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必修第二册重庆大学版
【自然灾害专题】
U5满分范文及模板
自然灾害专题
【E版满分模板】自然灾害及应对措施
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·重庆大学版必修第二册
满分范文
Natural disasters like earthquakes,floods,and typhoons can cause great damage to our lives and property.
For example,an earthquake may destroy many houses,making thousands of people homeless.A typhoon
often brings strong winds and heavy rain,which may lead to floods in some areas.Drought is another
serious natural disaster that makes plants die and people suffer from water shortage.
When a natural disaster happens,it is important to know how to protect ourselves.When an earthquake
occurs,we should stay calm and hide under a strong table or desk.Before a typhoon comes,we need to
prepare an emergency kit with food,drinking water,a torch,and batteries.If caught in a flood,we should
try to escape to higher ground and call for help immediately.We should always follow the instructions
of the government and stay away from dangerous areas.
After a disaster,the government will send rescue teams to the disaster area to provide help,including med-
ical care.People from all over may donate money and supplies to support the affected people.Together,
we work hard to rebuild our homes and recover our normal life
In order to deal with natural disasters,we need to learn about their causes and remember the mea-
sures.By staying prepared and calm,we can reduce the loss and protect ourselves better.
【满分范文逐段解析】
第一段(灾害类型及影响):
使用Natural disasters like..叼引出主要灾害类型:
通过For example..和another serious natural disaster分层描述不同灾害的影响;
核心词汇:destroy houses,make people homeless,water shortage。
第二段(应对措施):
用When,Before.,If caught in..分场景说明应对方法;
具体措施描述清晰:hide under a strong table,prepare an emergency kit,,escape to higher ground:
强调官方指导:follow the instructions of the government。
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必修第二册重庆大学版
【自然灾害专题】
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第三段(灾后救援):
使用After a disaster..自然过渡到灾后阶段:
描述多方协作:government rescue teams,people donate money and supplies;
积极结尾:rebuild our homes,recover our normal life。
第四段(总结提升):
强调学习重要性:learn about their causes,remember the应对measures:
总结核心原则:staying prepared and calm,reduce the loss:
使用in order to..高级句式收尾。
满分范文模板
Natural disasters like1.一(具体灾害类型1),2.(具体灾害类型2),and3.(具体灾害类型3)canm
cause great damage to our lives and property..For example,.4.(具体灾害类型l)may destroy many
houses,.making thousands of people homeless.5._(具体灾害类型2)often brings strong winds and
heavy rain,.which may lead to floods in some areas.6._(俱体灾害类型3)is another serious natural
disaster that makes plants die and people suffer from water shortage.
When a natural disaster happens,it is important to know how to protect ourselves.When7.一(具体
灾害类型1)occurs,.we should stay calm and8.一(具体应对措施1).Before9.一(具体灾害类型
2)comes,,we need to prepare an emergency kit with10.一(应急物品1),11.一(应急物品2),12.
(应急物品3),and13.一(应急物品4).If caught in14.(具体灾害类型4),we should try to15.
_(具体应对措施2)and call for help immediately.We should always follow the instructions of the
government and stay away from dangerous areas.
After a disaster,the government will send rescue teams to the disaster area to provide help,including
16.一(救援内容).People from all over may donate17.一(捐赠物品1)and18.一(捐赠物品2)to
support the affected people.Together,we work hard to rebuild our homes and recover our normal life.
In order to deal with natural disasters,we need to learn about their causes and remember the mea-
sures.By staying prepared and calm,we can reduce the loss and protect ourselves better.
【模板填写指南】
1.灾害类型1(如:earthquakes/floods)
2.灾害类型2(如:typhoons/hurricanes)
必修第二册重庆大学版
【自然灾害专题】U5满分范文及模板
3.灾害类型3(如:droughts/wildfires)
4.灾害类型1(与1一致)
5.灾害类型2(与2一致)
6.灾害类型3(与3一致)
7.灾害类型1(与1一致)
8.应对措施l(如:hide under furniture/stay indoors)
9.灾害类型2(与2一致)
10.应急物品1(如:food/water)
11.应急物品2(如:flashlight/radio)
12.应急物品3(如:first aid kit/blankets)
13.应急物品4(如:batteries./medicines)
14.灾害类型4(如:floods/landslides)
l5.应对措施2(如:move to high ground/avoid electrical wires)
l6.救援内容(如:medical care/food supplies)
17.捐赠物品1(如:money/clothes)
18.捐赠物品2(如:food/drinking water)
填写示例:
1.earthquakes 2.floods 3.typhoons 4.earthquakes 5.floods
6.typhoons 7.earthquakes 8.hide under a strong table 9.typhoons
10.food 11.drinking water 12.a torch 13.batteries 14.floods
15.escape to higher ground 16.medical care 17.money 18.supplies
高分亮点总结
结构清晰:四段式结构(灾害类型→应对措施→灾后救援→总结),逻辑严密
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必修第二册重庆大学版
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U5满分范文及模板
词汇丰富:使用专业术语(typhoon,drought,emergencykit)和动作短语(escape to higher ground)
句式多样:灵活运用时间状语从句(When/Before/If)、非谓语动词(making people homeless)
场景覆盖:涵盖地震、台风、洪水、干旱等主要灾害的应对方案
实用建议:提供具体可操作的防灾准备清单(food,water,.torch,batteries)
写作小贴士·避坑指南
术语准确:使用标准灾害名称(typhoon≠hurricane,drought≠ry spell)
时态统一:描述常规措施用一般现在时,具体事件用过去时
措施具体:避免泛泛而谈,给出可操作步骤(如hide under table”而非'be careful')
逻辑连接:使用When/Before/After/If明确时间关系
文化适配:中国语境下强调follow government instructions