Unit 7 写健康问题及建议-2025-2026学年七年级下册英语写作满分范文及模板（教科版）

七下教科社 【写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 写作专版 【E版满分范文】健康问题及建议(U7) 写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·教科社七下 满分范文 Nowadays,many people have health problems because of bad living habits.For example,my classmate Tom often stays up late to play computer games,so he always has a headache in the morning.My sister eats too much junk food every day,and she often has a stomachache.I also had a cold last week because I didn't wear warm clothes. To stay healthy,we should follow some good advice.First,we should eat more vegetables and fruits and avoid junk food.Second,we need to get enough sleep and not stay up late.Third,doing more exercise is important,like taking a walk after dinner or playing basketball with friends.If we have a fever or a sore throat,we should see a doctor and take some medicine. Let's try to have healthy habits and stay away from health problems. 【满分范文逐段解析】 第一段（健康问题描述）： 开篇点题：Nowadays,,many people have health problems because of..直接说明健康问题根源； 举例结构：For example,,often,so./.every day,and…清晰展示因果关系： 个人经历：I also had.because..增加真实性和说服力。 第二段（健康建议）： 建议框架：First,.we should,/Second,we need to../Third,.is important层次分明； 具体实例：like taking a walk.…or playing basketbal.让建议更具体可行； 特殊情况处理：If we have.,we should..展示全面思考。 第三段（总结呼吁）： 行动号召：Let's try to…and stay away from..简洁有力，呼应主题。 七下教科社 【写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 满分范文模板（健康问题及建议) Nowadays,many people have health problems because of bad living habits.For example,1.often 2. -so 3.-.4.-5.every day,and 6..I also 7.because 8.. To stay healthy,we should follow some good advice.First,we should 9.and avoid 10..Second, we need to 11.and not 12..Third,13.is important,like 14.or 15..If we 16.,we should 17.and 18.. Let's try to have healthy habits and stay away from health problems. 【模板填写指南】 l.人物1（如：my brother/my friend) 2.不良习惯l(如：eats too much candy/watches TV for hours) 3.结果1（如：he has a toothache/she gets headaches) 4.人物2（如：my father/my classmate) 5.不良习惯2（如：smokes/never exercises) 6.结果2（如：he coughs a lot./she feels tired) 7.自己的健康问题（如：had a fever/got sunburned) 8.原因（如：I played in the sun too long/I forgot my umbrella) 9.建议1（如：drink more water/wash hands often) l0.避免的行为1（如：sugary drinks/touching face with dirty hands) 1l.建议2（如：go to bed early/take regular breaks) l2.避免的行为2（如：using phones before sleep/sitting too long) I3.建议3（如：doing sports/eating balanced meals) 14.例子1（如：playing badminton/having breakfast) 15.例子2（如：swimming/including vegetables) 2 七下教科社 【写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 16.特殊情况（如：have a high temperature/feel dizzy) l7.做法1（如：rest at home/tell an adult) 18.做法2（如：drink warm water/see a doctor) 填写示例： 1.my cousin 2.skips breakfast 3.he feels weak 4.My neighbor 5.drinks coffee late 6.she can't sleep 7.hurt my ankle 8.I ran too fast 9.wear masks 10.crowded places 11.keep clean 12.share towels 13.relaxing 14.listening to music 15.reading books 16.feel stressed 17.take deep breaths 18.talk to friends 高分亮点总结 结构清晰：问题-原因-建议三段式，逻辑连贯 例证丰富：使用具体人物事例(Tom/sister)增强说服力 建议实用：分点列出可操作建议(First/Second/.Third) 句式多样：灵活运用因果句(so/because)、条件句(If.)等复合结构 词汇准确：正确使用健康术语(headache/stomachache/sore throat) 写作小贴士·避坑+提分 时态统一：描述现状用一般现在时，个人经历用一般过去时 避免绝对化：用often/usually替代always/.never更准确 连接词升级：用Furthermore/Moreover替代重复的Aso 建议具体化：避免do exercise,改用play basketball for30 minutes 健康术语：准确区分headache(头痛)和stomachache(胃痛)