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满分范文
Hello,everyone.I want to talk about small actions we can take to protect the environment.Protecting
the environment is everyone's duty.Small actions can make a big difference.
First,we should reduce waste in daily life.We can reduce waste by using both sides of the paper.It'
s important to sort garbage into different bins every day.My family always uses reusable bags when
shopping to stop plastic pollution.We should also avoid single-use plastics as much as possible.
Second,saving resources is necessary.We need to save water now to help ensure there is enough for
future generations.Let's turn off the lights when leaving a room.Saving energy is easy and helpful for
our planet.Remember to save electricity in this way.
Third,we can take some eco-friendly transportation.I often ride my bike to school instead of taking a car.
It's good for the environment and my health.Taking public transport is also a good choice.Additionally,
we can plant trees to make the air fresher.
These small steps,like recycling plastic bottles and paper,can help reduce pollution.If we all do these
small things,we will have a cleaner environment and a greener world.Let's start now to protect the
earth.
【满分范文逐段解析】
第一段(住题引入):
开篇用Hello,.everyone..直接点明演讲场景;
核心观点:Small actions can make a big difference,.强调个人行动的重要性;
使用Protecting the environment is everyone's duty.增强责任感。
第二段(减少浪费):
具体行动:using both sides of the paper/sort garbage/use reusable bags;
关键表达:avoid single-use plastics as much as possible体现环保意识;
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家庭案例:My family always..增强说服力。
第三段(节约资源):
时间维度:for future generations强调长远影响;
实用建议:turn off the lights简单易行的节能方法;
双重益处:helpful for our planet点明生态价值。
第四段(绿色出行):
健康关联:good for...my health突出额外收益;
替代方案:public transport/plant trees提供多元选择;
动词丰富:ride/taking/plant避免重复表达。
结尾段(呼吁行动):
举例强化:like recycling plastic bottles and paper具体可操作;
未来展望:cleaner environment and a greener world描绘积极图景;
行动号召:Let's start now简洁有力的结束语。
满分范文模板
Hello,everyone.I want to talk about small actions we can take to protect the environment.Protecting
the environment is everyone's duty.Small actions can make a big difference.
First,,we should reduce waste in daily life.We can reduce waste by 1._(具体做法:using both sides
of the paper,.bringing reusable containers for takeout).It's important to2._(具体做法:sort garbage
into different bins every day,avoid buying over-packaged products).My family always 3.(
uses reusable bags when shopping,saves leftover food in the fridge)to stop plastic pollution/waste.
We should also avoid4._(避免行为:single-use plastics,disposable chopsticks)as much as possible.
Second,saving resources is necessary.We need to save water now to help ensure there is enough for
future generations.Let's5._(节水做法:turn off the tap when brushing teeth,reuse water for plants).
Saving energy is easy and helpful for our planet..Remember to6,_(节能做法:turn off the lights when
leaving a room,use energy-saving appliances).
Third,we can take some eco-friendly transportation.I often7,_(个人交通方式:ride my bike to
school,walk to the supermarket)instead of taking a car.It's good for the environment and my health.
Taking public transport is also a good choice.Additionally,we can&._(其他环保行为:plant trees,.
join environmental activities)to make the air fresher/protect wildlife.
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These small steps,like 9.(:recycling plastic bottles and paper,turning off the air conditioner
when not needed),can help reduce pollution.If we all do these small things,we will have a cleaner
environment and a greener world.Let's start now to protect the earth.
【模板填写指南】
l.减少浪费的具体方法(如:using both sides of paper)
2.日常环保行为(如:sorting garbage daily)
3.家庭环保实践(如:using reusable shopping bags)
4.应避免的污染行为(如:single-use plastics)
5.节水措施(如:turning off taps when not in use)
6.节能习惯(如:switching off unused lights)
7.绿色出行方式(如:cycling to school)
8.其他环保行动(如:participating in tree planting)
9.环保生活实例(如:recycling plastic bottles)
填写示例:
1.using both sides of paper 2.sorting garbage daily 3.uses reusable bags
4.disposable products 5.reuse bath water for plants 6.unplug chargers
7.walk to nearby places 8.join beach cleanups 9.using cloth shopping bags
高分亮点总结
结构清晰:三段式框架(减少浪费→节约资源→绿色出行)+总结呼吁,逻辑严密
实用表达:使用actionable phrases(turn off lights/sort garbage/use reusable bags)
多元视角:涵盖个人行动(I often..)、家庭实践(My family..)、社会建议(we should..)
环保术语:准确运用eco-friendly/single-use plastics/recycling等核心词汇
情感共鸣:结尾段用cleaner environment/greener world激发行动意愿
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写作小贴士·避坑指南
避免空泛:每个观点需配具体事例(如不说”save water'”而说”turn off taps while brushing'”)
时态统一:描述常规环保行动坚持使用一般现在时
术语准确:区分recyclable(可回收)/reusable(可重复使用)/biodegradable(可降解)
逻辑连接:用First/Second/Third分段,Additionally/Moreover补充观,点
数据增信:可添加"recycling one ton of paper saves17 trees”等事实
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