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写作综训02:概要、翻译、作文套餐练(II)
(满分:50分,推荐用时:60分钟)
Summary Writing
Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
【来源】上海市徐汇区上海中学2025-2026学年高三上学期练习英语试题
Save the Sink
There are portents (凶兆) of a longer-term and faster decline of the land carbon sink. For instance, the global forest carbon sink has steadily declined since 2001, mainly due to deforestation. In 2023 and 2024, wildfires further reduced the forest sink to its lowest point in two decades, fuelling feedback cycles that accelerate climate change. “We’re seeing this happening right before our eyes and faster than we thought it would,” says Rose.
If the land carbon sink does vanish in the not-so-distant future, the consequences for climate action would be profound. Most countries depend on their sinks to meet emissions promises under the Paris Agreement that aims to keep long-term global warming to a 1.5℃ threshold. So, losing the sinks earlier than expected would mean emissions have to decline more rapidly elsewhere. In Europe, for instance, a sudden decline in the forest carbon sink over the past few years — a perfect storm of overharvesting in the aftermath of drought, heat and insect outbreaks — has put the bloc far off track to meet its 2030 emissions targets.
The good news is that there are effective ways to save the sink, or slow down its death. A climate ecologist says the most important steps are to protect, restore and manage ecosystems, in that order. If existing forests were left to grow undisturbed, a maximum potential uptake of 228 billion tonnes of carbon as they reach full maturity over decades — equivalent to about a third of our cumulative carbon emissions to date. Another 87 billion tonnes could be captured by restoring forests in places where they once grew.
Beyond this, better management of ecosystems could enhance the land carbon sink by several billion tonnes each year. This involves avoiding monster wildfires by conducting prescribed burns, rolling out climate-friendly farming practices like cover cropping, and more sustainable harvesting of trees. If we want to hold onto the unexpected gift of a land carbon sink then we must stop “removing the allies that we have”, says Zohner — and try to keep growth ahead of death just a little bit longer.
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【答案】
The land carbon sink is disappearing faster than expected because of deforestation and wildfires, which holds countries back from meeting the 1.5℃ Paris Agreement goal. However, effective protection, restoration and management measures, like wildfire prevention, eco-friendly agriculture, and sustainable harvesting, can enable the growth of sinks to outpace their death by greatly boosting current and future carbon absorption. (58 words)
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章阐述了陆地碳汇出现加速衰退的不良趋势及其可能给各国达成气候目标带来的严重影响,并提出了保护、恢复和管理生态系统等一系列挽救陆地碳汇的有效措施。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①The global forest carbon sink has steadily declined since 2001, mainly due to deforestation. In 2023 and 2024, wildfires further reduced the forest sink to its lowest point in two decades, fuelling feedback cycles that accelerate climate change.
②Most countries depend on their sinks to meet emissions promises under the Paris Agreement that aims to keep long-term global warming to a 1.5℃ threshold.
③A climate ecologist says the most important steps are to protect, restore and manage ecosystems.
④Beyond this, better management of ecosystems could enhance the land carbon sink by several billion tonnes each year. This involves avoiding monster wildfires by conducting prescribed burns, rolling out climate-friendly farming practices like cover cropping, and more sustainable harvesting of trees.
2.缜密构思
将要点①②整合,说明陆地碳汇的不良趋势及影响;将要点③④整合,介绍一系列挽救陆地碳汇的有效措施。
3.遣词造句
The land carbon sink is declining faster than expected due to deforestation and wildfires, which holds countries back from meeting the 1.5℃ Paris Agreement goal.
However, effective protection, restoration and management measures, like wildfire prevention, eco-friendly agriculture, and sustainable harvesting, can enable the growth of sinks to outpace their death.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The land carbon sink is disappearing faster than expected because of deforestation and wildfires, which holds countries back from meeting the 1.5℃ Paris Agreement goal. (使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,对一二段内容进行了简明扼要地概括)
【高分句型2】However, effective protection, restoration and management measures, like wildfire prevention, eco-friendly agriculture, and sustainable harvesting, can enable the growth of sinks to outpace their death by greatly boosting current and future carbon absorption. (使用了并列短语作主语,介词短语作插入语及方式状语等,对三四段内容进行整合概括)
Translation
Directions: Translate the following sentences into English, using the word given in the brackets.
1.虽然这款跑鞋新增了防水和减震两大卖点,但性价比仍然不高。(justify)
【来源】上海市徐汇区上海中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题
【答案】Although this type of running shoe has new selling points of water resistance and shock absorption, the price is still hard to justify.
