩得开心，过得愉快 [高分句型] ①I hope you can have a good time in Beijing.（宾语从句） 3．西安是著名的中国古都，有许多名胜古迹，假如你是李华，今年暑假你去了西安旅游，度过了美好的假期，请根据表格中提供的信息写一篇日记，记录自己的西安之旅。 When What I did How did I feel What I learned in the morning visit the Terracotta Army amazing the long history of the city; ancient culture at noon taste some local food in the afternoon walk on the Ancient City Wall relaxed in the evening watch a light show near the Bell Tower fantastic 要求：词数80左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 Friday, July 25th Last summer vacation, I went to Xi’an with my family. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Friday, July 25th Last summer vacation, I went to Xi’an with my family. In the morning, we visited the Terracotta Army. It was amazing! At noon, we tasted some local food. I felt relaxed and learned about the long history and ancient culture of the city. In the afternoon, we walked on the Ancient City Wall. It was interesting and made me feel relaxed. In the evening, we watched a light show near the Bell Tower. It was fantastic! I had a wonderful day in Xi’an. It was really unforgettable! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇日记； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作内容已给出，不要遗漏。注意语句通顺，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍日记的基本信息：时间、人物和地点； 第二步：描述各个时间点对应的活动和对应感受； 第三步：总结整体的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①amazing令人惊叹的 ②relaxed放松的 ③fantastic极好的 ④unforgettable难忘的 ⑤ancient culture古代文化 [高分句型] ①I felt relaxed and learned about the long history and ancient culture of the city.（and连接并列句） 4．旅游可以让人放松身心、增长知识、开拓视野……很多学生都会选择在假期旅行。某英文报社正以“My Meaningful Trip”为题征文。请你结合生活实际写一篇不少于80词的短文向报社投稿，写出你的旅行经历和感受。提示： 1. Where did you go? 2. What did you do there? 3. How did you feel? 4. What’s your idea about travelling? 要求： 1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥。 2. 字迹清晰美观，语句连贯，语法准确，文章具有可读性。 3. 文章中不得出现真实姓名、班级、学校等信息。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Meaningful Trip Last summer vacation, I went to Lijiang, a beautiful ancient town in Yunnan. It left a deep impression on me. I wandered old stone streets, admired traditional wooden houses, learned local tie-dye craft and heard historical stories from locals. As a busy student, I relaxed fully there and gained local culture knowledge which can’t be learnt from the textbooks. To me, travelling is more than relaxation. It’s a meaningful way to broaden my horizons and explore the world. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时态”和“一般现在时态”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，注意字母大小写及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山，表达自己假期所去的地方； 第二步：详细描述自己所做的事情与感受； 第三步：表达对旅游的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①old stone streets古老的石板街 ②traditional wooden houses传统的木制房子 ③tie-dye craft扎染工艺 ④local culture knowledge当地文化知识 [高分句型] ①I went to Lijiang, a beautiful ancient town in Yunnan.（同位语） 5．旅游让我们的生活多姿多彩。学校英文报正在以“An Enjoyable Trip”为题征文。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文，描述一次愉快的旅行，向该英文报投稿。 内容提示： 1. Where did you go? 2. Who did you go with? 3. What did you do there? 4. What do you think of the trip? 要求：1. 包含所有提示的内容，可适当发挥；       2. 80词左右。 An Enjoyable Trip ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： An Enjoyable Trip Last summer, I went to Beijing with my parents. It was a fantastic trip! We visited many famous places, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. I was amazed by the long history and beautiful buildings. We also tried some traditional snacks like Beijing roast duck and tanghulu, which tasted delicious. I enjoyed the trip very much because it was not only fun but also educational. I learned a lot about Chinese culture. I hope to go there again someday. