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模板1紧急救援：突发——自救——外援——脱困

［2026届湖北武汉8月开学考］Sean Royston and his long-time friend Tolin Annis had a tradition to head out for an expedition every other year.［行为伏笔］In 2016,they decided to kayak（划皮艇）along the shores of the Pictured Rocks National Lakeshore, a challenging route on Lake Superior.

On September 13, they loaded up on food and camping devices, climbed into their kayaks, and pushed off from a beach near the national park's headquarters.［求助伏笔］ They planned to return in a week. They moved through small waves and headed northeast. Soon the lake shore's trademark cliffs（悬崖）began to rise on their right. Away from the shore, the headwind grew to the forecasted 10 knots-and kept rising. Still, they never considered turning around.

They had been rowing maybe 90 minutes when, quite suddenly, the waves grew to two metres and it started to rain heavily. The wind rose to an intense 20 knots, putting them in danger of flipping over. "It went bad fast!" shouted Tolin, who was in the lead about 20metres ahead of Sean. Meanwhile, the wind pushed them closer to the cliff, where the waves became even steeper and rolled them into the water.

Sean managed to get back to his kayak, holding on to it for stability, and then paddled using his free hand. But he couldn't make any progress against the strong wind. "My arms are giving out." Sean thought to himself, "I got to call now." Using a VHF radio clipped to his life jacket, Sean called,“Mayday, two kayakers stuck." But the tall cliffs blocked the signal from reaching anyone. When he raised his head, his friend had disappeared from sight.［营救伏笔］Sean yelled to his friend at the top of his lungs, but there's no reply.

Sean struggled until the waves finally pushed him away from the shoreline and farther out in the lake. Exhausted, he floated on his back and considered his options. Sean decided to return upwind toward the beach where they had launched that morning. It was 5kilometres away. "I'm a swimmer," Sean talked himself into it and started kicking.［行为伏笔］

Para.1: Luckily, after about three hours, Sean saw the beach within reach.

Para.2: The rescue team headed out immediately for Tolin.

Step1细梳原文理线索

背景：Sean与多年好友Tolin乘皮艇沿苏必利尔湖的皮克彻罗克斯国家湖岸公园进行探险。

突发：两人划行约90分钟后，突遇风力骤升、两米巨浪的极端天气，皮艇陷入危险，两人被冲散。

自救：Sean 虽精疲力竭但仍思考对策，最终决定逆风返回5公里外的出发海滩。

外援：Sean游了约3小时后终于看到了那片海滩…

脱困：救援队伍立即出发寻找Tolin…

Step2连环发问巧构思

提示句1幸运的是，大约三个小时后，Sean终于看到了那片海滩就在眼前。

→问①Sean什么感觉？

→问②他如何找外援？

→问③外援什么反应？

提示句2救援队伍立即出发寻找Tolin

→问④ 救援队伍如何开展救援？

→问⑤Tolin被找到时的状态如何？

→问⑥二人重逢后的场景是怎样的？

模板高分续写：

Luckily, after about three hours, Sean saw the beach within reach. With his last strength, he pulled and kicked against the crashing waves, his lungs burning and limbs numb. Collapsing onto the sand, he was out of breath, but he knew the clock was ticking.答①“I must hurry up to save Tolin!" he muttered. Dragging his trembling feet, he headed toward the park headquarters, shouting,“One man is drowning along the cliff! Help！”答②Rangers heard him and rushed him inside for treatment, calling for the rescue team at the same time.答③

The rescue team headed out immediately for Tolin. A helicopter flew over the cliffs, its spotlight cutting through the rain.答④ Suddenly，a faint whistle echoed——Tolin hung on to a rock, waving his arm.答⑤A rescuer on a rope approached him carefully, and then pulled him up aboard, wrapping him in a blanket. Minutes later, they took Tolin back to the headquarters to reunite with his friend. Sean held Tolin

tight, tears streaming down his face. "Thank goodness you're fine,”Sean said, grasping his friend's shoulders. Tolin nodded, “Your bravery and determination saved us.”答⑥

Step3速用模板定情节

提示句1

→答①气喘吁吁，四肢麻木，瘫倒在沙滩上。

→答②他朝着公园总部走去，大声呼喊。

→答③护林员们把他带进屋里进行治疗，同时还呼叫了救援队伍。

提示句2

→答④ 派出了直升机开展搜救工作。

→答⑤Tolin抓住一块岩石，挥舞着手臂，发出微弱的哨声。

→答⑥最终两人相拥而泣，Tolin称赞Sean的勇敢和坚定救了他们。

词块模板：

［1]at the top of one's lungs 用尽某人全力 ［2]be out of breath 气喘吁吁

［3]drag one's trembling feet 某人拖着打颤的双腿

句式模板：

［1］多感官描写：With his last strength, he pulled and kicked against the crashing waves, his lungs burning and limbs numb.

【点评】通过 lungs burning、limbs numb的体感描写，搭配 crashing waves的听觉暗示，将Sean 耗尽体力的状态具象化，避免了抽象的“疲惫”表述，细节真实且有冲击力。

［2］多场景转换描写：A helicopter flew over the cliffs, its spotlight cutting through the rain．Suddenly, a faint whistle echoed-Tolin hung on to a rock, waving his arm.

【点评】前面以 helicopter flew、spotlight cutting through the rain 构建“救援直升机巡查”的远景画面，聚焦“空中救援力量”；后面用Suddenly转折，通过faint whistle echoed 引出听觉线索，再以破折号衔接“hung on to a rock”的近景特写，将镜头从空中切换到悬崖，快速聚焦被困者，让救援场景的“搜寻一发现”过程清晰具象。