话题 1 撰写关于一则寓言及其寓意的文章-2025-2026学年高中英语满分范文及模板必修第三册（外研版）

必修3外研版 【寓言写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 寓言写作 【卫版满分范文】一则寓言及其寓意 写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·外研版必修3 满分范文 A Fable and Its Moral Once upon a time,there was a proud hare who always laughed at a slow turtle.One day,the hare chal- lenged the turtle to a race,thinking he would win easily. The race began,and the hare ran fast at first,but he stoppedto sleep because he was too proud.Although the turtle walked slowly,henever gave up andkept moving forward.Finally,the turtle passed the sleeping hare and reached the finish line first.When the hare woke up,he realized he had lost the race and felt very regretful. The story of"The Hare and the Tortoise"teaches us that patience and hard work are more important than speed.The moral of the story is that pride can lead to failure,while modesty and persistence help us overcome challenges.It also reminds us to never look down on others,as everyone has their own strengths. 满分范文模板（寓言故事) A Fable and Its Moral Once upon a time,there was a 1.who always 2..One day,the 3.challenged the 4.to a 5. thinking he would win easily. The 6.began,and the 7.8.,but he 9..Although the 10.11.,he never gave up and kept moving forward.Finally,the 12.passed the 13.and reached the 14.first.When the 15. 16.,he felt very 17. The story of"18."teaches us that 19..The moral of the story is that 20.,while 21..It also reminds us to 22.,as everyone has their own strengths. 【模板填写指南】 1 必修3外研版 【寓言写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 l.骄傲的角色（如：proud hare,greedy fox) 2.角色的行为（如：laughed at a slow turtle,.tricked other animals) 3.角色1名称（与1一致） 4.角色2名称（如：turtle,goat) 5.事件（如：race,competition) 6.事件名称（与5一致) 7.角色1名称（与1一致） 8.角色l的初期行为（如：ran fast at first,.worked hard initially) 9.角色l的转折行为（如：stopped to sleep because he was too proud,.gave up because he was tired) 10.角色2名称（与4一致） 1l.角色2的行为（如：walked slowly,tried his best) 12.角色2名称（与4一致） l3.角色1的状态（如：sleeping hare,resting fox) l4.目标（如：finish line,destination) 15.角色1名称（与1一致） 16.角色1的反应（如：woke up,.realized) 17.情绪（如：regretful,.sad) l8.故事名称（如：The Hare and the Tortoise,.The Fox and the Goat) l9.核心道理1（如：patience and hard work are more important than speed) 20.核心道理2（如：pride can lead to failure) 2l.核心道理3（如：modesty and persistence help us overcome challenges) 22.核心道理4（如：never look down on others) 2 必修3外研版 【寓言写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 高分亮点总结 结构亮点：经典三段式（角色介绍→事件发展→寓意揭示），逻辑清晰完整 词汇亮点：使用寓言核心词汇(proud/challenged/persistence/overcome)和短语(never give up/look down on) 句型亮点：灵活运用Although/While/When等连接词，丰富句式结构 寓意表达：多层次寓意表达(teaches us that../The moral is that../It also reminds us.) 时态统一：全程使用一般过去时，时态准确规范 写作小贴士·寓言创作指南 角色塑造：用形容词突出角色特点(proud hare/slow turtle) 冲突设计：通过对比制造戏刷冲突(fast vs slow/proud vs modest) 寓意表达：使用多层次表达（直接陈述+对比说明+普遍道理） 动词选择：使用生动行为动词(challenged/realized/overcome) 结尾升华：用'It reminds us.”句式提升寓意深度 3