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文，为记叙文； ②时态：主要采用“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍旅行的目的地和同行的人； 第二步，介绍旅行中的活动； 第三步， 表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②be amazed by惊叹于 ③educational有教育意义的 [高分句型] ①I enjoyed the trip very much because it was not only fun but also educational. (“not only...but also...”并列结构) ②We also tried some traditional snacks like Beijing roast duck and tanghulu, which tasted delicious. (定语从句) 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．假如你是李丽，去年暑假你与家人一起去敦煌的鸣沙山、月牙泉(Crescent Lake)旅行，请用英语分享你的此次旅行。 要求： 1.包括提示信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯，书写工整； 3.80词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last summer vacation, I traveled to Mingsha Mountain and Crescent Lake in Dunhuang with my family. I planned the trip with them and helped pack up things. We took the train to Dunhuang, then went to the spots by bus. During the trip, I rode a camel happily. I also joined a concert with thousands of people there. The view of Crescent Lake was really lovely. I felt so excited because this was the most special experience of my summer. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍旅行前的准备工作和交通方式； 第二步，具体描述在旅行期间做的事情； 第三步，表达对此次旅行的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①travel to sp去某地旅行 ②the view of……的景色 [高分句型] I felt so excited because this was the most special experience of my summer.（because引导原因状语从句） 7．假如你是李华，你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“美丽的黄河风情线”(The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line)为主题的英语征文活动，你打算参加。请根据以下内容要点用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。 1. 风情线总览：the Yellow River, run through the city of Lanzhou, a famous road called Binhe Road, along the Yellow River； 2. 聚焦景观：Zhongshan Bridge, waterwheel (水车), many parks； 3. 休闲娱乐：fly kites, play chess； 4. 特色游览：go sightseeing, sheepskin raft (羊皮筏子), water bus。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line        Hi, I’m Li Hua. The Yellow River runs through the beautiful city of Lanzhou, and the Binhe Road along its banks is the heart of our famous Yellow River Custom Tourist Line. You can visit the iconic Zhongshan Bridge and ancient waterwheels, or relax in the lovely parks by flying kites and playing chess. For a unique adventure, take a sheepskin raft or water bus to enjoy the peaceful river views. It’s a perfect mix of nature, history and fun! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：以“The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line”为主题，介绍兰州黄河风情线的位置、景观、休闲活动及特色游览方式，展现自然与人文的融合。   [写作步骤] 第一步：点明黄河穿兰州城，介绍滨河路是黄河风情线的核心； 第二步：描述风情线的标志性景观（中山桥、水车）及休闲活动（公园放风筝、下棋）； 第三步：说明特色游览方式（羊皮筏子、水上巴士），总结其是自然、历史与趣味的结合。   [亮点词汇] ①iconic标志性的 ②ancient古老的 ③relax放松 ④unique独特的 ⑤peaceful宁静的   [高分句型] ①The Yellow River runs through the beautiful city of Lanzhou, and the Binhe Road along its banks is the heart of our famous Yellow River Custom Tourist Line.（用“and”衔接地理信息与风情线核心，开篇清晰点明主题） ②It’s a perfect mix of nature, history and fun!（简洁总结风情线的特点，收尾有力且突出亮点） 8．假设你是李华，你的英国好友Cindy上月来舟山参加了文化游学活动，你们打算在这个寒假继续体验该旅程。请根据以下信息写一篇短文，分享你们上个月的活动经历及这个寒假的后续安排，向校英文报“文化之旅”栏目投稿。 Zhoushan Cultural Tour When Where What last month Dongsha Ancient Fishing Town ◆learn to make model ships◆enjoy fishermen’s paintings ◆… this winter vacation … … 注意：（1）短文必须包含表中的所有信息，并适当发挥。 （2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 （3）词数：80词左右。短文开头供选用，不计入总词数。 短文开头：Cindy and I had an unforgettable cultural tour in Zhoushan last month. