Unit 7 写一篇关于环境保护的议论文-2025-2026学年八年级下册英语满分范文及模板（沪外版）

八下沪外版 【写作专版】 议论文范文及模板 写作专版 【议论文写作】环境保护主题 满分范文+写作模板·沪外版八下 满分范文 The environment is very important for all living things on Earth.However,our planet is facing serious problems like pollution,deforestation,and global warming.Air pollution and water pollution are serious problems in many cities.We can see rubbish everywhere,and plastic bags are causing a lot of waste. Many animals are becoming endangered because their homes are destroyed.If we don't protect the environment,we will lose our beautiful home. We should take action to protect the environment.First,we should reduce waste and sort garbage every day.It's a good idea to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when shopping.Second,we need to save resources.Remember to turn off the lights when you leave a room to save electricity.We should also save water by fixing dripping taps.Third we can do green activities.We should plant more trees to make our city greener.We can ride bikes or take buses to school to reduce air pollution.Recycling paper is another good way to help. Environmental protection is necessary for sustainable development.Everyone can do something small to help the environment,like sorting garbage.Let's work together to protect our environment and make the world a better place.If we all try our best,we can have a clean and healthy planet for future generations. 【满分范文结构解析】 第一段（问题阐述）： 开篇点明环境重要性，使用However转折引出问题： 列举具体环境问题：pollution,deforestation,global warming: 描述现象：rubbish everywhere,plastic bags causing waste; 结尾警告：If we don't protect..we will lose.o 第二段（解决方案）： 使用First,.Second,.Tird清晰分层建议： 具体措施：reduce waste,.sort garbage,use cloth bags:. 节约资源：turn off lights,fix dripping taps; 八下沪外版 【写作专版】 议论文范文及模板 绿色活动：plant trees,.ride bikes,.recycling paper。 第三段（呼吁行动）： 强调必要性：necessary for sustainable development; 个人行动：Everyone can do something small: 集体呼吁：Let's work together; 未来展望：clean and healthy planet for future generations。 满分范文模板 The environment is very important for all living things on Earth.However,our planet is facing serious problems like 1. (间题1：pollution,deforestation,global warming).2. (间题2：Air pollution,Water pollution)and3. (问题3：water pollution,soil pollution) are serious problems in many cities.We can see 4. (现象1：ubbish everywhere,smog in the sky),and 5. (现象2：plastic bags,disposable bottles)are causing a lot of waste. Many animals are becoming endangered because their homes are destroyed.If we don't protect the environment,we will lose our beautiful home. We should take action to protect the environment.First,we should 6. (措施l:rece waste,save energy)and 7. (措施2：sort garbage,reuse items)every day.It's a good idea to use 8. (替代物1：cloth bags,.glass bottles)instead of9. (被 1:plastic bags,plastic bottles)when shopping.Second,we need to save resources.Remember to10. (节约行为l:turn off the lights,.close the windows)when you leave a room to save electricity.We should also save water by 11. (节约行为2：fixing dripping taps, taking shorter showers).Third,we can do green activities.We should 12. (绿色活动1： plant more trees,grow flowers)to make our city greener.We can 13. (绿色活动2：ide bikes,take buses)to school to reduce air pollution.14. (绿色活动3：Recycling paper,. Composting food waste)is another good way to help Environmental protection is necessary for sustainable development.Everyone can do something small to help the environment,like 15. _(小事例：sorting garbage,picking up litter).Let's work together to protect our environment and make the world a better place.If we all try our best,we can have a 16. (形容未来环境：clean andhealthy,beautiful and green)planet for future generations. 【模板填写指南】 2 八下沪外版 【写作专版】 议论文范文及模板 1.主要环境问题1（如：pollution/deforestation) 2.具体污染类型1（如：Air pollution/Soil pollution) 3.具体污染类型2（如：Water pollution/.Noise pollution) 4.可见的环境现象（如：ubbish everywhere/smog in the sky) 5.主要污染源（如：plastic bags/disposable bottles) 6.日常环保措施1（如：reduce waste/save energy) 7.日常环保措施2（如：sort garbage1 reuse items) 8.环保替代品（如：cloth bags/glass bottles) 9.被替代的污染品（如：plastic bags/plastic bottles) 10.节能行为（如：turn off lights/close windows) 11.节水行为（如：fix dripping taps/take shorter showers) 12.绿化活动（如：plant trees/grow flowers) l3.绿色出行（如：ride bikes/take buses) 14.回收利用活动（如：Recycling paper//Composting food waste) 15.个人环保小事例（如：sorting garbage/picking up litter) 16.未来环境描述（如：clean and healthy/beautiful and green) 填写示例： 1.pollution 2.Air pollution 3.water pollution 4.rubbish everywhere 5.plastic bags 6.reduce waste 7.sort garbage 8.cloth bags 9.plastic bags 10.turn off the lights 11.fixing dripping taps 12.plant more trees 13.ride bikes 14.Recycling paper 15.sorting garbage 16.clean and healthy 高分亮点总结 3 八下沪外版 【写作专版】 议论文范文及模板 结构清晰：三段式（问题→措施→呼吁），逻辑连贯，层次分明 衔接自然：使用However,.First,,Second,,Third等过渡词增强连贯性 建议具体：环保措施详细可行（分类垃圾/关灯/修漏水龙头等） 词汇丰富：准确使用deforestation,sustainable development,endangered等高级词汇 情感共鸣：结尾呼吁Let's work together增强感染力 写作小贴士·议论文要点 问题具体化：避免泛泛而谈，用具体事例（如塑料袋污染/动物濒危） 措施分层次：使用First/Second/Third使建议条理清晰 数据支撑：可加入简单数据（如”超过80%的海洋塑料来自陆地”） 对比手法：对比环保行为前后的变化（如使用布袋前后） 呼吁行动：结尾用Let's.e can..…等句式激发读者行动