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选择性必修第二册重庆大学版
【写作专版】
U1:介绍植物相关知识及价值
写作专版
【满分模板】介绍植物(特征/价值/保护)
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·重庆大学版选择性必修第二册
满分范文
Plants are important living things around us.There are many kinds of plants,such as tall trees,short
grass,and colorful flowers.
Let's talk about their features first.A sunflower has a big yellow flower and long green leaves.Bamboo
is a tall plant with thin stems and it grows very fast in spring.The rose is famous for its colorful petals
and sweet smell.
Plants are very valuable too.Trees can purify the air and produce oxygen.They also provide shade
and homes for birds.Many herbs have medical value and can help people stay healthy.Grass covers
the ground and prevents soil erosion.
We should love and protect plants.We can plant trees and take care of them.Let's make our world
more beautiful with plants.
【满分范文逐段解析】
第一段(引入主题):
开篇点题:Plants are important living things around us.直接点明植物重要性:
分类举例:使用such as tall trees,.short grass,,and colorful flower's展示植物多样性:
核心词汇:living things,kinds of为初中核心表达。
第二段(特征描述):
结构清晰:Let's talk about their features first.自然过渡;
具体案例:向日葵(sunflower)、竹子bamboo)、玫瑰ose)特征描写生动:
特征词汇:big yellow flower,.thin stems,,grows very fast,colorful petals丰富准确。
第三段(价值说明):
价值分层:空气净化(purify the air)、生态价值(homes for birds)、医疗用途(medical value)):
动词精准:produce,provide,prevent准确表达植物功能:
逻辑连接:too,also,and使段落连贯。
选择性必修第二册重庆大学版
【写作专版】
U1:介绍植物相关知识及价值
第四段(行动呼吁):
情感升华:We should love and protect plants.自然引出行动:
具体建议:plant trees,take care of them提供可操作方案:
愿景结尾:make our world more beautiful提升文章立意。
满分范文模板
Introduction to 1.一(主题名称)
2.一_(主题名称)are important living things around us.There are many kinds of3._(主题名称),such
as4.一(例子1),5.一(例子2),and6.(例子3).
Lt's talk about their features first.A7.(具体事物1)has8.一(特征1)and9.一(特征2).10.
(具体事物2)is11.一(特征3)with12.一(特征4)and it13.一(特征5)in14.(时间/场景).The
15.一(具体事物3)is famous for its16.一(特征6)and17.一(特征7).
18.三(主题名称)are very valuable too.19.三(具体事物4)can20.一(作用1)and21.三(作用2)
They also22.(作用3)and23.一(作用4)for24.(对象).Many25.(具体事物5)have26.
-(价值1)and can help people27.一(价值2).28.-(具体事物6)29.一(作用5)and30.一(作用
6):
We should love and protect31.(主题名称).We can32._(行动1)and33._(行动2).Let's make
our world more beautiful with34.三(主题名称).
【模板填写指南】
1.主题名称(如:Plants/Flowers./Trees)
2.主题名称(与1相同)
3.主题名称(与1相同)
4.植物类型1(如:fruit trees/medical herbs)
5.植物类型2(如:climbing plants/desert cacti)
6.植物类型3(如:water lilies/carnivorous plants)
7.具体植物1(如:cactus/pine tree)
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选择性必修第二册重庆大学版
【写作专版】U1:介绍植物相关知识及价值
8.特征描述1(如:sharp needles/thick bark)
9.特征描述2(如:deep roots/waxy leaves)
10.具体植物2(如:lotus/maple)
ll.特征描述3(如:floating leaves/red leaves)
12.特征描述4(如:hollow stems/winged seeds)
13.生长特性(如:blooms at night/changes color)
l4.时间/场景(如:in autumn/under water)
15.具体植物3(如:orchid/venus flytrap)
l6.特征描述5(如:delicate petals/sticky tentacles)
17.特征描述6(如:fragrant smell/rapid movement)
18.主题名称(与1相同)
19.具体植物4(如:oak tree/aloe vera)
20.生态作用1(如:provide wood/soothe burns)
21.生态作用2(如:prevent erosion/clean air)
22.附加作用1(如:create habitats/reduce inflammation)
23.附加作用2(如:store carbon/moisturize skin)
24.受益对象(如:wild animals./human skin)
25.具体植物5(如:mint/bamboo)
26.特殊价值(如:culinary uses/construction material)
27.帮助效果(如:refresh breath/build houses)
28.具体植物6(如:moss/seaweed)
29.环境作用1(如:retain moisture/produce oxygen)
30.环境作用2(如:prevent landslides/absorb CO2)
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选择性必修第二册重庆大学版
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U1:介绍植物相关知识及价值
31.主题名称(与1相同)
32.保护行动l(如:water regularly/avoid picking)
33.保护行动2(如:use organic fertilizer/plant more)
34.主题名称(与1相同)
填写示例:
1.Trees 4.fruit trees 7.pine tree 8.thick bark 19.oak tree
20.provide wood 26.construction material 32.avoid cutting 33.plant seedlings
高分亮点总结
结构清晰:四段式布局(引入→特征→价值→行动),逻辑递进严谨
词汇丰富:精准使用初中核心词汇(purify,produce,prevent,.erosion)
句型多样:灵活运用s1chas,with,can,also等连接成分
案例具体:向日葵/竹子玫瑰等典型植物特征描写生动
价值分层:环境价值(净化空气)+生态价值(鸟类家园)+医疗价值多维度说明
行动可行:plant trees,take care等具体保护建议可操作性强
写作小贴士·植物描写要点
特征描写:用has/is with结构+颜色/形状形容词(yellow,round,hin)
价值表达:用can/also/provide等动词多角度说明植物功能
案例选择:优先选择典型植物(树木/花草/农作物)便于特征描述
数据支撑:可补充over806 of oxygen等数据增强说服力
动词精准:区分grow/bloom/produce等不同生长阶段动词
保护建议:使用should/can/let's提出具体可行的行动方案