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Cindy and I had an unforgettable cultural tour in Zhoushan last month. At Dongsha Ancient Fishing Town, we learned how to make model ships in the morning. In the afternoon, we enjoyed the beautiful fishermen’s paintings. They were amazing. After that, we tasted some local seafood. How delicious it was! We plan to go to the nearby beach this winter vacation. We will listen to old fishermen telling stories about their past experiences. Besides, we want to learn to make a simple fishing net. We believe the trip will let us know more about sea culture and bring us a lot of fun. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时和一般将来时； ③提示：文章需包含表格信息，分两段描述上月活动与寒假安排，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述上月游览地点及活动，如学做船模、欣赏渔民画和品尝海鲜等； 第二步，介绍寒假计划，列举具体活动，例如去沙滩、听渔民讲故事、制作渔网等； 第三步，书写结束语，表达对旅程的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①local seafood 当地海鲜 ②plan to do 计划做某事 ③experience 经历 [高分句型] ①How delicious it was! (How引导的感叹句) ②We believe the trip will let us know more about sea culture and bring us a lot of fun. (省略that的宾语从句) 9．今年寒假, 深圳将迎来一批英国交换生。假定你是李华, 你将以志愿者身份, 接待交换生Mike。请给Mike写一封邮件, 告知他在深圳一日游环节的活动安排, 内容包括： 1. 活动信息(时间、参与对象)； 2. 行程安排(参观地点、特色活动等)。 注意： 1. 标点正确, 书面整洁； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节, 以使条理清楚, 行文连贯； 4. 80词左右, 邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, How is everything going? I am so happy to __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you have any questions, feel free to email me. I’m looking forward to your visit! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, How is everything going? I am so happy to tell you about the one-day tour in Shenzhen for you and other British exchange students on February 5th. First, we’ll visit Window of the World to see the famous buildings around the world. Then, we will visit a local tea house. We can taste delicious dim sum and learn about tea culture. Besides, we can take a walk by the Shenzhen Bay to enjoy the beautiful coastal scenery. This tour will be amazing. I’m sure you’ll have a great time! If you have any questions, feel free to email me. I’m looking forward to your visit! Yours, Li Hua 【总体分析】①题材：电子邮件； ②时态：一般将来时； ③提示：需包含活动时间、参与对象、具体行程安排（地点与活动），并保持邮件格式。 【写作步骤】第一步：问候并点明邮件目的，介绍活动基本信息（时间、参与人员）； 第二步：按时间顺序描述行程，上午、下午、晚上各安排一个地点与特色活动； 第三步：表达期待，自然结尾。 【亮点词汇】①exchange student交换生 ②one-day tour一日游 ③Window of the World世界之窗 ④tea house茶馆 ⑤tea culture茶文化 ⑥coastal scenery海岸风光 【高分句型】①Besides, we can take a walk by the Shenzhen Bay to enjoy the beautiful coastal scenery.（运用了“besides”衔接句子） ②I’m sure you’ll have a great time!（运用了“I’m sure + 宾语从句”表达确信与祝愿） 10．某英文网站正在开展以“用脚步丈量远方，以旅行丰盈人生”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一次旅行经历，包括旅行的见闻，你的感受和收获。 提示词语：scenery，try，happy，teach 内容提示：·What did you see and do during the trip? ·How did you feel? ·What have you learned from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     Last summer, I visited Guilin with my family. The scenery was amazing—green hills and clear rivers. I tried bamboo rafting for the first time, which made me excited and happy. During the trip, I also learned about local culture by talking to friendly villagers. This experience taught me that traveling opens our minds to new things. I felt relaxed and full of energy after the trip. I believe exploring the world helps us grow and enjoy life more. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态以一般过去时为主； ③提示：写作要点围绕旅行展开，无遗漏核心要点，细节描述贴合主题，突出了“旅行开阔视野、助力成长”的核心感悟。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先点明旅行的时间、地点和同行人员； 第二步，描述旅行中的关键体验及感受，再补充文化交流的经历； 第三步，总结旅行带来的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①amazing令人惊叹的 ②bamboo rafting竹筏漂流 [高分句型] ①The scenery was amazing—green hills and clear rivers.（破折号补充说明景色的具体内容） ②I tried bamboo rafting for the first time, which made me excited and happy.（which引导非限制性定语从句） 能力综合实践5篇 11．且停，且看，且听风吟，不负时光，不负遇见。国家地理杂志英文版 (National Geographic)正在举办“My Holiday Discovery”主题征文活动，邀请全世界中学生分享一次难忘的旅行经历。请你围绕该主题，撰写一篇80词左右的短文，向该杂志投稿。内容包含： 1. 行程回顾（时间、地点、活动等）； 2. 亮点介绍（有趣的动物、植物或文化地标等）； 3. 