【详解】考查让步状语从句、时态和动词用法。根据句意,该句描述这款跑鞋的客观属性,从句使用现在完成时表已经新增的状态,主句使用一般现在时表当前情况;表示“虽然这款跑鞋新增了防水和减震两大卖点”为让步状语从句,用连词Although引导,从句主语为this type of running shoe,为单数,“新增”用现在完成时has,“两大卖点”为new selling points,“防水和减震”为water resistance and shock absorption,作介词of的宾语,因此从句译为Although this type of running shoe has new selling points of water resistance and shock absorption;表示“性价比仍然不高”为主句,“性价比不高”用the price is still hard to justify表达,主语the price为单数,be动词用is,动词justify表示“证明……合理”,此处用不定式结构hard to justify作表语补足语,因此主句译为the price is still hard to justify。故翻译为Although this type of running shoe has new selling points of water resistance and shock absorption, the price is still hard to justify.
2.水果采摘让游客身心放松,也帮助果农增加了至少三分之二的销量,一举两得。(by)
【来源】2025 年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(上海卷)
【答案】Fruit picking helps tourists relax body and mind and boosts farmers’ sales by at least two-thirds, achieving two goals with one action / a win-win situation.
【详解】考查并列结构、固定短语及非谓语动词。主语“水果采摘”译为fruit picking,“让游客身心放松”译为help tourists relax body and mind,“帮助果农增加销量”译为boost farmers’ sales,boost与help并列作谓语,句子陈述一般性事实,用一般现在时,主语不可数,谓语动词用单数形式, “至少三分之二”译为by at least two-thirds,此处by表增加的幅度,“一举两得”译为achieve two goals with one action 或 a win-win situation,此处用现在分词短语achieving...作结果状语,表水果采摘带来的自然结果。故翻译为:Fruit picking helps tourists relax body and mind and boosts farmers’ sales by at least two-thirds, achieving two goals with one action / a win-win situation.
3.美术馆应是让人们静心欣赏艺术、陶冶情操的地方,如今却沦为喧闹的网红拍照打卡点。(reduce)
【来源】上海市徐汇区上海中学2025-2026学年高三上学期练习试题
【答案】A gallery should be a place for people to appreciate art in peace and cultivate their minds, but now it has been reduced to a noisy photo spot for online influencers/celebrities.
【详解】考查名词(短语)、动词(短语)、形容词和介词短语。主语“美术馆”可用名词a gallery,“应是”可用情态动词should和be动词搭配,表语“让人们做某事的地方”可用名词短语a place for people to do,其中不定式作后置定语,说明place的功能,“静心欣赏艺术”可用动词短语appreciate art in peace,“陶冶情操”可用动词短语cultivate their minds,两个动词短语之间用表并列关系的并列连词and连接;“却”可用表示转折的并列连词but,状语“如今”可用副词now,隐含的主语“它”用代词it,“沦为”可用动词短语reduce...to...的被动形式,且此处时态宜用现在完成时,表明过去的行为对现在的影响,“喧闹的拍照打卡点”可用名词短语a noisy photo spot,“网红”可用名词短语online influencers或online celebrities,用介词for引出对象。故可译为:A gallery should be a place for people to appreciate art in peace and cultivate their minds, but now it has been reduced to a noisy photo spot for online influencers/celebrities.
4.装饰一新的食堂宽敞明亮,还供应各地特色美食及品类丰富的套餐,令学生耳目一新,食欲大增。(leave)
【来源】上海市徐汇区上海中学2025-2026学年高三上学期练习试题
【答案】The newly decorated cafeteria is spacious and bright, offering a variety of regional specialties and diverse set meals, which leaves students with a refreshing experience and greatly increases their appetite.
【详解】考查非谓语动词和定语从句。表示“食堂”用cafeteria;表示“装饰”用decorate,与cafeteria为被动关系,用过去分词,作定语;表示“装饰一新的食堂”用The newly decorated cafeteria,作主语;本句描述一般事实,时态用一般现在时,be动词用is;表示“宽敞明亮”用spacious and bright,作表语;表示“还供应各地特色美食及品类丰富的套餐”用offer a variety of regional specialties and diverse set meals,用现在分词短语,作状语;用定语从句,修饰先行词cafeteria,关系词代替先行词在从句中作主语,用which引导;表示“令学生耳目一新,食欲大增”用leave students with a refreshing experience and greatly increases their appetite,主语which代替先行词cafeteria,谓语用第三人称单数leaves。故翻译为The newly decorated cafeteria is spacious and bright, offering a variety of regional specialties and diverse set meals, which leaves students with a refreshing experience and greatly increases their appetite.
Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
【来源】上海市行知中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题
假设你是明启中学的学生李宁,你正在一所英国高中游学,该校拟举办一个中英文化交流活动,名叫Cultural Workshop,介绍并现场演示中国美食、手工艺品或书法。你对这个活动很感兴趣,请你向组织者写一封申请信,信的内容包括:
(1)你想演示的项目及演示流程;
(2)你申请的理由。
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【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Ning, a student from Mingqi Middle School currently visiting your school. I am writing to apply to participate in the upcoming Cultural Workshop.
I would like to demonstrate the art of Chinese Paper Cutting. The process involves folding a piece of red paper into a triangle and then carefully cutting out intricate patterns using scissors. Finally, I will unfold the paper to reveal a beautiful symmetrical design, such as a Chinese zodiac animal.
I believe this activity is highly suitable. Firstly, it is interactive and visually stunning, allowing students to easily engage. Secondly, it represents the wisdom of traditional Chinese culture.
I hope to have the opportunity to share this unique skill.
Yours,
Li Ning
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向组织者写一封申请信,申请参加一个名叫Cultural Workshop的中英文化交流活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in→attend
相信:believe→hold the belief
智慧:wisdom→wit
惊人的:stunning→shocking
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:I believe this activity is highly suitable.
拓展句:I hold the belief that this activity is highly suitable.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I believe this activity is highly suitable.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Firstly, it is interactive and visually stunning, allowing students to easily engage.(运用了现在分词allowing作状语)
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写作综训02:概要、翻译、作文套餐练(II)
(满分:50分,推荐用时:60分钟)
Summary Writing
Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
【来源】上海市徐汇区上海中学2025-2026学年高三上学期练习英语试题
Save the Sink
There are portents (凶兆) of a longer-term and faster decline of the land carbon sink. For instance, the global forest carbon sink has steadily declined since 2001, mainly due to deforestation. In 2023 and 2024, wildfires further reduced the forest sink to its lowest point in two decades, fuelling feedback cycles that accelerate climate change. “We’re seeing this happening right before our eyes and faster than we thought it would,” says Rose.
If the land carbon sink does vanish in the not-so-distant future, the consequences for climate action would be profound. Most countries depend on their sinks to meet emissions promises under the Paris Agreement that aims to keep long-term global warming to a 1.5℃ threshold. So, losing the sinks earlier than expected would mean emissions have to decline more rapidly elsewhere. In Europe, for instance, a sudden decline in the forest carbon sink over the past few years — a perfect storm of overharvesting in the aftermath of drought, heat and insect outbreaks — has put the bloc far off track to meet its 2030 emissions targets.
The good news is that there are effective ways to save the sink, or slow down its death. A climate ecologist says the most important steps are to protect, restore and manage ecosystems, in that order. If existing forests were left to grow undisturbed, a maximum potential uptake of 228 billion tonnes of carbon as they reach full maturity over decades — equivalent to about a third of our cumulative carbon emissions to date. Another 87 billion tonnes could be captured by restoring forests in places where they once grew.
Beyond this, better management of ecosystems could enhance the land carbon sink by several billion tonnes each year. This involves avoiding monster wildfires by conducting prescribed burns, rolling out climate-friendly farming practices like cover cropping, and more sustainable harvesting of trees. If we want to hold onto the unexpected gift of a land carbon sink then we must stop “removing the allies that we have”, says Zohner — and try to keep growth ahead of death just a little bit longer.
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Translation
Directions: Translate the following sentences into English, using the word given in the brackets.
1.虽然这款跑鞋新增了防水和减震两大卖点,但性价比仍然不高。(justify)
【来源】上海市徐汇区上海中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题
2.水果采摘让游客身心放松,也帮助果农增加了至少三分之二的销量,一举两得。(by)
【来源】2025 年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(上海卷)
3.美术馆应是让人们静心欣赏艺术、陶冶情操的地方,如今却沦为喧闹的网红拍照打卡点。(reduce)
【来源】上海市徐汇区上海中学2025-2026学年高三上学期练习试题
4.装饰一新的食堂宽敞明亮,还供应各地特色美食及品类丰富的套餐,令学生耳目一新,食欲大增。(leave)
【来源】上海市徐汇区上海中学2025-2026学年高三上学期练习试题
Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
【来源】上海市行知中学2025-2026学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题
假设你是明启中学的学生李宁,你正在一所英国高中游学,该校拟举办一个中英文化交流活动,名叫Cultural Workshop,介绍并现场演示中国美食、手工艺品或书法。你对这个活动很感兴趣,请你向组织者写一封申请信,信的内容包括:
(1)你想演示的项目及演示流程;
(2)你申请的理由。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5 / 5
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