Unit 1 围绕希望爱勇气与决心分享经历或见解-2025-2026学年高中英语满分范文及模板选择性必修第一册（重大版）

选择性必修第一册重庆大学版 【寒假专版】 E版满分范文及模板 寒假专版 【E版满分范文】U1:围绕希望、爱、勇气 与决心分享经历或见解 写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·重庆大学版选择性必修第一册 满分范文 Hello,everyone.My name is Li Ming.Today,I want to share a story about how hope,love,courage and determination helped me achieve my goal. Last year,I dreamed of joining the school English speech contest.I was hopeful but also nervous,because I had never spoken in front of so many people before.My English teacher,Ms.Wang,noticed my wish. She encouraged me,saying,"Hope is like a light in the dark,guiding us to find the way forward."Her kindness gave me the first push. At the beginning,I struggled a lot.I was afraid of making mistakes and forgetting my lines.One day, I almost gave up.But then,my mother hugged me and said,"My love is like a warm blanket,making you feel safe and comfortable when you are sad."Her care made me realize I was not alone.With her support,I summoned up my courage to keep practicing.I told myself,"Being brave doesn't mean not being afraid,but being afraid and still trying to move forward." I made up my mind to practice every day.I wrote my speech again and again,and asked Ms.Wang for help.There were times when I wanted to stop,but I remembered,"With strong determination,we can achieve our goals no matter how difficult they are."Persistence was the key.Finally,the day of the contest came.I was still a little nervous,but I took a deep breath and began to speak. When I finished,the audience clapped loudly.I didn't win the first prize,but I felt like a winner.In our life,we need hope to have direction,love to feel warm,courage to face challenges,and determination to achieve our dreams.This experience taught me that as long as we have these four things,everything is possible.Thank you. 【满分范文逐段解析】 第一段（引入主题）： 开篇用Helo,everyone自然开场，直接点明主题share a story about hope,love,courage and determination: 选择性必修第一册重庆大学版 【寒假专版】 E版满分范文及模板 核心结构：My name is.…/Today,I want to share.,清晰表明演讲目的。 第二段（希望与鼓励）： 用I dreamed of../I was hopeful but nervous..展现内心矛盾： 教师引言”Hope is like a light in the dark”使用比喻修辞，增强感染力： Her kindness gave me the first push自然过渡到行动阶段。 第三段（爱与勇气）： 通过I struggled./I was afraid.真实展现困难： 母亲引言”My love is like a warm blanket”再次使用比喻，情感真挚： 金句”Being brave doesn't mean not being afraid..”深刻诠释勇气内涵。 第四段（决心与成长）： made up my mind/practice every day体现坚定决心： 引用格言”With strong determination.”强化主题： 结尾升华：we need hope..love.courage.determination总结全文，呼应开头。 满分范文模板 My Journey with Hope,Love,Courage and Determination Hello,everyone.My name is 1. Today,I want to share a story about how hope,love,courage and determination helped me achieve my goal. Last year,I dreamed of 2. I was hopeful but also nervous,because 3. My 4. ,5 _noticed my wish.He/She encouraged me,say- ing,"Hope is like 6. guiding us to find the way forward."His/Her kindness gave me the first push. At the beginning,I struggled a lot.I 7. One day,I almost gave up.But then,my 8. g. and said,"My love is like 10. making you feel safe and comfortable when you are sad."His/Her care made me realize I was not alone.With his/her support,I summoned up my courage to keep practicing.I told myself,"Being brave doesn't mean not being afraid,but being afraid and still trying to move forward." I made up my mind to 11. .I12. and asked 13. for help There were times when I wanted to stop,but I remembered,"With strong determination,we can achieve our goals no matter how difficult they are."Persistence was the key.Finally,the day of 14. came.I was still a little nervous,but I 15. and began to 16. When I finished,17. I didn't 18. but I felt like a winner.In our life,we 2 选择性必修第一册重庆大学版 【寒假专版】 E版满分范文及模板 need hope to have direction,love to feel warm,courage to face challenges,and determination to achieve our dreams.This experience taught me that as long as we have these four things,everything is possible. Thank you. 【模板填写指南】 1. 你的姓名（如：LiMing/Zhang Hua) 2.你的目标（如：joining the school English speech contest/learning to play the piano) 3.紧张的原因（如：I had never spoken in public before/I had no experience) 4.支持者身份（如：English teacher/mother/friend) 5.支持者姓名（如：Ms.Wang/Mom/Tom) 6.希望的比喻（如：a light in the dark/a star in the sky) 7.遇到的困难（如：was afraid of making mistakes/found it hard to remember) 8.鼓励者身份（如：mother/father/best friend) 9.鼓励动作（如：hugged me/patted my shoulder) 10.爱的比喻（如：a warm blanket./a strong hand) Il.决心行动（如：practice every day/study hard) I2.具体做法（如：wrote my speech repeatedly/practiced for two hours daily) 13.求助对象（如：Ms.Wang/my teacher) 14.重要事件（如：the contest/the exam/the performance) l5.缓解紧张的动作（如：took a deep breath/closed my eyes) 16.开始行动（如：speak/play/pe1fom) l7.现场反应（如：the audience clapped loudly/my teacher smiled) l8.最终结果（如：win the first prize/get a perfect score) 填写示例： 1.Li Ming 2.joining the basketball team 3.I was the shortest in class 3 选择性必修第一册重庆大学版 【寒假专版】 E版满分范文及模板 4.coach 5.Mr.Zhang 6.a compass in the forest 7.couldn't shoot well 8.father 9.put his hand on my shoulder 10.a safety net 11.train after school 12.practiced shooting 100 times daily 13.Mr.Zhang 14.the final selection 15.focused on the hoop 16.play 17.my teammates cheered 18.make the starting lineup 高分亮点总结 情感递进：四要素（希望→爱→勇气→决心)层层推进，逻辑严密： 修辞手法：多处使用比喻(”light in the dark"'warm blanket"),增强感染力： 金句点睛：”Being brave doesn't mean not being afraid.”等哲理句提升深度： 细节描写：具体动作(hugged/took a deep breath)和心理描写生动真实； 首尾呼应：结尾总结四要素价值，完美呼应开头主题。 写作小贴士·避坑+提分 比喻技巧：每个核心情感搭配1个生活化比喻（如希望→灯光/指南针）： 引用策略：他人话语用直接引语(””)，增强真实性和说服力： 时态统一：经历描述用一般过去时，总结感悟用一般现在时： 细节加分：每个困难对应具体解决方法（紧张→深呼吸/反复练习）： 结尾升华：用排比句总结主题(we need hope to..love to.)。