真诚邀请。 My Holiday Discovery ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： My Holiday Discovery Last summer, I went to Beijing with my parents. It was a great holiday discovery. We visited the Great Wall first. It is very famous and beautiful. I felt tired but excited when I stood on it. Then, we went to the Palace Museum to learn about Chinese history. I also tried Peking Duck, and it tasted delicious! Beijing is a busy city with many interesting places. I had a wonderful time there. I sincerely invite you to visit Beijing. I’m sure you will like it! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不得遗漏，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，交代旅游的时间、地点； 第二步：具体介绍行程中的亮点，包括参观著名景点和品尝当地美食。； 第三步：总结感受并向读者发出诚挚的邀请。 [亮点词汇] ①famous著名的 ②learn about了解 ③delicious美味的 ④sincerely invite诚挚地邀请 ⑤interesting有趣的 [高分句型] ①I felt tired but excited when I stood on it.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②I’m sure you will like it! (省略that的宾语从句) 12．你的外国朋友Tom计划寒假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语给他写一封邮件，介绍并推荐你的家乡福州。词数80左右。 Location (位置): southeast of China Places of interest: Mount Gushan, Three Lanes and Seven Alleys Area (面积): 11,968 square kilometers Local food (当地小吃): fish balls, Buddha Jumps Over the Wall Environment: fresh air, green trees Your opinion: … 要求： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整、规范； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)。 Hi Tom, I’m happy to hear that you plan to travel around China during the winter vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Fuzhou for a visit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I can’t wait to see you! Yours, Li Xiang 【答案】例文 Hi Tom, I’m happy to hear that you plan to travel around China during the winter vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Fuzhou for a visit. Fuzhou, which is in the southeast of China, covers an area of 11,968 square kilometers. It has fresh air and green trees, making it a comfortable place to live. There are many places of interest here, such as Mount Gushan, Three Lanes and Seven Alleys. You can also taste delicious local food like fish balls and Buddha Jumps Over the Wall. I think Fuzhou is a wonderful city with both natural beauty and tasty food. I can’t wait to see you! Yours, Li Xiang 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主； ③提示：需包含福州的位置、面积、环境、景点、当地小吃及个人评价，语句通顺，注意邮件格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接邮件开头，简要介绍福州的核心地理位置和面积，让Tom对福州有初步认知； 第二步：依次介绍福州的环境、特色景点、当地小吃，融入个人评价，突出福州的魅力。 第三步：再次发出邀请，表达期待，衔接邮件结尾，使内容完整连贯。 [亮点词汇] ① southeast of China中国东南部 ② places of interest名胜古迹 ③ local food当地小吃 ④ fresh air and green trees清新的空气和绿树 [高分句型] ① Fuzhou, which is in the southeast of China, covers an area of 11,968 square kilometers.（which引导非限制性定语从句，用于解释说明） 13．长城被誉为“世界七大奇迹之一”，以宏伟的建筑规模、悠久的历史和深厚的文化意义闻名全球，被列入《世界文化遗产名录》，假如你校英语报的Amazing Place栏目正在开展征文活动，你对此很感兴趣。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的地方——长城，向校报投稿。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总字数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名。 If you want to visit an amazing place, the Great Wall may be a good choice! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I will feel glad if my writing makes you more eager to visit the Great Wall. 【答案】例文 If you want to visit an amazing place, the Great Wall may be a good choice! The Great Wall that lies in northern China has a long history of over 2,000 years. Ancient workers spent lots of time building it with earth and stones. It’s not just a wall. It once kept the country safe and now carries rich Chinese culture. Many visitors come here every year. They walk along the winding wall and enjoy its grand beauty. I once visited it and felt so proud of our ancestors’ wisdom. In short, it is a must-visit for anyone who loves history and beauty. I will feel glad if my writing makes you more eager to visit the Great Wall. