内容正文:
必修第二册重庆大学版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
寒假专版
【E版满分模板】探讨友谊的意义并分享交
友感悟(我的好朋友》
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·必修第二册重庆大学版
满分范文
Hello,everyone.My name is Li Ming.I have a best friend.His name is Wang Jun.
Wang Jun is 13 years old.He has short curly hair and a round face.He is of medium height and
strong.He always wears a pair of glasses,which makes him look very handsome.
Wang Jun is an outgoing and helpful boy.He likes talking with others and making friends with new
classmates.When I have trouble with my English study,he always helps me with my English.We
often play basketball together after school,and he often tells me funny stories that make me laugh.
Friendship is like a warm sun that makes us feel happy and safe.Wang Jun is a true friend who always
stands by my side when I am in trouble.I think being honest and kind is the key to making good friends,
and I feel lucky to have him as my best friend.Through making friends with him,I learn how to share
happiness and sadness and care about each other.
I like my friend very much.We will be good friends forever.
满分范文模板(我的好朋友)
Hello,everyone.My name is 1.
I have a good friend.His/Her name is 2.
3.
is 4.
years old.He/She is 5.
He/She has 6.
and 7.
He/She always wears 8.
He/She looks very 9.
10.
is a 11.
boy/girl.He/She likes 12.
He/She is also very 13.
When I 14.
he/she always 15.
We often 16.
on weekends
I like my friend very much.We are good friends forever.
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必修第二册重庆大学版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
【模板填写指南】
1.你的姓名(如:LiMing/Zhang Hua)
2.朋友的姓名(如:Tom/Liy)
3.填写朋友的姓名(与2一致,如:Tom/Lily)
4.朋友的年龄(如:twelve/thirteen)
5.朋友的身高/体型(如:tall/of medium height/strong)
6.朋友的外貌特征1(如:short hair/big eyes)
7.朋友的外貌特征2(如:a round face/small nose)
8.朋友的穿戴(如:a pair of glasses/a red hat)
9.外貌评价(如:cute/handsome/beautiful)
10.填写朋友的姓名(与2一致)
1l.性格形容词(如:friendly/outgoing/quiet)
l2.朋友的爱好(如:reading books/playing basketball)
l3.性格优点(如:kind/hard-working/helpful)
l4.你的困难场景(如:am sad/need help/have problems)
l5.朋友的行为(如:helps me/talks with me/plays with me)
16.共同活动(如:play football/read books/go shopping)
填写示例:
1.Li Ming 2.Wang Jun 3.Wang Jun 4.thirteen 5.of medium height
6.short curly hair 7.a round face 8.a pair of glasses 9.handsome
10.Wang Jun 11.outgoing 12.talking with others
13.helpful 14.have trouble with English 15.helps me with English 16.play basketball
高分亮点总结
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必修第二册重庆大学版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
结构亮点:四段式(介绍朋友→外貌描写→性格行为→友谊感悟),逻辑递进清晰
词汇亮点:使用精准外貌词汇(short curly hair/round face)、性格描述(outgoing/helpful)
句型亮点:运用定语从句(which makes.)、时间状语从句(when I..)丰富表达
修辞亮点:比喻手法(Friendship is like a warm sun)增强感染力
内容深度:结尾升华主题,探讨友谊真谛(honest and kind/share happiness and sadness)
写作小贴士·避坑+提分
外貌描写:按”整体→细节”顺序:先身高体型,再面部特征,最后穿戴配饰
事例选择:每个性格特点搭配具体事例(如helpful-→帮助学英语)
情感升华:结尾段用比喻句+感悟句,避免简单重复'I like my friend'
代词一致:全文保持he/she的一致性,避免混用
时态统一:描述朋友特征用一般现在时,共同活动可用现在进行时
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