话题 6 介绍自己喜欢的运动及原因-2025-2026学年七年级上册英语满分范文及模板（译林版）

初一上册译林牛津版 【写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 写作专版 【卫版满分模板】介绍自己喜欢的运动及原 因 写作提分攻略+范文深度解析·译林牛津版初一上册 满分范文 Hello,everyone.My name is Li Ming.My favorite sport is swimming.I often go swimming with my brother after school. I like swimming very much because it is relaxing and healthy.Swimming is good exercise.It makes me strong and gives me a lot of energy.When I swim,I feel happy and forget all my worries. I am good at swimming.I usually swim for an hour every Saturday morning in the swimming pool near my home.It is not only fun but also helps me keep healthy. Swimming is my favorite hobby.I will keep swimming and enjoy it forever. 【满分范文逐段解析】 第一段（基础介绍）： 开篇用Helo,everyone.自然引出主题： 核心句型：Mly favorite sport is../I often go...with.,清晰点明运动项目及同伴： 姓名和运动名称具体明确，增强真实感。 第二段（原因阐述）： 用because连接词明确表达原因，形容词(relaxing/healthy)准确： 好处描写：makes me strong/gives me energy/feel happy多角度展示运动价值； 情感表达：forget all my worries生动体现运动带来的心理益处。 第三段（习惯描述）： 时间地点具体：every Saturday morning/swimming pool near my home: 时长明确：for an hour体现规律性； 双重好处：not only fun but also helps me keep healthy强化主题。 初一上册译林牛津版 【写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 第四段（总结升华）： 用favorite hobby呼应开头： 未来承诺：I will keep..and enjoy it forever表达持久热爱，情感真挚。 满分范文模板 My Favorite Sport Hello,everyone.My name is 1. My favorite sport is 2. _I often go 3. with 4. after school. I like 5. very much because it is 6. and 7. .8 is good exercise. It makes me 9. and gives me a lot of 10. When I 11. I feel 12. and forget all my worries. I am good at 13. I usually 14. for 15. every 16. in the 17. near my home.It is not only fun but also helps me keep healthy. 18. is my favorite hobby.I will keep 19. and enjoy it forever 【模板填写指南】 1.你的姓名（如：LiMing/Wang Fang) 2.最喜欢的运动名称（如：swimming/basketball) 3.运动动词（如：swimming/playing basketball) 4.一起运动的人（如：my brother/my friends). 5.运动名称（与2一致） 6.喜欢的原因1（如：relaxing/exciting) 7.喜欢的原因2（如：healthy/fiun) 8.运动名称（与2一致） 9.运动带来的效果1（如：strong/energetic) 初一上册译林牛津版 【写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 l0.运动带来的效果2（如：energy/confidence) 11.运动动词（与3一致） l2.运动时的感受（如：happy/relaxed) 13.运动名称（与2一致） 14.运动动词（与3一致） 15.运动时长（如：an hour/half an hour) l6.运动时间（如：Saturday morning/Sunday afternoon) 17.运动地点（如：swimming pool/prk) 18.运动名称（与2一致） 19.运动动词（与3一致） 填写示例： 1.Li Ming 2.swimming 3.swimming 4.my brother 5.swimming 6.relaxing 7.healthy 8.Swimming 9.strong 10.energy 11.swim 12.happy 13.swimming 14.swim 15.an hour 16.Saturday morning 17.swimming pool 18.Swimming 19.swimming 高分亮点总结 结构清晰：四段式（介绍→原因→习惯→总结），逻辑连贯，符合写作要求： 词汇丰富：使用精准形容词(relaxing/healthy/strong)和动词短语(gives energy/keep healthy): 句型多样：运用because原因状语、When I..时间状语等复合句型： 细节具体：明确的时间(Saturday morning)、时长(an hour)、地点(swimming pool): 情感真挚：结尾enjoy it forever自然表达持久热爱，提升感染力。 3 初一上册译林牛津版 【写作专版】 E版满分范文及模板 写作小贴士·运动主题 原因具体化：避免只说I like it”,补充because it makes me.的具体效果； 习惯描写：加入频率(usually)、时长(for an hour)、地点(near my home)等细节： 情感表达：用feel ha即py/forget worries等短语体现运动带来的心理益处： 动词准确：go swimming/play basketball等搭配要符合运动类型； 时态统一：全程使用一般现在时描述习惯和感受。