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必修3外研版
【安全指南专版】
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安全指南
【外研版满分范文】撰写安全指南
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满分范文
Safety is everyone's responsibility-let's protect ourselves and others.This guide will help you learn
about safety measures,danger warnings,and emergency responses to stay safe in daily life.
First,always follow safety rules.When crossing the street,it is important to follow traffic rules.When
riding a bike,always wear a safety helmet.In public places,stay away from wet floors to avoid slipping
and pay attention to warning signs.At home,check electrical appliances regularly and keep flammable
things away from the stove.
Second,be aware of danger.Do not touch electrical appliances with wet hands-it is very danger-
ous.Be careful with sharp tools like knives,they may hurt you."No smoking"signs mean you must keep
off fire in those areas.Remember that some substances are poisonous,so never eat or touch unknown
things.
Third,know how to handle emergencies.If there is a fire,stay calm and use the emergency exit to leave
quickly.You can also use a fire extinguisher if it is safe.In an accident,call 120 for help and give first
aid if possible.If you smell gas,turn off the power immediately and leave the room to call for help.
To stay safe,we should alwaysbe careful and prepared.Keep a first aidkit athome in case of emergencies
Follow these tips,and you can protect yourself and those around you.
【满分范文逐段解析】
开篇段(核心原则):
用Safety is everyone's responsibility强调安全重要性;
明确指南目的:learn about safety measures,.danger warnings,and emergency responses,.覆盖
三大安全领域。
第一要点(遵守规则):
使用When crossing.When riding..给出具体场景建议;
公共场所建议:stay away from wet floors+pay attention to warning signs;
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家庭安全:check electrical appliances+keep flammable things away。
第二要点(危险警示):
禁止行为:Do not touch electrical appliances with wet hands:
危险物品处理:Be careful with sharp tools+keep off fire;
特别警示:never eat or touch unknown things强调未知物品危险性。
第三要点(应急处理):
火灾应对:use emergency exit+use fire extinguisher:
事故处理:call120+give first aid:
燃气泄漏:turn off power+leave immediately。
结尾段(总结呼吁):
核心建议:always be careful and prepared;
实用措施:Keep first aid kit;
呼吁行动:Follow these tips强化指南价值。
满分范文模板
Safety is everyone's responsibility-let's protect ourselves and others.This guide will help you learn
about safety measures,danger warnings,and emergency responses to stay safe in daily life
First,always follow safety rules.When(1:crossing the street,riding a bike),it is important to
_(做法l:follow traffic rules,wear a safety helmet).In public places,,stay away from_(危险物l:
wet floors,broken glass)to avoid(1:slipping,getting hurt)and pay attention to warning signs.
At home,(2:check electrical appliances regularly,lock the door when leaving)and keep(
险物2:flammable things,sharp tools)away from_(地点:the stove,children).
Second,.be aware of danger提示.Do not_(危险行为l:touch electrical appliances with wet hands,
un on the stairs)一it is very dangerous.Be careful with_(危险物3:sharp tools,hot water);they
may_(后果2:hurt you,.burn you)).”No smoking”signs mean you must keep off fire in those areas.
Remember that some substances are poisonous,so never_(危险行为2:eat or touch unknown things,
play with chemicals).
Third,know how to handle emergencies.If there is a fire,stay calm and use the emergency exit to leave
quickly.You can also use a fire extinguisher if it is safe.In an accident,call 120 for help and give first
aid if possible.If you smell gas,turn off the power immediately and leave the room to call for help
必修3外研版
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To stay safe,we should alwaysbe careful andprepared.Keep a first aidkit athome in case of emergencies.
Follow these tips,and you can protect yourself and those around you.
【模板填写指南】
1.交通场景(如:crossing the street/riding a bike)
2.安全行为(如:follow traffic rules/wear a helmet)
3.公共场所危险物(如:wet floors/broken glass)
4.可能后果(如:slipping/getting hurt)
5.家庭安全行为(如:check electrical appliances/lock doors)
6.家庭危险物品(如:flammable things/sharp tools))
7.危险存放地点(如:the stove/children's reach)
8.禁止行为(如:touch appliances with wet hands/un on stairs)
9.危险物品(如:sharp tools/hot water)
10.可能伤害(如:hurt you/burn you)
1l.危险接触行为(如:eat unknown things/play with chemicals)
填写示例:
1.riding a bike 2.wear a helmet 3.wet floors 4.slipping
5.check electrical appliances 6.sharp tools 7.children
8.run on the stairs 9.hot water 10.burn you 11.play with chemicals
高分亮点总结
结构清晰:总分总结构(原则→三大要点→总结),逻辑严密
场景覆盖:涵盖交通/家庭/公共场所三大生活场景
实用动词:使用follow,.avoid,check,keep,handle等精准动作动词
警示表达:多种危险提示句式(Do not..Be careful.Never.)
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应急方案:具体应急措施(call20 use fire extinguisher/turn off power)
写作小贴士·安全指南专项
时态统一:全篇使用一般现在时,描述普遍安全规则
情态动词:善用must/should/can表达强制/建议/能力
避免绝对化:用try to/remember to替代绝对命令更得体
图示辅助:可添加warning signs/emergency exit等图标说明
术语准确:使用flammable/poisonous/first aid等专业术语