Unit5 作文：Changes in the neighbourhood 2025-2026学年冀教版英语七年级下册

冀教英语七下Unit5 作文 Changes in the neighbourhood 一、写作题目 Changes in the neighbourhood 二、写作目标 1. 紧扣教材Unit5“小区变化”核心任务，完成结构完整、贴合生活的短文，无超纲时态词汇。 2. 复用教材核心词汇句型，语言难度匹配初一下水平。 3. 熟练运用There be句型过去式/现在式，用一般过去时、一般现在时对比呈现小区变化。 4. 词数控制70-100词，涵盖引入话题、过去景象、现在变化、个人感受四大模块。 三、教材范文结构拆解 模块 教材范文原句 功能解析 内容拓展 引入话题 There are so many changes in my grandma’s neighbourhood. 开门见山点明主题，引出小区变化核心内容 Many things change in my neighbourhood. Let me tell you. 过去景象 There were no lifts in the past and the roads were narrow. 用There be过去式+一般过去时描述过去，为对比做铺垫 In the past, there were no lifts in the buildings. The roads were narrow and dirty, and there was no park. 现在变化 There are lifts in many old apartment buildings now. The roads are wider, too. 用There be现在式+一般现在时描述现在的改善，是写作核心 Now, there are lifts in most buildings. The roads are wide and clean. There is a new small park for kids to play. 个人感受 We are so happy with these changes. 表达对变化的积极感受，升华主题收尾 These changes are great. Our life is nice and convenient now. I love my neighbourhood very much. 四、写作分析 1. 时态运用 · 一般过去时+There be过去式：描述小区过去的景象，Unit5核心考查语法。 · 一般现在时+There be现在式：描述小区现在的样子，贴合初学基础时态。 全程无超纲时态，完全匹配已学内容。 2. 核心语法运用 · 过去式：There was no park，There were no lifts，注重主谓一致。 · 现在式：There is a new park，There are lifts，贴合教材原句用法。 · 句式搭配：与narrow/wide、dirty/clean连用描述事物特征，本单元写作必用。 3. 人称/句式运用 · 全程用第三人称客观描述，无复杂人称转换，符合初学要求。 · 句式以简单句、并列句为主，贴合教材句子结构，无复杂从句。 4. 结构思路 引入话题→过去的样子→现在的样子→个人感受，逻辑清晰，步骤简单，70-100词内可完整呈现。 五、写作模板 模块 句式模板 教材来源 引入话题 Many things change in my neighbourhood. Let me tell you. 教材原句改编 过去景象 In the past, there were no [复数名词]. The [事物] were [形容词]. There was no [单数名词]. 教材核心句型整合 现在变化 Now, there are [复数名词] in most buildings. The [事物] are [形容词]. There is a new [单数名词]. 教材核心句型拓展 个人感受 These changes are great. Our life is [形容词] now. I love my neighbourhood very much. 教材感受句改编 六、范文 英文范文 Many things change in my neighbourhood. Let me tell you. In the past, there were no lifts in the old buildings. The roads were narrow and dirty, and there was no park here. Now, there are lifts in most buildings. The roads are wide and clean. There is a new small park for kids to play. These changes are great. Our life is nice and convenient now. I love my neighbourhood very much. 中文翻译 我的小区里很多东西都变了，让我来跟你说说。 过去，老旧的楼里没有电梯，道路又窄又脏，这里也没有公园。现在，大多数楼里都有了电梯，道路变得宽阔又干净，还有一个供小朋友玩耍的新小公园。这些变化特别好，我们现在的生活又美好又方便，我非常喜欢我的小区。 七、核心素材 1. 好词 · 地点类：neighbourhood, building, road, park, lift · 形容词：narrow, wide, dirty, clean, old, new, small · 感受类：great, nice, convenient, love · 基础词汇：change, play, kid, life 2. 佳句 · Many things change in my neighbourhood. Let me tell you. · In the past, there were no lifts in the old buildings. The roads were narrow and dirty. · Now, there are lifts in most buildings. The roads are wide and clean. · These changes are great. Our life is nice now. I love my neighbourhood very much. 3. 谚语 · A neighbour is better than a distant relative. · Small changes make a big difference. 八、拓展练习 英文范文 Many things change in my hometown. Let me tell you. In the past, there were no tall buildings. The streets were narrow and full of small shops, and there was no big supermarket or cinema here. Now, there are many tall buildings and wide streets. There is a big new supermarket and a modern cinema near my home. These changes are great. Our life is happy and colourful now. I love my hometown very much. 中文翻译 我的家乡很多东西都变了，让我来跟你说说。 过去，这里没有高楼大厦，街道又窄又挤，全是小商铺，也没有大型超市和电影院。现在，这里有很多高楼和宽阔的街道，我家附近还有一个新的大超市和一座现代化的电影院。这些变化特别好，我们现在的生活幸福又多彩，我非常喜欢我的家乡。 ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $