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初一上册译林牛津版
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【E版满分范文】日常饮食习惯与饮食偏好
写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·译林牛津版初一上册
满分范文
Hello,everyone.My name is Amy.Today,I want to talk about my daily eating habits and food prefer-
ences.
I usually have breakfast at 7:00 in the morning.My breakfast often includes milk and bread,and some-
times I drink orange juice.For lunch,I always eat rice with vegetables like broccoli and spinach,and I
often have some chicken or fish.In the evening,my mother cooks delicious food for us.We usually have
noodles or dumplings for dinner,and we always eat fresh vegetables.
I like eating fruits very much.My favorite fruit is apple,but I dislike bananas.My favorite food is noodles
because they are very tasty.I prefer milk to coffee,and I enjoy eating fresh and nutritious vegetables every
day.I seldom eat fast food like hamburgers or pizza because eating too much fast food is bad for our
health.I never eat snacks between meals.
It's important to have healthy eating habits.We should eat more vegetables and fruit.I think my eating
habits are good,and I will keep them forever.
满分范文模板
Hello,everyone.My name is 1..Today,I want to talk about my daily eating habits and food prefer-
ences
I usually have breakfast at 2.in the morning.My breakfast often includes 3.-and 4.,and
sometimes I drink 5.For lunch,I always eat 6.with vegetables like 7.and 8.,and I often
have some 9.or 10..In the evening,my mother cooks delicious food for us.We usually have 11.
-or 12.for dinner,and we always eat fresh vegetables.
I like eating fruits very much.My favorite fruit is 13.,but I dislike 14.My favorite food is 15.
because they are very tasty.I prefer 16.to 17.,and I enjoy eating fresh and nutritious vegetables
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初一上册译林牛津版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
every day.I seldom eat fast food like 18.or 19.because eating too much fast food is bad for our
health.I never eat snacks between meals.
It's important to have healthy eating habits.We should eat more vegetables and fruit.I think my eating
habits are good,and I will keep them forever.
【模板填写指南】
1.你的名字(如:LiMing/Zhang Hua)
2.早餐时间(如:7:00/7:30)
3.早餐食物1(如:milk/eggs)
4.早餐食物2(如:bread/porridge)
5.早餐饮料(如:orange juice/nilk)
6.午餐主食(如:ice/noodles)
7.午餐蔬菜1(如:broccoli/carrots)
8.午餐蔬菜2(如:spinach/cabbage)
9.午餐肉类1(如:chicken/beef)
10.午餐肉类2(如:fish/pork)
11.晚餐食物1(如:noodles/rice)
12.晚餐食物2((如:dumplings/soup)
13.最喜欢的水果(如:apple/banana)
14.不喜欢的水果(如:banana/mang0)
15.最喜欢的食物(如:noodles/pizza)
16.偏好的饮料(如:milk/tea)
17.不喜欢的饮料(如:coffee/soda)
18.快餐类型1(如:hamburgers/fried chicken)
19.快餐类型2(如:pizza/hot dogs)
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初一上册译林牛津版
【寒假专版】
E版满分范文及模板
填写示例:
1.Li Ming 2.7:00 3.milk 4.bread 5.orange juice
6.rice 7.broccoli 8.spinach 9.chicken 10.fish
11.noodles 12.dumplings 13.apple 14.banana
15.noodles
16.milk 17.coffee 18.hamburgers 19.pizza
高分亮点总结
结构清晰:三段式结构(总起→日常饮食→偏好总结),逻辑连贯
时间顺序:按早餐→午餐→晚餐顺序描述,条理分明
词汇丰富:使用多样化食物词汇(broccoli,spinach,dumplings)和程度副词(usually,.often,.sel-
dom,never)
对比表达:熟练运用prefer.to.和1ike.but dislike..等对比结构
健康理念:结尾强调健康饮食理念,提升主题深度
写作小贴士·避坑+提分
时间表达:使用at+具体时间(at7:00),避免错误介词
食物分类:区分可数/不可数名词(milk不可数,apples可数)
频率副词:正确排序:always>usually>often>sometimes>seldom>never
偏好表达:prefer A to B(非than),like/enjoy+V-ing
健康建议:使用should+动词原形提出建议(should eat more..)
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