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必修第三册重庆大学版
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E版满分范文及模板
写作专版
【卫版满分模板】介绍一种艺术形式或文化
现象
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·重庆大学版必修第三册
满分范文
Hello,everyone.Today I want to introduce a traditional Chinese art-Chinese calligraphy.It is not only
an art but also a cultural treasure.
Chinese calligraphy is very important in our culture.Many people like to practice it.It uses brushes and
ink to write Chinese characters,showing unique beauty.The strokes are creative and meaningful,which
can express people's feelings and thoughts.
Chinese calligraphy has a long history and is symbolic of our cultural spirit.It helps us pass down
our traditional culture and plays a role in connecting the past and the present.People of all ages enjoy
practicing it,as it can make our life more colorful.
I think Chinese calligraphy is a wonderful art form.We should learn to appreciate it and keep it alive.
【满分范文逐段解析】
第一段(引入艺术形式):
开篇用Hello,everyone..Today I want to introduce..直接点题;
核心定义:not only an art but also a cultural treasure强调双重价值。
第二段(核心特征):
使用uses brushes and ink to write Chinese characters说明工具和载体:
艺术s效果:showing unique beauty和express people's feelings and thoughts。
第三段(文化意义):
历史维度:has a long history and is symbolic of our cultural spirit;
社会功能:pass down our traditional culture和connecting the past and the present.
第四段(个人观点):
必修第三册重庆大学版
【写作专版】
E版满分范文及模板
总结评价:a wonderful art form:
呼吁行动:learn to appreciate it and keep it alive升华主题。
满分范文模板(艺术形式介绍)
Hello,everyone.Today I want to introduce a traditional 1.art-2..It is not only an art but also a
cultural treasure.
3.is very important in our culture.Many people like to practice it.It uses 4.to 5.,showing
unique beauty.The 6.are creative andmeaningful,which can express people's feelings and thoughts.
7.has a long history and is symbolic of our cultural spirit.It helps us pass down our traditional culture
and plays a role in connecting the past and the present.People of all ages enjoy practicing it,as it can
make our life more colorful.
I think 8.is a wonderful art form.We should learn to appreciate it and keep it alive.
【模板填写指南】
l.艺术所属文化(如:Chinese,Japanese)
2.艺术形式名称(如:calligraphy,.paper-cutting)
3.艺术形式名称(与2一致)
4.使用工具(如:brushes and ink,scissors and paper)
5.核心动作(如:write characters,create designs)
6.艺术元素(如:strokes,patterns)
7.艺术形式名称(与2一致)
8.艺术形式名称(与2一致)
填写示例(书法):
1.Chinese 2.calligraphy 3.Chinese calligraphy
4.brushes and ink 5.write Chinese characters 6.strokes
7.Chinese calligraphy 8.Chinese calligraphy
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必修第三册重庆大学版
【写作专版】
E版满分范文及模板
高分亮点总结
结构清晰:四段式(引入→特征→意义→结论),逻辑递进
文化深度:使用cultural treasure/pass down tradition等文化概念
专业词汇:准确使用brushes and ink/strokes/symbolic等艺术术语
情感表达:通过express feelings/make life colorful体现人文价值
呼吁行动:结尾learn to appreciate/keep it alive增强社会意义
写作小贴士·艺术类话题
文化术语:准确使用艺术专有名词(如calligraphy/ink stone)
历史维度:必须包含has a long history/is traditional等时间表述
价值升华:结尾用we should.句式提出保护建议
工具描述:详细说明创作工具(uses...to.)体现专业性
情感表达:添加express feelings/show beauty等审美评价
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