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八年级下册沪外版
【写作专版】
满分范文及模板
写作专版
【满分范文】描述一次意外事件及处理过程
写作提分攻略·沪外版八年级下册
满分范文
Last Saturday afternoon,I was helping my mom prepare dinner in the kitchen.While I was cutting
vegetables with a sharp knife,my little sister suddenly ran into the room and startled me.I accidentally
cut my finger badly,and blood started bleeding immediately.I felt scared and ner vous,but I remembered
my dad once told me to stay calm in an emergency.
At first,I held my finger tightly to apply pressure and called for help.My mom quickly came over and
helped me clean the wound carefully with cold water.Then she took out a bandage from the first-aid kit
and put it on my finger.Although the cut was painful,I was lucky that the bleeding stopped soon.My
mom praised me for staying calm,which made me feel a little better.
After this accident,I realized that knowing some first-aid skills is very important when unexpected things
happen.I also learned that staying calm is the first step to dealing with an emergency.Even though it
was a scary experience,it taught me a valuable lesson about how to handle accidents properly.
满分范文模板
Last_(时间:Saturday afternoon,Sunday morning)一(时间状语从句:while I was helping my mom
prepare dinner in the kitchen,,when I was playing outside with friends,.While I was_(正在做的事情:
cutting vegetables with a sharp knife,.riding a bike in the park),_(突发事件:my little sister suddenly
ran into the room and startled me,a dog suddenly ran out and scared me).I accidentally_(意外情况:
cut my finger badly,fell off the bike and hurt myknee),and(:blood startedbleeding immediately,
I felt a sharp pain).I felt(:scared and nervous,frightened and worried),but I remembered
(想起的建议:my dad once told me to stay calm in an emergency,my teacher taught us to call for help
first).
At first,,I_(第一反应:held my finger tightly to apply pressure and called for help,sat on the ground
八年级下册沪外版
【写作专版】
满分范文及模板
and checked my knee).(帮助者:My mom,My friend quickly came over and helped me(处理
方式:clean the wound carefully with cold water,,put some medicine on the injury).Then_(进一步
she took out a bandage from the first-aid kit and put it on my finger,he helped me stand up and
walk home).Although一(感受:the cut was painful,my knee hurt a lot),I was lucky that一(好转情
况:the bleeding stopped soon,I didn't get seriously hurt)).(帮助者:My mom,My friend)praised
me for(被表扬的原因:staying calm,being brave),which made me feel a little better.
After this accident,I realized that(1:knowing some first-aid skills is very important when
unexpected things happen,being careful is necessary in daily life).I also learned that(2:staying
calm is the first step to dealing with an emergency,asking for help when in trouble is a smart choice).
Even though it was a scary experience,it taught me a valuable lesson about一(学到的教训:how to
handle accidents properly,how to keep myself safe).
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