话题 5 仿写经典文学片段并附创作说明-2025-2026学年高中英语写作好词好句选择性必修第三册（沪外版）

选择性必修3沪教版（上外版） 【写作专版】D版写作好词好句 写作专版 【D版好词好句】仿写经典文学片段并附创 作说明 写作提分攻略·沪教版（上外版）选择性必修3（暖色系版） 好词好句积累 一、好词积累 描写经典场景 环境氛围：serene atmosphere宁静的氛围；dim light昏暗的光线：ustling leaves沙沙作响的 树叶；ancient stone path古老的石板路；misty morning薄雾笼罩的清晨；cozy cottage舒适的 小屋；vast wilderness广阔的荒野；rippling brook潺潺的小溪 感官细节：fragrant flowers芬芳的花朵；melodious birdsong悦耳的鸟鸣；cool breeze凉爽的 微风：warm sunlight温暖的阳光：soft moonlight柔和的月光：crunching snow踩雪的嘎吱声： fresh air清新的空气 刻画人物情感 内心活动：mixed feelings复杂的情感；deep sorrow深切的悲伤；quietjoy默默的喜悦：hidden anxiety隐藏的焦虑；calm determination平静的决心；sudden excitement突如其来的兴奋： longing gaze渴望的日光；puzzled expression困惑的表情 情感变化：gradually calm down渐渐平静下来；suddenly burst into tears突然大哭起来；slowly lose hope慢慢失去希望；eventually find peace最终找到平静 仿写常用表达 连接过渡：just as..so.正如…也…；in the same way同样地：similarly相似地：unlike. 与…不同；on the contrary相反；however然而 修辞手法：like a.…像一个…：asif.仿佛…；the way..is like.……的方式就像…： with.as.以…为… 二、经典好句 1.场景仿写 1 选择性必修3沪教版（上外版） 【写作专版】D版写作好词好句 1.1 Just as the morning sun gently kisses the mountain tops,so the soft moonlight caresses the quiet lake at night. 1.2 In the same way that the old clock ticks steadily,the seasons pass slowly in this small village. 1.3 Unlike the bustling city,the countryside has a serene atmosphere with only the sound of rustling leaves. 2.情感仿写 2.1 She stood there with a puzzled expression,as if she couldn't believe what she had just heard. 2.2 His eyes held a hidden anxiety,yet his voice remained calm and steady. 2.3 Just as the storm eventually clears,her deep sorrow gradually turned into quiet joy. 3.综合仿写（场景+情感+修辞） 3.1 The ancient stone path winds through the forest,with fragrant flowers on both sides.It feels as if time has stopped here,and every step brings a sense of peace,just like the way a good book soothes the soul. 3.2 In the misty morning,an old man sits by the rippling brook.His face shows the marks of time,but his eyes sparkle with calm determination,unlike those who rush through life without noticing the beauty around. 3.3 The cozy cottage stands at the foot of the hill,surrounded by vast wilderness.Just as the warm sunlight streams through the windows,the memories of childhood come flooding back,bringing a mix of happiness and nostalgia. A Peaceful Evening by the Stream As the golden sunset faded,the shimmering moonlight began to take its place.I walked along the quiet lane,surrounded by lush greenery.The rippling stream beside me reflected the starry sky above,creating a magical scene. I stopped and breathed deeply,feeling the warm contentment wash over me.The whispering wind carried the scent of flowers from the colorful garden nearby.In the distance,the misty mountains stood silently,like guardians of the night. I sat down on a stone by the stream and touched the water tenderly.It was cool and refreshing.For a moment,I forgot all my worries and just enjoyed the peaceful night.This was the kind of moment that brought overwhelming joy to my heart. 2 选择性必修3沪教版（上外版） 【写作专版】 D版写作好词好句 l.环境描写：使用了“golden sunset”、“shimmering moonlight”、“quiet lane”、“lush green- ery”、“rippling stream”、“starry sky”、“whispering wind”、“colorful garden”和“misty mountains”等好词。 2.情感表达：融入了“warm contentment'”和“overwhelming joy”来表达内心的感受。 3.动作描写：运用了“walked along”、“breathed deeply”、“sat down”和“touched tenderly”等 动作短语。 4.结构安排：先描写傍晚到夜晚的环境变化，再表达内心感受，最后描述具体动作，形成完整 的场景画面。 5.语言风格：模仿经典文学片段的细腻描写，注重营造氛围，让读者能够身临其境地感受这个 宁静的夜晚。 A Memorable Day in the_(place,e.g.mountains,garden,village) As the (time of day,e.g.golden sunset,shimmering moonlight)appeared,I walked along the -(scenery,e.g.quiet lane,old stone bridge),surrounded by(natural,e.g.lush greenery,ancient trees)).The_(natural景物，e.g.rippling stream,whispering wind)besideme_(动作，e.g.reflected the starry sky,brushed my face),creating a(feeling adj.,e.g.magical,peaceful)scene I stopped and_(动作，e.g.breathed deeply,walked gently),feeling the_(情感表达，e.g.warm con- tentment,heartfelt satisfaction)wash over me.The(natural,e.g.whispering wind,cheerful laughter)carried the_(sensation,e.g.scent of flowers,sound of music)from the._(建筑与场景，e.g: colorful garden,bustling marketplace)nearby.In the distance,the(natural,e.g.misty mountains, ancient castle)stood(,e.g.silently,like sleeping giants),adding to the beauty of the moment. I_(动作，e.g.sat down on a stone,touched the water tenderly)and_(动作，e.g.watched the rippling stream,listened to the whispering wind).It was-(feeling adj.,e.g.cool and refreshing,warm and comforting).For a moment,I forgot all my(negative noun,e.g.worries,sadness)and just enjoyed the(positive noun,e.g.peaceful night,joyful atmosphere).This was the kind of moment that brought (情感表达，e.g.overwhelming joy,.deep happiness)to my heart. 3