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【写作专版】U1:描述一次意外事件及处理过程
写作专版
【好词好句】描述一次意外事件及处理过程
写作提分攻略·沪外版八年级下册
好词好句积累
一、好词积累
意外事件相关
名词&短语:accident意外事件;fall down摔倒;cut伤口;bleeding流血:fire火灾;traffic
accident交通事故;broken leg断腿;sprained ankle扭伤的脚踝;emergency紧急情况
动词&短语:happen发生;fall off从…摔下;burm烧伤:hurt受伤:bleed流血:sip
滑倒;call for help呼救;give first aid进行急救:send to hospital送往医院
处理过程相关
动词&短语:stay calm保持冷静:check检查;cover覆盖:press按压;bandage包扎;cal
120拨打l20:lie down躺下;drink water喝水:take medicine吃药;follow the doctor's
advice听从医生建议
形容词&副词:immediately立即;quickly迅速地:carefully小心地:seriously严重地;safe
安全的;dangerous危险的
感受与结果
名词&短语:pain疼痛:fear害怕;relief宽慰;lesson教训;experience经历;recovery
恢复
形容词:scared害怕的;surprised惊讶的:painful疼痛的;ucy幸运的;careless粗心的;
careful小心的
二、经典好句
1.描述意外事件发生
1.1 Last Sunday,an accident happened to me when I was riding my bike to the park.
1.2 While Tom was playing basketball,he fell down and hurt his knee badly.
1.3 Yesterday,a small fire broke out in our kitchen because my mother forgot to turn off the gas.
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八下沪外版
【写作专版】U1:描述一次意外事件及处理过程
2.描述处理过程
2.1 At first,I felt scared,but I tried to stay calm and called my dad for help.
2.2 When Mary cut her finger,she immediately ran to the bathroom to wash it with clean water.
2.3 My brother sprained his ankle,so I helped him sit down and then called 120.
3.描述感受与结果
3.1 Although I had a painful experience,I learned a lesson:we should always be careful in daily life.
3.2 After the accident,my leg was in pain for a week,but I was lucky because it wasn't broken.
3.3 Thanks to the doctor's help,Jack recovered quickly and he promised to be more careful next time.
4.综合描述(事件+处理+感受)
4.1 Last month,I saw an old man fall down on the street.I ran to him quickly,checked ifhe was okay,
and then called an ambulance.Although I was a little nervous,I felt happy to help him.
4.2 During the summer vacation,my cousin burned her hand while cooking.She stayed calm,put her
hand under cold water for 10 minutes,and then went to see the doctor.Now she always remembers
to be careful when using the stove.
A Scary but Educational Accident
Last Saturday afternoon,I was helping my mom prepare dinner in the kitchen.While I was cutting
vegetables with a sharp knife,my little sister suddenly ran into the room and startled me.I accidentally
cut my finger badly,and blood started bleeding immediately.I felt scared and nervous,but I remembered
my dad once told me to stay calm in an emergency.
At first,I held my finger tightly to apply pressure and called for help.My mom quickly came over and
helped me clean the wound carefully with cold water.Then she took out a bandage from the first-aid kit
and put it on my finger.Although the cut was painful,I was lucky that the bleeding stopped soon.My
mom praised me for staying calm,which made me feel a little better.
After this accident,I realized that knowing some first-aid skills is very important when unexpected
things happen.I also learned that staying calm is the first step to dealing with an emergency.Even
though it was a scary experience,it taught me a valuable lesson about how to handle accidents properly.
八下沪外版
【写作专版】U1:描述一次意外事件及处理过程
A Scary but Educational Accident
-(Time,e.g.Last Saturday afternoon,One day),I was_(doing an activity,e.g.helping my mom
prepare dinner in the kitchen,riding my bike to school).While I was(specific action,e.g.cutting
vegetables with a sharp knife,walking past the park),-(cause of accident,e.g.my little sister suddenly
ran into the room and startled me,a dog suddenly ran in front of me).I(accident happened,e.g.
accidentally cutmy finger badly,fell down),and(result,e.g.blood started bleeding immediately,I got
hurt).I felt-(feelings,e.g.scared and nervous,painful and scared),butI(response,e.g.remembered
my dad once told me to stay calm in an emergency,tried to stay calm).
At first,I(first aid action,e.g.held my finger tightly to apply pressure and called for help,called my
mom for help).-(helper,e.g.Mymom,My friend Tom)quickly(helper's action,e.g.came over and
helped me clean the wound carefully with cold water,applied pressure to the cut to stop the bleeding).
Then(further action,e.g.she took out a bandage from the first-aid kit and put it on my finger,we took
him to the hospital nearby).Although(difficulty,e.g.the cut was painful,the accident was scary),I
was lucky that(positive result,e.g.the bleeding stopped soon,my friends were there to help me).
After this accident,I realized that(lesson 1,e.g.knowing some first-aid skills is very important when
unexpected things happen,staying calm is the first step to dealing with an emergency).I also learned
that(lesson 2,e.g.staying calm is the first step to dealing with an emergency,helping others in need is
meaningful).Even though it was a(adjective for experience,e.g.scary,painful)experience,it taught
me a valuable lesson about-(summary,e.g.how to handle accidents properly,how to stay calm in an
emergency).
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