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九年级上册沪外版
【寒假专版】C版写作高级词句
寒假专版
【C版高级词句】描述一次难忘的个人成长
经历
写作提分攻略·沪外版九年级上册
范文一高级词句
一、高级词汇
hiking trip
∥'harkn trip/
含义:徒步旅行
搭配:participate in a hiking trip参加徒步旅行:a three-day hiking trip三天的徒步旅行
steep
I/stipll
含义:陡峭的
搭配:a steep path陡峭的小路;steep mountains陡峭的山脉
rocky∥rwa∥
含义:多岩石的
搭配:rocky terrain岩石地带:a rocky path多岩石的小路
ache
lleikll
含义:疼痛:隐隐作痛
搭配:legs ache badly腿疼得厉害;headache头疼
perseverance
∥.p3:sa viarans∥
含义:毅力:坚持不懈
搭配:perseverance is the key to success毅力是成功的关键;show perseverance表现出毅力
九年级上册沪外版
【寒假专版】
C版写作高级词句
comfort zone //kunfat zaun//
含义:舒适区
搭配:step out of one's comfort zone走出舒适区;stay in the comfort zone停留在舒适区
overcome
∥ava'k/l
含义:克服:战胜
搭配:overcome difficulties克服困难;overcome challenges战胜挑战
二、高级句型&万能模板句型
At first,I was excited but soon felt nervous because I had never walked such a long distance before.
中文意思:起初,我很兴奋,但很快就感到紧张,因为我以前从未走过这么远的路。
模板亮点:At first..but soon..because.描述情绪变化及原因,用于开篇引入背景
英文:However,on the second day,.the path became steep and rocky:
中文意思:然而,第二天,小路变得陡峭多石。
模板亮点:However..转折连词,引出与前文对比的情况,使叙事更有层次
英文:Growth comes from facing challenges,not avoiding them.
中文意思:成长来自面对挑战,而不是逃避它们。
模板亮点:comes from doing.,not doing.强调做事的方式,用于表达观点或哲理
I not only finished the difficult hike but also learned an important lesson:perseverance is the key to
success.
中文意思:我不仅完成了艰难的徒步旅行,还学到了重要的一课:毅力是成功的关键。
模板亮点:not only..but also..并列结构,强调双重收获,用于总结经历的成果
This experience taught me that personal growth happens when we step out of our comfort zone and
overcome difficulties.
中文意思:这次经历让我明白,当我们走出舒适区、克服困难时,个人成长就会发生。
模板亮点:This experience taught me that.总结经验教训,用于结尾升华主题,表达感悟
九年级上册沪外版
【寒假专版】
C版写作高级词句
An Unforgettable Experience of Personal Growth
Last summer,I participated in a three-day hiking trip organized by my school.At first,I was excited but
soon felt nervous because I had never walked such a long distance before.
On the first day,everything went well.We walked through beautiful forests and sang songs together.
However,on the second day,the path became steep and rocky.After walking for hours,my legs started
to ache badly.I wanted to give up and asked my teacher if I could rest at the camp.
My teacher looked at me gently and said,"Remember why you started this trip.Growth comes from
facing challenges,not avoiding them."His words made me think.I realized that if I quit now,I would
regret it.So I took a short break,drank some water,and continued walking with the group.
Finally,we reached the top of the mountain.The view was amazing-green mountains stretching as far
as the eye could see,and white clouds floating below us.At that moment,I felt so proud of myself.I not
only finished the difficult hike but also learned an important lesson:perseverance is the key to success.
This experience taught me that personal growth happens when we step out of our comfort zone and
overcome difficulties.It was truly an unforgettable joumney that will always encourage me to keep trying
in the future.
范文二高级词句
一、高级词汇
represent∥repm'cetW
含义:代表
搭配:represent one's class代表班级;represent the school代表学校
terrify∥terfar//
含义:使害怕;使恐惧
搭配:terrify sb..使某人害怕;be terrified of sth.害怕某事
hesitation∥,hezI'tey/fim/
含义:犹豫:迟疑
搭配:notice one's hesitation注意到某人的犹豫;without hesitation毫不犹豫
stutter∥'stata(r)/
含义:口吃:结结巴巴地说
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九年级上册沪外版
【寒假专版】C版写作高级词句
搭配:stutter when speaking说话结巴:stop stuttering停止口吃
frustration /fra'strerfn//
含义:沮丧:懊恼
搭配:in frustration沮丧地:feelfrustration感到沮丧
tremble∥trembl/l
含义:颤抖;发抖
搭配:hands tremble手颤抖;tremble with fear因害怕而颤抖
overcome
∥ava'kw/∥
含义:克服:战胜
搭配:overcome fear克服恐惧;overcome difficulties战胜困难
courage∥'kwmd3∥
含义:勇气:胆量
搭配:have the courage to do sth.有勇气做某事;lose courage失去勇气
annual∥enjual//
含义:年度的:每年的
搭配:annual contest年度比赛;annualmeeting年度会议
excellence∥'eksalans/∥
含义:优秀:卓越
搭配:Excellence Award优秀奖;achieve excellence追求卓越
二、高级句型&万能模板句型
英文:Growth begins when you challenge yourself.
中文意思:成长始于你挑战自我之时。
模板亮点:whn引导时间状语从句,表达条件与结果的关系,适用于阐述成长、进步类主题
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九年级上册沪外版
【寒假专版】
C版写作高级词句
英文:Mistakes are part of learning.What matters is that you keep going.
中文意思:错误是学习的一部分。重要的是你要坚持下去。
模板亮点:What matters is that.”强调句结构,用于突出核心观点,适用于鼓励、励志场景
英文:Courage isn't the absence of fear,,but acting despite it..
中文意思:勇气不是没有恐惧,而是尽管恐惧仍采取行动。
模板亮点:”isn't.but.”否定肯定结构,用于辩证阐述概念本质,适用于定义、哲理类表达
From then on,I no longer fear taking on new challenges,knowing each one helps me grow.
中文意思:从那以后,我不再害怕接受新的挑战,因为知道每一个挑战都能帮助我成长。
模板亮点:”From then on.”引出变化,knowing”现在分词作伴随状语,适用于描述经历后的转
变与感悟
A Memorable Lesson in Personal Growth
During my eighth grade,I was chosen to represent my class in the school's annual English speech contest.
Public speaking had always terrified me,so I immediately wanted to refuse the opportunity.My English
teacher,Ms.Lee,noticed my hesitation and encouraged me to try,saying,"Growth begins when you
challenge yourself.”
For the next two weeks,I spent every evening practicing my speech about environmental protection.At
first,I stuttered and forgot my lines,often running to my room in frustration.One night,I even cried,
telling my mother I wasn't good enough.She hugged me and said,"Mistakes are part of learning.What
matters is that you keep going."
On the day of the contest,my hands trembled as I stood on the stage.When I saw Ms.Lee in the audience
giving me a thumbs-up,I took a deep breath and began.Surprisingly,once I started speaking,the words
flowed more naturally.I still made a small mistake in the middle,but instead of panicking,I paused,
smiled,and continued.
When the results were announced,I didn't win first place,but I received an"Excellence Award."As Iheld
the certificate,I realized the real victory wasn't the prize-it was overcoming my fear.This experience
taught me that courage isn't the absence of fear,but acting despite it.From then on,I no longer fear
taking on new challenges,knowing each one helps me grow.
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