内容正文:
必修2沪教版(上外版)
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
寒假专版
【版满分模板】给朋友写邮件分享克服困
难的经历
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·沪教版必修2
满分范文
Dear Tom,
Hi Tom,How are you?I want to tell you about a challenge I faced and how I got through it.
Last term,I had difficulty learning English grammar.I felt worried and even wanted to give up.At first,
I thought it was too hard.I tried many times but still couldn't solve it.
I decided to ask my teacher for help and practiced grammar every day.I started to join English corner
and spoke English with my classmates bravely.With the help of my friends,I kept trying different ways
and finally found the right method.
Finally,I overcame the difficulty and got good grades in the English exam.Through this experience,I
learned that we should never give up when facing challenges.It taught me that courage and determination
are important.
That's my story of overcoming difficulties.I hope it can help you when you face problems.What about
your experiences?I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes!
Li Ming
满分范文模板
Dear 1.
Hi2.
How are you?I want to tell you about a challenge I faced and how I got through it.
必修2沪教版(上外版)
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
Last term,I had difficulty learning 3.
I felt 4.
and even wanted to give up.At
first,I thought it was too hard.I tried many times but still couldn't solve it.
I decided to 5.
and 6.
I started to 7.
and 8.
With
the help of 9.
I kept trying different ways and finally found the right method.
Finally,I overcame the difficulty and 10.
Through this experience,I learned that we should
never give up when facing challenges.It taught me that 11.
are important.
That's my story of overcoming difficulties.I hope it can help you when you face problems.What about
your experiences?I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes!
12.
【模板填写指南】
1.收件人姓名(如:Tom/Lily)
2.收件人姓名(与1一致)
3.困难科目/领域(如:English grammar/math problems)
4.情绪描述(如:worried/frustrated)
5.解决方案1(如:ask my teacher for help/study with classmates)
6.解决方案2(如:practiced every day/watched tutorial videos)
7.行动1(如:join study group/attend extra classes)
8.行动2(如:do exercises regularly/read related books)
9.帮助者(如:my friends/my parents)
l0.结果(如:got good grades/improved my skills)
1l.学到的品质(如:courage and determination/patience and persistence)
12.你的姓名(如:LiMing/Zhang Hua)
填写示例:
1.Tom 2.Tom 3.math problems 4.frustrated 5.ask my teacher for help
6.practiced every day 7.join study group 8.do exercises regularly
9.my classmates 10.passed the exam 11.patience and persistence 12.Li Ming
必修2沪教版(上外版)
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
高分亮点总结
结构清晰:五段式结构(问候→问题描述→解决过程→结果收获→结尾),逻辑连贯
情感真实:使用worried/frustrated等情感词汇,增强感染力
解决方案具体:详细描述克服困难的具体行动和方法
成长反思:结尾部分总结学到的品质,体现个人成长
互动自然:结尾询问对方经历,保持书信对话感
写作小贴士·邮件写作要点
称呼规范:使用Dear [Name],开头,结尾用Best wishes/Regards
时态统一:描述过去经历使用一般过去时,现状/感受可用现在时
问题具体化:明确说明遇到的困难领域(如English grammar)
方案可操作:解决方法要具体可行(如practiced every day)
情感真诚:适当使用情感词汇(worried/determined)增强真实感
成长体现:结尾总结学到的品质或经验,提升内容深度
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