2024年新高考全国一卷续写 课件-2026届高三英语一轮复习专项

Continuation 2024新高考全国卷一 Writing Elara Mime to translate (肢体语言演绎） Game Rules: 1. Team Up: Form pairs (Student A & Student B). 2. Step 1 - Student A: Look at the English phrase on the card. Act it out silently (no speaking, no writing!) Use gestures, facial expressions, or body movements. 3. Step 2 - Student B: - Guess the Chinese meaning of the phrase based on the performance. - Say the English phrase aloud to confirm your answer. 4. Time Limit : 90 seconds per pair. Score 1 point for each correct answer! Elara 1. Understand the meaning of the text; 2. Design a reasonable and logic ending of the story; 3. Polish the story with some advanced expressions; 4. Apply what you have learned to practice. Objectives Elara 解题步骤 写 定 读 读大意 划要素 定情节 定框架 扩情节 增细节 Elara 写 定 读 读大意 划要素 定情节 定框架 Step 1：读 扩情节 增细节 Elara Step 1：读 解读语篇 when : __________________ where: __________________ who : __________________ what : __________________ why : __________________ how : __________________ 六要素 理清情节和情感 分析人物性格特点 明确故事主题 品味语言风格 浅层信息获取 深层文本解读 时态 Elara Have you ever encountered difficulties during your journey? Elara I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minues before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going , but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "'We made it, "he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message:"Out of order. Sorry." Step 1：读 六要素 when where who what why how I; Gunter on a cold, wet evening in Sept. in Vienna I took a taxi to catch the last bus to Prague but I had zero cash. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half 时态 一般过去时 Elara Step 1：读 分析人物性格特点 warm-hearted patient friendly considerate -- Gunter -- -- I -- anxious I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare, we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "'We made it, "he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message, "Out of order. Sorry."   Elara Step 1：读 01 02 03 Background I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague. But due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. Development I jumped into the first taxi to catch the last bus to Prague and rolled into the bus station in time. Though trying many ways and times, I realised that I couldn't pay the fee. Climax nervous anxious hopeful thankful helpless worried Emotions 理清情节和情感 Elara 解题步骤 写 定 读 读大意 划要素 定情节 定框架 扩情节 增细节 Elara Para1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Para2:Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Elara 解题步骤 写 定 读 读大意 划要素 定情节 定框架 扩情节 增细节 Elara 续写思路（拍电影） P1: I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 设定第一个镜头：”I”和”G” 的对手戏 “I”的情绪刻画： be full of apologies apologetic look on my face awkward/embarrassed in shame /ashamed /guilty anxious at a loss disappointed/hopeless /desperate on the verge of tears/collapse 可将情绪转变为动作： one’s face turned red bit one’s lips dropped/lowered one’s head in shame had a frown on one’s face stamped/tapped one’s feet with one’s heart in one’s mouth with butterflies in one’s stomach with tears rolling/ streaming/running down one’s cheeks Elara 第一个镜头：”I”和”G” 的对手戏 “G”的反应： had sympathy /compassion for me patted my shoulder touched my head put his arm around my shoulder opened his arms wide to embrace me looked at me with a big smile on his face flashed me a warm smile The smile on his face shone like a diamond. The big smile on his face,like a ray of sunshine, swept away my gloom. Elara 手法一：I finished my words with difficulty, stared at the card in my hand, and then looked up into his eyes with shame and embarrassment. Para1 ：I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 第一个镜头：”I”和”G” 的对手戏 Elara Elara 16 手法二：When he heard it, his expression changed slightly but seeing my apologetic look on my face, Gunter comforted me, “ It’s not a big deal. ” Para1 ：I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 第一个镜头：”I”和”G” 的对手戏 Elara Elara 17 续写思路（拍电影） 设定第二个镜头：”I”和”G” 的进一步互动（高光时刻） “I”的反应： 情绪描写 be touched/moved by his behavior calmed down be encouraged/inspired 动作描写 explained my situation begged for a delayed payment. made a promise “G”的反应： expressed understanding be willing to delay payment lent me money reached into his pocket and withdrew a few notes Elara He patted my shoulder and gave me a big smile, which calmed me down. Plucking up my courage, I explained my situation to him and promised to pay off the fare and some extra tip four days later when I was back in Vienna. 第二个镜头：”I”和”G” 的进一步互动（高光时刻） Elara 续写思路（镜头感） 设定第三个镜头：镜头聚焦于“I” “I”的反应： 情绪描写 be overwhelmed with gratitude and relief a warm current rise in one' s heart shed tears of gratitude A feeling of gratitude washed over me. 动作描写 wrote down his telephone number boarded the bus in time smiled at each other waved goodbye to sb. 回顾第一段的环境描写，这是一个又冷又下雨的傍晚 ，那么写衬托出你此时此刻感受到的温暖以及你很感激这个司机的帮助。 Instantly, an intense wave of relief and gratitude surrounded me like a ray of sunlight, throwing me into a sense of kindness and warmth. Elara 续写思路（拍电影） P2: Four days later, When I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. 设定第四个镜头：“G” 接到“I” 的电话的反应（镜头聚焦与“G”) G 的反应： 情绪描写 delighted/unbelievable/surprised There are apparent+情绪+in sb’s voice sb. felt a mixture of +情绪1 + and +情绪2 +welling up in sb.’s heart and surging through sb. 动作描写 decided/arranged to meet at a local restaurant Elara 续写思路（拍电影） 设定第五个镜头：“G” 和“I” 见面的互动 I 的反应： 动作描写 threw myself into G’s arms and hugged him tightly handed over the money along with a nice tip 心理描写 I owed my success in attending the important conference to him. G 的反应： 动作描写+语言描写 constantly refused me he told me to call him immediately the next time if I need to take a taxi in Vienna again. “Keep it and pay it forward .”(善意传递） Elara 续写思路（镜头感） 设定第六个镜头：故事的结局 became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. spent the afternoon chatting about our lives, hobbies and travels. Elara Since then, his kindness and generosity have always inspired me to help those in need. That cold and wet September night has left me with warm and unforgettable memories. The precious and memorable experience threw a significant stone into the pond of my life and the ripples would never end. 升华（首尾呼应，回扣主题） Elara Elara Writing Elara Thank You Elara I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. I finished my words with difficulty, stared at the card in my hand, and then looked up into his eyes with shame and embarrassment. He patted my shoulder and gave me a big smile, which calmed me down. Plucking up my courage, I explained my situation to him and promised to pay off the fare and some extra tip four days later when I was back in Vienna.Without hesitation, Gunter reached into his pocket and withdrew a few notes, saying “You need the money to catch your bus.” I was touched by his generosity, tears of gratitude streaming down my cheeks. Having written down his telephone number, I boarded the bus just in time. When I looked back, I saw him waving me goodbye. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. We arranged to meet at the airport. The moment I saw Gunter I couldn't help but warmly embrace him. I attributed my success in attending the important conference to him. When I handed over the money along with a nice tip, Gunter said with a big smile on his face “Keep it and pay it forward .” Since then, his kindness and generosity have always inspired me to help those in need. That cold and wet September night has left me with warm and unforgettable memories. Elara $