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必修2沪教版(上外版)
【主题征文】
突破自我极限
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突破自我极限主题征文
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·沪教版必修2
满分范文
Last year,I decided to challenge myself by joining the school's 1500-meter running race,even though I
had never run such a long distance before.At first,I was afraid of the pain and the possibility of failure,
but I knew I needed to step out of my comfort zone.
Every morning,I got up early to practice.There were times when I wanted to give up because my legs
felt like lead,but I kept trying.With strong determination,I pushed my limits day by day.I started to
build up confidence as I saw progress in my running time.
On the race day,I felt nervous but also excited.When the starting gun went off,I ran as fast as I could.
During the last lap,I felt exhausted,but I told myself to stay positive and keep going.Finally,I crossed
the finish line and achieved success by getting the third prize.
By overcoming difficulties in this race,I not only improved my running skills but also discovered my
hidden potential.I realized that with courage,persistence,and effort,nothing is impossible.This expe-
rience was a milestone in my life,and it taught me to always believe in myself when facing fears.Now,
I am more confident and ready to take on new challenges to break through more limits.
满分范文模板
Last year,I decided to challenge myself by joining(:the school's 1500-meter running race,the
English speech contest).At first,I was afraid of(:the pain and the possibility of failure,making
mistakes in front of others),but I knew I needed to step out of my comfort zone.
Every day,I(:got up early to practice,spent an hour reading English articles).There were times
when I wanted to give up because(:my legs felt like lead,I couldn't remember new words),but
I kept trying.With strong determination,I pushed my limits day by day.I started to build up confidence
as I saw(:progress in my running time,improvement in my pronunciation).
必修2沪教版(上外版)
【主题征文】
突破自我极限
On the(关键时间:race day,,contest day),I felt nervous but also excited.When(开始信号:the
starting gun went off,the host called my name),I(:ran as fast as I could,began my speech
confidently)).During the一(关键时刻:last lap,middle part),I felt exhausted,.but I told myself to stay
positive and keep going.Finally,I(:crossed the finish line and achieved success by getting the
third prize,finished my speech and won the first place).
By overcoming difficulties in this_(经历:Iace,contest),I not only improved my_(技能:unning
skills,speaking ability)but also discovered my hidden potential.I realized that with courage,persistence,
and effort,nothing is impossible.This experience was a milestone in my life,and it taught me to always
believe in myself when facing fears.Now,I am more confident and ready to take on new challenges to
break through more limits.
【模板填写指南】
1.活动名称(如:the schooli'sI500-meter running race,.the English speech contest)
2.担忧事项(如:the pain and the possibility of failure,making mistakes in front of others)
3.日常行动(如:got up early to practice,spent an hour reading English articles)
4.遇到的困难(如:my legs felt like lead,.I couldn't remember new words)
5.可见的进步(t如:progress in my running time,improvement in my pronunciation)
6.关键时间点(如:race day,contest day)
7.开始信号(如:the starting gun went off,.the host called my name)
8.采取的行动(如:ran as fast as I could,.began my speech confidently)
9.关键时刻(如:last lap,middle part)
l0.最终结果(如:crossed the finish line and achieved success by getting the third prize,finished my
speech and won the first place)
1l.经历类型(如:race,contest)
12.提升的技能(如:unning skills,.speaking ability)
高分亮点总结
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必修2沪教版(上外版)
【主题征文】
突破自我极限
结构清晰:四段式结构(决定挑战→训练过程→关键时刻→感悟收获)
情感递进:从恐惧→坚持→兴奋→成就感的情感变化脉络
细节描写:使用具体感官描写(legs felt like lead,starting gun went off)
主题升华:结尾段将具体经历提升到人生启示层面
时态准确:全程使用一般过去时描述经历,现在时表达感悟
写作小贴士
心理描写:详细描述挑战前的恐惧和克服过程
动词选择:使用动态动词(challenge,push,overcome)增强表现力
时间线索:用时间标志词(At first,,Every day,On the race day)串联事件
感悟层次:从技能提升→潜能发现→人生启示层层递进
首尾呼应:结尾段回扣开头”step out of comfort zone'”形成闭环
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