Unit 4 说明毅力对成功的重要性或分享坚持达成目标的经历-2025-2026学年高中英语满分范文及模板选择性必修第二册（重大版）

选择性必修第二册重庆大学版 【满分范文】 U4:毅力与成功 写作指导 【满分范文】说明毅力对成功的重要性 写作话题：坚持达成目标的经历·重庆大学版选择性必修第二册 满分范文 Perseverance is the key to success.Without it,even the greatest talents may fail.Determination helps us keep going when we face difficulties and finally achieve our goals.Strong willpower enables people to overcome challenges and reach the top. Success belongs to those who are persistent.Just like my experience of learning swimming:I fell many times,but I never gave up,and now I can swim well.With strong determination,we can turn our dreams into reality.For example,my brother kept working hard at his studies and finally entered his ideal uni- versity. Effort and perseverance are like two wings that help us fly towards success.I believe that as long as we keep trying,we will achieve what we want.Never give up,and we will make progress step by step until we succeed in doing everything we set out to do. 满分范文模板 Perseverance is the key to success.Without it,even the greatest talents may fail.Determination helps us keep going when we face difficulties and finally achieve our goals.Strong willpower enables people to overcome challenges and reach the top. Success belongs to those who are persistent..Just like my experience of1,(具体经历：learning swimming,.practicing piano).I2.(经历中的困难：fell many times,made many mistakes),butI never gave up,and now I can3.一（经历的成果：swim well,play fluently).With strong determination, we can turn our dreams into reality.For example,4.一（他人例子：my brother,.my classmate)kept working hard at5.一（努力的领域：his studies,.painting)and finally6._(例子的成果：enteredhis ideal university,won a prize). Effort and perseverance are like two wings that help us fly towards success.I believe that as long as we 1 选择性必修第二册重庆大学版 【满分范文】 U4:毅力与成功 keep trying,we will achieve what we want.Never give up,and we will make progress step by step until we succeed in doing everything we set out to do. 【模板填写指南】 1.个人坚持经历（如：learning swimming,practicing piano) 2.经历中遇到的困难（如：fell many times,made many mistakes) 3.最终取得的成果（如：swim well,play fluently) 4.他人坚持案例（如：my brother,my classmate) 5.努力的具体领域（如：his studies,.painting) 6.最终取得的成就（如：entered his ideal university,.won a prize) 填写示例： 1.learning piano 2.made many mistakes 3.play fluently 4.my sister 5.her dance training 6.won a national competition 高分亮点总结 结构清晰：三段式结构（论点→事例→结论)，逻辑连贯 例证充分：包含个人经历和他人案例的双重论证 修辞生动：使用比喻手法(”like two wings”)增强表现力 句式多样：交替使用简单句和复合句(”Just like..…”,With strong determination..”) 主题突出：每段均围绕'perseverance'”核心概念展开 写作小贴士 事例选择：优先选择真实、具体的个人经历增强说服力 时态统一：描述经历时保持一般过去时，论述观点用一般现在时 2 选择性必修第二册重庆大学版 【满分范文】 U4:毅力与成功 衔接过渡：使用'Just like”、For example”等连接词自然过渡 词汇升级：用'perseverance/determination/.willpower”替换简单词try hard, 结尾强化：用'Never give up”等激励性语句收尾增强感染力 3