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【E版满分范文】写物品归属的推测短文
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·教科社九上
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There are many lost items in the school lost and found office.Let's try to figure out who they might
belong to
Look at this red schoolbag.It might belong to Lucy because she likes red very much.The black pen can't
be Tom's.His pen is blue,which is different from this one.
What about the round wooden box?It could be Mary's.She has a similar one at home.This small plastic
notebook may be Lily's.She often uses small notebooks for taking notes.
The old watch must be Mr.Green's.He always wears an old watch to work.This useful umbrella can't
be Kate's.She forgot to take her umbrella today,so she couldn't have lost it here.The special key might
belong to Tony.He lost his key yesterday,and this one looks just like his.
It's interesting to guess the owners of these items based on their features.Maybe we can help return them
to their owners soon.
【满分范文逐段解析】
首段(场景引入):
用There are many lost items in..自然引出场景;
核心句型:Let's try to figure out who they might belong to.点明写作主题。
推测段落(物品归属):
使用night/can't/could/may/must等情态动词表达不同确信程度:
每项推测都提供具体依据(because she likes red/His pen is blue):
通过which is different from/looks just like等短语增强逻辑性。
结尾段落(总结升华):
用It's interesting to..总结推测过程;
结尾Maybe we can help return.体现人文关怀,提升立意。
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There are many lost items in the 1.(:school lost and found office,park information center).
Let's try to figure out who they might belong to.
Look at this2.(物品1特征:red schoolbag,.blue jacket).It might belong to3._(人物l:Lucy,
Mike)because4.(原因l:she likes red very much,he lost his jacket yesterday).The5._(物品
2特征:black pen,silver watch)can'tbe6.一(人物2:Tom,Amy)'s.7.(原因2:His pen is
blue,Her watch is gold),which is different from this one.
What about the8.(物品3特征:round wooden box,.square metal keychain)?It could be9.
(人物3:May,John)'s.He/She has a similar one at home..This10.(物品4特征:small plastic
notebook,big storybook)may be11.一(人物4:Lily,Sam)'s.He/She often uses12.(原因4:
small notebooks for taking notes,storybooks for reading).
The13.(物品5特征:old watch,new umbrella)must be14.(人物5:M.Green,Ms.White)'s.
He/She always15.(原因5:wears an old watch to work,carries a new umbrella).This16._(物
品6特征:useful umbrella,.special key)can'tbe17.一(人物6:Kate,Bob)'s.He/Shel8.一(原
6:forgot to take his/her umbrella today,found his/her key yesterday),so he/she couldn't have lost
it here.The19.一(物品7特征:special key,.purple scarf)might belong to20,(人物7:Tony,
Linda).He/She lost 21.(7:his/her key yesterday,her scarf last week),and this one looks just
like his/hers.
It's interesting to guess the owners of these items based on their features.Maybe we can help return them
to their owners soon.
【模板填写指南】
1.失物招领处地点(如:school lost and found office,park information center)
2.物品1外观特征(如:red schoolbag,.blue jacket)
3.物品1可能主人(如:Lucy,Mike)
4.推测依据1(如:she likes red,.he lost his jacket)
5.物品2外观特征(如:black pen,silver watch)
6.物品2不可能主人(如:Tom,Amy)
7.否定依据(如:His pen is blue,Her watch is gold)
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8.物品3外观特征(如:round wooden box,square keychain)
9.物品3可能主人(如:May,John)
10.物品4外观特征(如:small notebook,big storybook)
11.物品4可能主人(如:Lily,Sam)
12.使用习惯依据(如:uses small notebooks,reads storybooks)
13.物品5外观特征(如:old watch,new umbrella)
14.物品5确定主人(如:.Green,.Ms.White)
15.行为习惯依据(如:always wears,.carries)
16.物品6外观特征(如:useful umbrella,.special key)
17.物品6不可能主人(如:Kate,Bob)
l8.时间逻辑依据(如:forgot today,.found yesterday)
l9.物品7外观特征(如:special key,purple scarf)
20.物品7可能主人(如:Tony,Linda)
21.丢失时间依据(如:lost yesterday,lost last week)
高分亮点总结
情态动词分层:精准使用might/could/.may/cam't/must表达不同确信程度
逻辑衔接:通过because/which/so等连词建立因果关系
细节描写:对物品特征(ed/round wooden/small plastic)进行具体描述
时态统一:全文保持一般现在时,符合推测类写作规范
结构完整:场景引入一分层推测→总结升华的三段式结构
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写作小贴士·避坑+提分
情态选择:低把握用might/could,中把握用may,高把握用mmst/can't
特征描写:每个物品需包含1-2个特征词(颜色/材质/形状/新旧)
依据充分:每个推测必须附带具体原因(喜好1习惯时间证据)
避免绝对:除非l00%确定,否则不用must be或can'tbe
结尾升华:补充help return等体现社会责任感的表达