湖北黄冈市2025-2026学年上学期高三期末英语写作导学案（邮件邀请+读后续写之邻里温情）-2026届高三英语二轮复习

湖北黄冈市2025-2026学年上学期高三期末英语写作导学案（邮件邀请+读后续写之邻里温情） 一、邮件写作（邀请外教参加试验田劳作） （一）题型核心考点 本题为应用文之邀请类邮件，核心考查“邀请意图+活动细节”的清晰表达，兼顾礼貌得体的交际语气（对长辈/外教）。评分重点：内容完整性（活动安排+邀请）、行文逻辑、格式规范及语法多样性。 （二）写作任务 假定你是李华，请给外教Susan写一封邮件，邀请她参加学校举办的试验田劳作活动。内容包括：(1)活动安排；(2)提出邀请。注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 邮件开头已给出： Dear Susan, I’m writing to invite you to take part in the farmland labor activity held by our school. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （三）语法亮点预判（可借鉴句式） 非谓语动词：用于补充活动细节，如“The activity, organized by our school’s Student Union, will start at 9 am.” 宾语从句：表达邀请意图，如“I wonder if you are available to join us.” 并列结构：描述活动内容，如“We will plant vegetables, water crops and learn about organic farming.” （四）高分句子默写 这项活动由学校学生会组织，将于本周六上午9点在校园试验田开始，持续约2小时。________________________________________________________________ 我们将体验播种、浇水等农活，还能了解有机农业的基本知识。________________________________________________________________ 我相信这次活动会让你更好地感受中国校园生活，也能亲近自然。________________________________________________________________ 不知你是否有空参加，期待能和你一起度过一段愉快的时光。________________________________________________________________ （五）拓展表达练习（同义替换） 邀请：invite you to take part in = _______ = _______ 举办：held by = _______ = _______ 体验：experience = _______ = _______ 期待：look forward to = _______ = _______ 二、读后续写（邻里温情主题） （一）主题分析与续写思路 核心主题：邻里间的善意与陪伴，从“陌生疏离”到“彼此关照”的情感递进。 伏笔呼应：前文奶奶帮李华收茉莉、送蔬菜、打扫门口，李华照顾奶奶膝盖，为续写“照料奶奶、情感升温”铺垫。 续写思路： Paragraph 1（推门照料）：描写奶奶生病状态→李华主动照顾（端水、拿药、做饭）→奶奶的愧疚与感动，强化情感联结。 Paragraph 2（康复回馈）：奶奶康复后上门→带来亲手制作的食物/礼物→两人关系进一步拉近，凸显邻里温情主题。 （二）写作任务 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Three months after moving into the old community, I’d only met Grandma Chen next door once. That day, I was carrying express boxes upstairs when she slowly came down, holding the handrail（楼梯扶手）. She gave me an oil-paper wrapped candy: “Young man, take care—the stairs are slippery.” I thanked her quickly and hurried on. Her door was always piled high with junk, and the potted plants on her windowsill（窗台）were wilted（枯萎的）, giving off a lonely, cold atmosphere. The change happened on a rainy night. I worked overtime late and rushed into the corridor with my electric bike, only to see Grandma Chen squatting（蹲着）at my door, soaked through, clutching a plastic bag tightly. “You’re back!” She stood up hurriedly and held out the bag. “I saw your jasmine（茉莉）fell over on the balcony this afternoon. I was afraid the rain would ruin its roots, so I moved it inside.” I suddenly remembered I’d forgotten to bring in the new jasmine pot that morning. Inside the bag, the flower was wrapped in an old towel, leaves still dotted with water—unharmed. I urged her into my house to dry off, but she waved me away: “Don’t bother. I’m just a dirty old lady.” As she spoke, she slipped and stumbled toward the stairs. I caught her just in time and noticed her swollen knee. That night, I applied medicine to her knee. She sat on my sofa restlessly, repeating, “I’m troubling you so much.” After that, I made sure to chat with Grandma Chen whenever we met. She still spoke little, but every morning when I left, there would be a bag of fresh vegetables from her small garden downstairs at my door. Last Saturday, I forgot to take out the trash before a business trip. When I came back, my doorway was spotless. Grandma Chen’s door was slightly open, and I heard faint coughing inside. 注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右；(2)请按如下格式作答。 Paragraph 1: I pushed the door gently. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Once Grandma Chen recovered, she knocked on my door. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三）高分亮点预判 细节描写：通过动作（如“pat her back softly”）、神态（如“eyes filled with tears”）凸显情感。 语法结构：定语从句、分词作伴随状语，提升句式复杂度。 情感连贯：从“照料”到“回馈”，呼应前文善意，升华邻里温情主题。 （四）高分句子默写 一、描写类（场景与动作） 我轻轻推开门，看见陈奶奶蜷缩在沙发上，脸色苍白，手里紧紧攥着一块手帕。 ________________________________________________________________ 我赶紧给她倒了杯温水，拿出感冒药，耐心地看着她服下。 ________________________________________________________________ 二、情感类（感悟与联结） 原来沉默的陪伴和真诚的善意，能轻易打破陌生人之间的隔阂。 ________________________________________________________________ 从那以后，我们的关系就像家人一样，老旧的社区也因这份温暖变得格外亲切。 ________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、邮件写作（邀请外教参加试验田劳作） （一）题型核心考点 本题为应用文之邀请类邮件，核心考查“邀请意图+活动细节”的清晰表达，兼顾礼貌得体的交际语气（对长辈/外教）。评分重点：内容完整性（活动安排+邀请）、行文逻辑、格式规范及语法多样性。 （二）高分范文（81词） Dear Susan, I’m writing to invite you to take part in the farmland labor activity held by our school. Organized by the Student Union, it will start at 9 am this Saturday in the campus test field and last for about two hours. We will experience sowing seeds, watering crops and learning basic knowledge of organic farming. I believe this activity will let you feel Chinese campus life better and get close to nature. I wonder if you are available to join us. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （三）语法亮点解析 非谓语动词（过去分词作定语）：Organized by the Student Union, it will start... （替代定语从句，简洁紧凑，提升句式复杂度。） 并列结构：We will experience sowing seeds, watering crops and learning... （三个动名词短语并列，使活动内容清晰，句式对称。） 宾语从句：I wonder if you are available to join us. （委婉表达邀请，语气礼貌，符合对於外教的交际场景。） （四）高分句子默写答案 Organized by the school’s Student Union, the activity will start at 9 am this Saturday in the campus test field and last for about two hours. We will experience sowing seeds, watering crops and learn basic knowledge of organic farming. I believe this activity will let you better experience Chinese campus life and get close to nature. I wonder if you are available to join us and look forward to having a pleasant time with you. （五）拓展表达练习答案 invite you to take part in = invite you to participate in = ask you to join in held by = organized by = hosted by experience = enjoy = have a taste of look forward to = anticipate = long for 二、读后续写（邻里温情主题） （一）主题分析与续写思路 核心主题：邻里间的善意与陪伴，从“陌生疏离”到“彼此关照”的情感递进。 伏笔呼应：前文奶奶帮李华收茉莉、送蔬菜、打扫门口，李华照顾奶奶膝盖，为续写“照料奶奶、情感升温”铺垫。 续写思路： Paragraph 1（推门照料）：描写奶奶生病状态→李华主动照顾（端水、拿药、做饭）→奶奶的愧疚与感动，强化情感联结。 Paragraph 2（康复回馈）：奶奶康复后上门→带来亲手制作的食物/礼物→两人关系进一步拉近，凸显邻里温情主题。 （二）高分范文（148词） Paragraph 1: I pushed the door gently. Grandma Chen was huddled on the sofa, her face pale and forehead covered with sweat. She coughed softly from time to time, and a half-empty cup of water sat on the coffee table. I hurried over to feel her forehead—she had a fever. I fetched a basin of warm water to wipe her face, then took out the cold medicine I prepared at home. After she took the medicine, I cooked her a bowl of light porridge. She held the bowl, her hands trembling slightly, and whispered, “You’re so kind to me, like my own grandchild.” Paragraph 2: Once Grandma Chen recovered, she knocked on my door. In her hand was a plate of steamed buns, still warm. “I made these for you. Thank you for taking care of me these days,” she said with a smile. Later, she helped me tidy up the balcony and planted some new flowers beside the jasmine. Gradually, her house was no longer cluttered, and the windowsill was filled with blooming plants. Our relationship grew closer, and the old community was filled with warm memories because of our mutual care. （三）高分亮点解析 细节描写：huddled on the sofa, face pale, hands trembling 等动作、神态描写，让场景更真实，情感更真挚。 非谓语动词：her face pale and forehead covered with sweat（独立主格结构），替代简单句，提升语法层次。 伏笔呼应：描写奶奶整理房屋、种植花草，呼应前文“门口堆杂物、植物枯萎”的细节，情节连贯。 主题升华：以“mutual care”总结，凸显“双向善意”的邻里温情，符合高考积极价值观导向。 （四）高分句子默写答案 一、描写类（场景与动作） I pushed the door gently and saw Grandma Chen huddled on the sofa, her face pale, clutching a handkerchief tightly in her hand. I quickly poured her a cup of warm water, took out the cold medicine, and watched her take it patiently. 二、情感类（感悟与联结） It turns out that silent company and sincere kindness can easily break down the barrier between strangers. Since then, our relationship has been like that of a family, and the old community has become particularly warm because of this kindness. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $