Unit 3 谈论个人梦想及为实现梦想的努力-2025-2026学年高中英语满分范文及模板选择性必修第二册（重大版）

选择性必修第二册重庆大学版 【梦想主题】 U3满分范文及模板 梦想主题 【U3满分范文】谈论个人梦想及为实现梦 想的努力 写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·重庆大学版 满分范文 Hello,everyone.My name is Your Name].Today,I want to talk about my dream and the efforts I am making to achieve it. My dream is to become a scientist in the future.I am very interested in science,and I want to discover new things that can help people.My ambition is to work in a lab and do research on environmental protection. To achieve my dream,I study hard every day.I pay special attention to science and math classes,and I read books about famous scientists in my free time.I know it is not easy to realize my dream,so I never give up.Even when I face difficulties in my studies,I tell myself to try again.My teacher always says, ”No pains,no gains..”So I keep working hard. I am determined to stick to my goal.I plan to join the science club at school and do some small experi- ments.I believe that with persistent efforts,I can achieve my dream step by step.I hope one day I can make contributions to the world as a scientist 【满分范文逐段解析】 第一段（梦想陈述）： 开篇用Helo,everyone..自然引入话题： 核心句型：Today,I want to talk about..明确写作主题： 使用my dream and the efforts点明文章核心要素。 第二段（梦想细节）： 用My dream is to become..清晰表达职业目标； 词汇亮点：discover new things/research on environmental protection展示专业词汇； 通过help people强调梦想的社会价值。 选择性必修第二册重庆大学版 【梦想主题】 U3满分范文及模板 第三段（努力过程）： 使用study hard/pay special attention to描述具体行动： 引用名言：”No pains,.no gains.”增强说服力： 心理描写：I never give up/try again展现积极态度。 第四段（未来计划）： 用I am determined to stick to my goal表达决心： 具体计划：join the science club/do experiments体现可行性： 结尾升华：make contributions to the world提升立意高度。 满分范文模板 Hello,everyone.My name is 1.Today,I want to talk about my dream and the efforts I am making to achieve it. My dream is to become a 2.in the future.I am very interested in 3.,and I want to 4.that can help people.My ambition is to work in a 5.and do 6. To achieve my dream,I 7.every day.I pay special attention to 8.and I read books about 9.in my free time.I know it is not easy to realize my dream,so I never 10..Even when I face 11.,I tell myself to 12..My 13.always says,"14."So I keep working hard. I am determined to stick to my goal.I plan to 15.and do 16..I believe that with 17.,I can achieve my dream step by step.I hope one day I can 18.as a 19. 【模板填写指南】 1.你的姓名（如：LiHua) 2.梦想职业（如：scientist/teacher//doctor) 3.感兴趣的领域（如：science/art/music) 4.具体目标（如：discover new things/help others) 5.工作场所（如：lab/school/hospital) 6.具体工作内容（如：research/teaching) 2 选择性必修第二册重庆大学版 【梦想主题】 U3满分范文及模板 7.日常努力（如：study hard/practice skills) 8.重点学科/领域（如：science classes/painting) 9.相关人物/内容（如：famous scientists) l0.态度（如：give up/lose heart) ll.遇到的困难（如：difficulties/challenges) l2.应对方式（如：try again/keep going) l3.榜样人物（如：teacher/parent) 14.励志名言（如：No pains,no gains.) l5.具体计划（如：join a club/take courses) l6.实际行动（如：experiments/practice) 17.核心信念（如：persistent efforts) 18.最终愿景（如：make contributions) l9.职业身份（如：scientist/artist) 填写示例： 1.Wang Lin 2.doctor 3.medicine 4.help patients 5.hospital 6.medical research 7.study hard 8.biology classes 9.famous doctors 10.give up 11.difficulties 12.try harder 13.mother 14.Where there is a will,there is a way. 15.volunteer in a clinic 16.learn first aid 17.strong determination 18.save lives 19.doctor 高分亮点总结 结构亮点：四段式（引入→梦想描述→当前努力→未来计划），逻辑递进清晰 词汇亮点：使用专业领域词汇(research/environmental protection/persistent efforts) 句型亮点：复合句运用(I know it is not..I believe that..)提升语言层次 3 选择性必修第二册重庆大学版 【梦想主题】 U3满分范文及模板 内容亮点：具体行动描写(join science club/do experiments)增强真实感 文化亮点：引用英文谚语(No pains,.no gains)体现文化素养 写作小贴士·梦想主题 职业词汇：使用具体职业名称(scientist/researcher)而非简单写'worker” 目标具体化：避免空泛描述，说明具体想做什么（如：do cancer research) 努力可视化：用具体行动(read books/join clubs)代替抽象表述(study hard) 困难真实化：描述实际可能遇到的困难(time management/knowledge gaps) 名言适配：选择与梦想主题匹配的谚语（如：Rome wasn't built in a day.)