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，辅以一般过去时； ③提示：图示所给内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，直接引出写作对象； 第二步：主体论述，先介绍长城的地理位置、历史时长与建造材料；再补充说明长城的古今价值；接着描述游客的游览活动，同时融入自身的游览感受，增强文章的真实感与感染力； 第三步：结尾总结，表达希望本文能激发读者游览兴趣的意愿，收束全文。 [亮点词汇] ①winding蜿蜒的 ②grand宏伟的 ③ancestors’ wisdom祖先的智慧 ④must-visit必去之地 [高分句型] ①The Great Wall that lies in northern China has a long history of over 2,000 years. (that引导的定语从句) ②In short, it is a must-visit for anyone who loves history and beauty. (who引导的定语从句) 14．人们都喜欢旅行。或是去旅游景点，或是去公园、农场，但不论去哪里，旅行都可以让我们享受美好的时光。在旅行中，我们放松了身心，陶冶了情操，同时，旅行还可以促进我们成长、拓宽视野。回顾你的一次旅行经历，请以“A/An __________ Trip”为题，写一篇英语短文。 要求： （1）请把题目补充完整再作答，如“A Happy Trip”，“An Enjoyable Trip”，“An Unforgettable Trip”等。 （2）注意紧扣主题、语言通顺、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60字。 （3）文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。 （4）抄袭试题中阅读部分的，抄袭部分不得分。 A/An __________ Trip____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 An Enjoyable Trip Nowadays, more and more people like to travel in their holidays. I love traveling. Traveling not only helps me relax but also opens my eyes to the world. Last summer vacation, I went to Beijing with my parents. It is a very big city! We went to the Great Wall first. We saw many mountains around. Then we went to visit Tian’anmen Square. It was also fantastic. We lived in a small house in a Beijing Hutong. We also ate delicious food, like Beijing duck. We took many photos during the trip. What an enjoyable trip! Although we were tired, we felt really happy. 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”。 ③提示：需补全标题，围绕旅行地点、活动、感受展开，注意词数要求。 【写作步骤】 第一步：补全标题，开篇点题； 第二步：介绍自己的旅行经历； 第三步：结尾表达自己的感受。 【亮点词汇】 ①more and more越来越多的 ②opens my eyes to the world打开我的眼界 ③saw many mountains around看见四周群山环绕 【高分句型】 ①Traveling not only helps me relax but also opens my eyes to the world. (not only...but also句型) ②Although we were tired, we felt really happy. (Although引导的让步状语从句) 15．校报的World Facts栏目正在征稿。假如你想投稿介绍我国著名的京杭大运河，你从网上查阅到以下信息。请你根据这些信息，写一篇词数不少于80的英文稿。 ·南起杭州，北至北京，全长近1800公里，是世界上最长的人工运河； ·始建于春秋时期，拥有2500多年历史 (是世界上最古老的运河)，历史上主要用于运输货物，大大促进了沿线城市的发展； ·如今还是旅游胜地。 The Beijing-Hangzhou Grand Canal is the longest man-made canal in the world. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Grand Canal is a valuable heritage passed down to us by our ancestors. We should protect it well. 【答案】例文 The Beijing-Hangzhou Grand Canal is the longest man-made canal in the world. It starts from Hangzhou and ends in Beijing, running almost 1,800 kilometers. People started building it over 2,500 years ago during the Spring and Autumn Period, making it the world’s oldest canal. The canal played a great role in the development of the cities in the canal line area. It helped transport food, silk and other things. Today, the government also turns parts of the canal into great places for tourists to enjoy the beautiful scenes and experience Chinese culture. The Grand Canal is a valuable heritage passed down to us by our ancestors. We should protect it well. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主，涉及历史用“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中运河的长度、位置、历史、作用及现状，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，词数80以上。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。用首句揭示题干，介绍运河基本地理信息； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。按时间顺序说明历史背景与功能； 第三步，书写结语。描述现状并呼应保护倡议。 [亮点词汇] ①man-made人工的 ②transport运输 ③experience体验 [高分句型] ①People started building it over 2,500 years ago during the Spring and Autumn Period, making it the world’s oldest canal.(运用了现在分词作状语) 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $