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初三上册人教版
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E版满分范文及模板
寒假专版
【E版满分模板】谈论事物对人的情绪、行
为影响
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·人教版初三上册
满分范文
Hello,everyone.Today,I want to talk about how different things can affect our emotions and behaviors.
Music is a powerful thing that can change our feelings a lot.Listening to light music can make me feel
relaxed after a busy day.Rock music always makes Tom excited and he wants to dance.Sad music
sometimes makes me cry,but it also helps me release my feelings.
The environment around us can also influence our actions.A quiet library encourages students to read
carefully and think deeply.A dirty classroom may lead to students not wanting to keep it clean.Bright
colors in the room can make people more active and energetic.
Many other things can affect both our emotions and behaviors.Reading interesting books not only makes
me happy but also inspires me to write stories.Playing basketball with friends makes me excited,and we
always try our best to win the game.Bad weather like rain often makes me feel a little sad,so I usually
stay at home and watch movies.
In conclusion,things around us have a big influence on how we feel and act.We should learn to use good
things to improve our emotions and behaviors.
满分范文模板
The Influence of Things on People's Emotions and Behaviors
Hello,everyone.Today,I want to talk about how different things can affect our emotions and behaviors.
1.is a powerful thing that can change our feelings a lot.2.can make me feel 3.after a busy
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初三上册人教版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
day.4.always makes 5.6.and he/she wants to 7..8.sometimes makes me 9.,but it
also helps me 10.
11.around us can also influence our actions.A 12.-encourages people to 13..A 14.-may
lead to people not wanting to 15..16.can make people more 17..
Many other things can affect both our emotions and behaviors.18.not only makes me 19.but also
inspires me to 20..21.makes me 22.,and we always try our best to 23..24.often makes
me feel a little 25.,so I usually 26..
In conclusion,things around us have a big influence on how we feel and act.We should learn to use good
things to improve our emotions and behaviors.
【模板填写指南】
1.事物1(如:Music,Books)
2.具体表现1(如:Listening to light music,.Reading novels)
3.情绪1(如:relaxed,happy)
4.具体表现2(如:Rock music,.Science books)
5.他人(如:Tom,Lucy)
6.情绪2(如:excited,curious)
7.行为1(如:dance,explore)
8.具体表现3(如:Sad music,,Historical stories)
9.情绪3(如:cy,think deeply)
l0.行为2(如:release my feelings,learn lessons)
11.事物2(如:The environment,Weather)
12.环境特征1(如:quiet library,sunny park)
l3.行为3(如:read carefully,.exercise)
14.环境特征2(如:dirty classroom,noisy street))
15.行为4(如:keep it clear,stay long)
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l6.环境特征3(如:Bright colors in the room,Cold weather)
17.状态(如:active and energetic,calm and focused)
18.事物3(如:Reading books,Playing sports)
19.情绪4(如:happy,excited)
20.行为5(如:write stories,work hard)
2l.事物4(如:Playing basketball with friends,Chatting with family)
22.情绪5(如:excited,wam)
23.行为6(如:win the game,share feelings)
24.事物5(如:Bad weather like rain,Difficult tasks)
25.情绪6(如:sad,stressed
26.行为7(如:stay at home and watch movies,ask for help)
写作小贴士·避坑+提分
结构清晰:使用”总分-总”结构,首段引出话题,中间分段论述,结尾总结观点
例证具体:每个观点后提供具体事例(如音乐类型、环境场景)
连接自然:使用also,not only..but also,so等连接词增强逻辑性
情感表达:准确使用情绪词汇(relaxed,excited,,sad)和行为动词(encourages,leadsto,inspires)
句式多样:交替使用简单句和复合句,避免重复句型
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